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Originally posted by: rsusmita

Kya twist hai
Loved it
Now waiting for maan to meet Geet

Originally posted by: Susegad

Uhm Umh!!!

Tak tak!!! Malkin bai ghar pe hai kya?😆

Hum aivayi forum pe bhatking kar rahe the ki humari nazar iss kahani pe padi. Socha chalo dekhte hai ki akhir humari Rashmi ne likha kya hai.

So I read the prologue. It piqued my curiosity. I was like hmm this sounds good.

Phir first chapter padha. Pata hi ni chala grin karte karte kab chapter khatam ho gaya.

I read about Geet ki Maan ke upar dadagiri and I knew she was my kind of girl😆

Phir dusra chapter padha. Phir unki nok jhok pe has padi. Their growing years were portrayed very simply and beautifully by you I thought. By now I had gotten comfortable with this story and my thinking was complacent. Soch rahi thi ki chalo ab yeh dono kisi tarah dosti pe utar aayenge, phir pyaar ho jayega. I was looking forward to reading that...AND THEN BANG!!!!!

I READ THE THIRD CHAPTER😲😲😲

I was like nah Maan will realize he is in love with her, her will stop it in time...xyz. But she was already married.

I wanted to stop reading... I swear I did...but damn you Hashmi( after the stunt you pulled tumhe Hashmi bulaan jayaz hai) I was already hooked to the story😆

Rashmi you have written something par excellence. I am glad you did not go the usual route. I am hooked line and sinker to Yaariyan and want to see how yo develop it.😃😃

Originally posted by: Susegad

BTW it was Laxmi's peek-a-boo banner that drew me in😆

Originally posted by: gurtimuskaan

so much happened in one update.. geet got married even when she wasn't ready.. n went to new Jersey.. maan is happy to get rid of blackmailer geet..
n now geet is becoming mother.
but she seems sad what has happened to her?

Originally posted by: ammu5

my god ye kya tha Rashmi...still m in shock...

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

😲 😲

Haila

ye kaun aaya raushan ho gayi mahfil jiske naam se

mere ghar me jaise suraj nikla hai sham se😳😳

tum kahaan se tapki yahaan😆

but seriously

I m so so so happy ti see you on my thread..

i m feeling honoured😳😳

aage bhi bhatakta bhatakte aajana mere iss nannhe munne thread par😆

Thanks a lot Nisha

I m really happy that you liked it

kya byaar

tumne jaisa socha waisa to har story me hota hai... ye wali zara hat ke hai😆

STUNT??

maine kab kiya?

wo to shuru se hi aise socha tha.. sabko bola tha na ki shock milega..par hum Maaneet fan kahaan sochte hain ki aisa kuchh ho unki life me..jab reader hote hain to jadi se jaldi Maaneet chhaiye

aur jab writer hoite hain to twists le aate hain unke beech.. story ko aage badhana bhi to hota hai na..

Hashmi??? Phir se??

Not done..

anyways aaj main tumhara naam nahin bigaadungi

pahli baar aayi na as a readerto pahli galati to kanoon bhi maaf karta hai

next time nahin chhoudungi😆😆

Thanks onece again Nisha nad welcome on yaariyaan😳

Originally posted by: Monikaarora

very nice part dear ...but ye kya geet got married to that dev and going to become a mother soon ..
maan seems very happy to get rid of geet ...lets see kya hota h ab ..

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