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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: jasika08
Nice update
Waiting for next update.

thnx for reading...

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

Maan still confused with his feelings... Hope he made his mind before dadi got well... He is jealous of his friends n now new man... But how she will understand...

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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Nice part
Maan confused with his feelings n moreover hurt with Geet silent treatment n her ignorance
Who's calling Geet . Is she in trouble
Maan questioning her abt man.. his dout or real concern towards her
Waiting for next update

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Glad he is realizing his feelings but oh oh, he again messed up! Whts this ending now? Waiting waiting

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#415

hi there! hope ur exams was fine! thanks 4 da pm n stupendous update, well written. Maan sees Geet pack n assumes she is leaving! he is shocked n questions her n her answers makes him relieved! every time she mentions she will b leaving soon, Maan is sad! Maan needs 2 decide wt he wants! he is falling 4 Geet! he wants her around n her ignorance n absence kills him! Maan confronts Geet abt the guy he saw her in the restaurant with! wt is Geet hiding? y was she scared wen she saw who is calling her on her phone?

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#416

Wow he is bugged out by if geet leaves his world will turn upside down, but he is realizing he wants her but is also hurting her as always. the reminder of her being here for dadi is like of course gonna pinch her hearts! So he has been stalking her? how he know it was a guy?

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
updated
surprise surprise !!!! updated so sooon ...l am so good 😆
exam overrr
Sanju di see apne kaha aur maine dediya ... 😊
enjoy guys...

Tuh kitniii good hai...Mujhse accha koun jantha hai...
Thanks for update

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#418

Chotuuu sah part hai sabi...
Well I enjoyed how frustrated maan is...
He is bothered about geet silent treatment...
Toh kya maan babu aap zeenat koh ghar lavoge aur aap expect karoge geet should talk with u...And behave normal...
I didn't see a confused person more than maan...He still couldn't figure out why he didn't want geet to leave him when once upon a tym..That was what he desperately needed.
Well well geet met a man in restaurant and maan babu spying on her...
Humari geet ,maan todi hai jo affair karegi after marriage ya apni pics dalegi media ,,,,yeh toh sirf maan karsakta hai...
I doubt that person is a broker r something going to help geet to get a home for her...

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

itni nafrat! itni nafrat!! itni nafrat!!!
Meri exam ki kasam aapki khawish puri hogi... 😆
😉

Exam khi kasam!!!!!
Yeh kounsi kasam hai byi

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#420

Nice update dear

Loved it!!

Maan is really bewildered person with chaotic thoughts

His confused personality is pushing Geet to the edge and the way he tries to suppress his thoughts are adding to geet's insecurities and uncertainty in their relationship

He was desperately missing geet's presence and talk that he felt miserable but he won't acknowledge his feelings towards her

He saw geet with a man and questioned her abt it !! Lookslike maan is insecure now

Thanks for the pm dear

Will be waiting for the next update