A NEW SS OF MANAN... THE VOICE OF MY HEART

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: picashu971

HI GUYS!!!!!! 😉
WELL, IM NOT NEW TO THE FORUM BUT NOT OLD AS WELL...KINDA MIDDLE ONE MAYBE?😛
THIS IS MY VERY FIRST ATTEMPT ON MANAN (ACTUALLY IN ANY CHARACTER)... SO I WONT KEEP MY HOPES HIGH BY SAYING U WOULD LOVE IT..BUT I HOPE U WONT GET BORED OF IT...SO HERE IT IS...😃😃😃

WAIT WAIT WAIT... IT WONT BE FAIR IF IDIDNT INTRODUCE MYSELF... IM "t"...YEAH MY USERNAME DOES SOUND WEIRD...ISN'T IT?.⭐️⭐️... BUT IF U GUYS WANT TO COMMENT THEN CALL ME t...OK OK NO MORE BORING STUFF...SO FINALLY

PROLOGUE

Cabir please... I don't want to talk about anything related to him... says Nandhini standing in her cabin facing her back to Cabir

u have to listen it Nandhini! Tumhe milnekeliye hum sap kitna koshish ki tujhe pta bhi hai? 5 saal hogai aur aptak tum hamari baat sunnekeliye tayaar bhi nehi hai!

What should I listen? Yehi ki vo mere saath vo sap kyu kiya? If u r here to tell me all the crap that I have avoided these years... then please that is your way.. she shows the door to him..n call her PA.. what the hell u guys r doing. Maine clearly kehethiya na ki meri India aaneka plan kisiko bhi kabhar nehi honi chahi hai..then?

Tumhari arrival ki bareme jaanekeliye we don't need your PA's help...mere yaar ki dadkan kaafi hai... Cabir says sadly smiling

Nandhini smiles sacratically n say ooohhh... tere yaar...that Manik Malhotra..right? abhibhi zinda hai?.. she asks but only she knows how much of pain she hide in the mask of hatred... she still loves him but not more than her hatred towards him... because he ruined it all by himself

Nandhini bas!!!!! Bohot hogaya... U by yourself know ki if Manik was wrong main aaj iyeha nehi hota..tum kisi aur ki galti ka saza usko math do... finally Cabir who talked toughly all the while slumped in the chair behind him...he looked so defeated that Nandhini feel sympathy toward him... but just for few seconds before she wear her mask of stern face again.

Kisi aur ki galti????? Wake up Cabir.. uski vajase mujhe apni desh se nafrat hua...tum sap...jo mereliye doosre family thi ..tum sapko chodke jaana pada... meri maa...vo aac bhi mujhse baat nehi karthi...yeh sap uski vajase hua.. I have lost my passion because of him... ab bta usne kya koya?? I'm sure abhitak to vo apni sare ambitions puri karthi hogi...

Cabir look at her surprised and ask kya tumhe bilkul bhi pta nehi ki Manik ke saath kya hua? Didn't u try to find vo ab kese haal main hai?

Why would I? Nandhini ask turning her face away from him...but somewhere she is scared what does Cabir meant ? Manik ko kya hua?

Without asking Cabir understood her question... vo apna sap kuch kothiya Nandhini... Sap kuch... jis dhin tum iss desh se gayi... ussi dhin vo hum sapse door hogaya

Nandhini holds her table tightly until her knuckles turns white... waiting for Cabir's revelation... silently praying that Manik is fine... (pyaar chupnese todina chupta...par guys I tell u...ladkiya bohot difficult hoti hai...they can hate the person who they love)

He lost his life...love aur...he lost his VOICE.. and Cabir fall on his knees before Navya can catch him...n cry for his yaar in Navya's arms..

Nandhini stood like a statue n after Cabir calmed down he waited for Nandini's reaction... 1 hour...2 hour...3 hour... n finally she asked Manik kaha hai?

OK GUYS DON'T KILL ME FOR MANIK'S VOICE..OBVIOUSLY USKE SONG KE BINA KAHANI CHALEGI KESE... BUT FOR NOW LET IT BE LIKE THIS...( HAR WAQT MANIK HI DEVIL NEHI HOTA..KABHI KABHI NANDHINI BHI EVIL HOSAKTI HAI...SO JUST TO SHOW HOW A MAN CAN GO TO ANY LIMIT TO JUST BE WITH HIS LOVE...E VEN IF IT MEANS TAT HE HAS TO LOOSE HIS OWNSELF...😭😭

updates wont be regular but agar acchi si response mili to i will try my best to post as soon as possible...tq for reading n now kindly tell me what u think n what u expect...all the best to myself😃😃😃


I think u should get lost from this forum.. This is meant only for geet fans
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roksar

I think u should get lost from this forum.. This is meant only for geet fans



How rude! The person is obviously on the wrong forum so there is no need to be so nasty.

And really? You needed to create a new account just to tell someone innocent off? Wow, so not impressed. 🥱

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