Chura Liya Hai - reposted * epi pg 156 - Page 119

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my god Avi..
I so love you after reading this 🤗
Mind Blowing Epilogue.. Really a unique SR of this Unique couple Moti and Ullu
Love this.. still in their dreamland
Bulldog Khurana changed into Love sick chotu save puppy 😃 😆
Geet once again did blunder but got a hot shot 😆 😳
Oh my god I was laughing so hard, another disease 😆 😆
I'm so glad Maan handled it in his Bulldog style.. and made her His 😉 😳
Oh mummy I will miss this story 🤢 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb epilogue!!
Hhahaha..Geet thought that Maan is weak in 'IT'😲🤣
And she referred many book and found solution for it too🤣
And finally Maaneet married
Aww..nupur aur Mayank dono bhi aagaye🥳
Loved this story very much!!
Thanks for reposting it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
fab banner! I have read this FF before n when u reposted. Pls send pwd n link 2 epilogue! thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

And yet again, i cud do nothing but sigh!!
moti and ullu... finally one!!
and she was not thinking of England, Delhi, Agra or Manali🤣
an awesome finish Avi... the blue pill problem??
next time geet will think twice before even dreaming of IT.
things must be going "up" these days without warning🤣



😆 Did you count how many times things were hard? 😆
It was written and then ripped and then written and then I still had doubts.
Perhaps the longest epi I wrote because of how unique these two are 😃
Glad you enjoyed it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

I went from belly laughs to belly swoops from the moment the chapter started to the end of it.

One moment I was screeching like a hyena that could be heard from England to Delhi😆
And the next mybreath caught in my throat as I became a part of their intimate world.😳😳

I don't know why but for once it almost made me feel like I was intruding on this couple's most intense private moment. I almost felt like a voyeur for once and I have never ever gotten the feeling .

I have always associated fun and masti and hilarity withthis story, along with the most adorable and silly bulldogishhero.
And Geet's thought process was right on par for her usual scientific thought process...blue pill and all😆
But the way you turned the tables and the way it went from hilarity to breathless intoxication was just fantastic.👏

So very very glad you wrote this epilogue Avi.

'IT' was definitely worth the wait, but I am also sad that it has ended...Coz as far as Chura Liya, Maan and Geet are concerned, I am always'UP' fro more😆😆

🤗



Thanks Nisha 😃 It was quite HARD to write it but I kept it UP 😆

@bold: 😲 are you saying this after reading The Locket? Now that was 😳

This was for once Avi having pity on Maan and letting him fulfill his fantasies 😆 while Ms Geet found yet another disease in the poor man 😆

I think I ruined it cause there are hardly 4 5 comments but I had to write them like this to keep their unique flavor.

Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Oh my god Avi..
I so love you after reading this 🤗
Mind Blowing Epilogue.. Really a unique SR of this Unique couple Moti and Ullu
Love this.. still in their dreamland
Bulldog Khurana changed into Love sick chotu sa puppy 😃 😆
Geet once again did blunder but got a hot shot 😆 😳
Oh my god I was laughing so hard, another disease 😆 😆
I'm so glad Maan handled it in his Bulldog style.. and made her His 😉 😳
Oh mummy I will miss this story 🤢 😳



🤗 Sheen
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



🤗 Sheen
Glad you liked it



How could I not like IT 😳 😆
The last nishani of Chura lia
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic epi.😆 Best lines "Main toh Delhi ke baaremein sochugi, she decided.If it takes too long, main Agra ke baaremein sochugi, aur phir Manali ke baaremein.I hope he is done soon, she worried, kyun ki maine aur kahi travel nahi kiya hai."😆😆 Loved it so much. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Most awesome epilogue ever
Rose bath got the proper ending
With all the problems solved without the blue pill
And Maan took Geet to better places than Delhi Manali or London
Final Destination
With the lovely gifts
Nupur
And
Mayank
With
Cricket team on the way

😉
Edited by maansi25 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

Most awesome epilogue ever
Rose bath got the proper ending
With all the problems solved without the blue pill
And Maan took Geet to better places than Delhi Manali or London
Final Destination
With the lovely gifts
Nupur
And
Mayank
With
Cricket team on the way

😉



thank u Maansi 🤗

i was feeling since so many read but did not comment

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