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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: Junglebee
simply fabulous
loved it
Thanks for the Pm..
Sorry having exams, hence short comments.

Studies and Exams first read the story when all is over

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: hottyangel
amazing update... maan trying to get close to geet... he is seducing her without her consent... maans father saw them together... maan tried to give explanation to his father...

Maan did not realize that Geet truly has forgotten him , as he remembers her he feels she should also remember him

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: ja1970
Good update. Want to know who is Karan and how Maan knows Geet.

Karan is Geet's present BF while Maan and Geet have a past it will be revealed slowly from Part 4 onwards

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: Mona_90
Nice part.. Geet ko maan na apne pa ka post de raha hai aur usa seduce vi kar raha hai aur maan ka papa na dono ko ek saath dekha liya aur maan sab kuch uski galti hai ya keh raha hai.. Waiting for next.. Thanks for pm...

Yes Maan does not want anyone thinking differently about Geet but his father knows Geet well and trust her too

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#455

QUOTE=gill123]Nice update thanks for pm

Originally posted by: LovelyDiva
Nice update maan want geet is new pa maan father saw what maan doing with geet

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: taahir004

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Actually I was thinking if I do 2nd season then either they should be new neighbours or final year in college and getting their jobs
something where they can always meet slowly become friends
Depth of Love was my first story on this forum

Huh.

.. Really?? When ?? Where ?? I didn't read it... I miss ... Ooh... So u want them to slowly fall in love .. I was thinking that u want them flirty ... Hehe.. Thats why suggested it... Hmm... Neighbors.. Hmm.. Nah.. Why don't u make it simple but captivating.. ?? Geet's bro. Maan's friend .. And her bro. Marrying with maan's sister.. And then u may show how they're smitten by each other .. And make both of them marrying as an arrange marriage ... And then there u can show as a normal couple .. How they tackle the indifferences' between them and falls for each other deeply..

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: kamnagupta7
Maan fired his pa nd he wants Geet to do this job.
Maan again kissed her nd tried to b intimate with her.
Geet tried to push him but he didn't.
Maan father saw them like this.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: doll.12
Huh.
.. Really?? When ?? Where ?? I didn't read it... I miss ... Ooh... So u want them to slowly fall in love .. I was thinking that u want them flirty ... Hehe.. Thats why suggested it... Hmm... Neighbors.. Hmm.. Nah.. Why don't u make it simple but captivating.. ?? Geet's bro. Maan's friend .. And her bro. Marrying with maan's sister.. And then u may show how they're smitten by each other .. And make both of them marrying as an arrange marriage ... And then there u can show as a normal couple .. How they tackle the indifferences' between them and falls for each other deeply..

But then it will be similar to my Devil's Own story

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#459

I know its not something new here .. but still u can make it special .. Or if u have something else in mind then.. I doubt maybe u have something in ur dead brain or not .. Lolz .. But still .. Would love to read a story on arrange marriage not fully arranged... By you.. As I like reading ur way of writing ...