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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: doll.12
😆 .. Uff .. Such a big lomg comment .. Hehe .. Chalo g ... Allah Hafiz for now .. Amd update soon.. Part 12...
aah aahh... Urrggghh urrghh.. Dev ... Idiot ... How could he just escape ... Bad police.. Very very bad.. Geet was sick so was resting but she was so eager to meet maan and got the shock by knowing that dev escape... She was so much in fear ... She told meera all about ... And thank goodness.. She is going away ... So meera will be fine but maan in danger .. Damn dev .. And damn geet tooO.. She should tell maan. .. Without telling him she is pulling him in deep danger.. Dev is having an eye on them ... And is texting her that he is waiting at home... Had an idea.. Why not geet just put the house on fire .. And this man will burn to death ... Yes.. It was a shocker to see dev coming out this soon ... Geet really want maan to make love to her ... She is now getting vulnerable again ... Maan really need to put his desires aside and calm his nerves as geet said to him after the night... Maan should make her enough comfortable and ask her to trust over him ... Or I was thinking ... Hehe.. I'm such a free Insan .. Ok.. Coming to my thinking.. Maan and geet getting cozy or after making love ... Or the two week which they gonna spent together .. I think its their right to spend it without any tension.. In that time span maan would make geet forgt about her worries and after coming from there .. Ride to home... Maan drop her at her house .. While entering and locking she will realize about the dev fiasco.. And in the mean time maan driving back home will stop the car suddenly remembering that geet haven't given goodbye kiss .. Lolz.. He will rush back to her home.. As we know how he is.. And there geet would be Shouting for help and that's how will maan get to know and from here u can start ... Lolz .. Such a big farigh larki I'm... No work to do .. From morning I was thinking what will happen next .. And that's what I got ... Hehehe.. 😉

Awesome thoughts I might just use them 😆

I first wrote the update with Geet telling Maan about Dev then I deleted it

Geet should get in a little trouble with Maan

but hey at least in all this mess she realized she loves Maan

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lathasathya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Part 5: Maan falling for geet and his possessiveness towards geet increasing.. their first lunch date...

Part 6: Geet and meera going to club vicky misbehaving with geet right time maan came as savior saved geet..
Geet Slowly opening up and both are going to US may everything will clear to maan about geet past.

Part 7: meera changing geets bag... maan getting more close to geet physically and asking to keep trust in him...

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: shrutizlyf
Sorry din't get time to read part 11 before..read the two parts today..its so disturbing and shocking to have Dev back..he is such a pathetic monster..Geet should just tell Maan quickly...rest she falls in Dev's clutches again..Loving the new twist!
Update soon!

Yes Geet should have told Maan but her fear does not allow her too

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#534

Update soon... Any update on the way??

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: indiegirl
Part 7:
Wow, could not believe meets would switch all geets clothes when she went for a Trip with Maan. And Maan has also sensed her insecurities and told her he will make everything right. Hopefully, he will be able to do so and soon, she is really stressed with Dev and fears he will come back.
Thnx

Yes Geet knows Dev he is a cunning person jail will not keep him away

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense fab update! superbly written! Oh no Dev is back! he sends flowers 2 Geet! she is shocked! she receives a call frm prison that Dev escaped! Maan ses her n is worried! she doesn't tells him! she calls Meera 4 help bt she is on her way 2 SF! Geet tensed! she doesn't tells Maan as Dev sends messages n threatens her! Dev sends so many messages! Geet wants Maan! Maan met in an accident! Geet worried! Maan reveals his parents r dead! Geet sad! Maan confesses his love! Maan will wait 4 Geet 2 confess! she compares Maan n Dev! Maan wants 2 go away 4 some time! Geet messages Dev she will see him the morning! there is nothing btwn her n Maan! Maan asks Geet wt is bothering her! she says she will tell him later! she wants her special night! This Dev 😡 Hope Maan gets 2 knw! update soon

Dev is just horrible he is obsessed with Geet and he knows she fears him so does not care about anything while she has such deep fear and not thinking logically at this stage to tell Maan about Dev

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: doll.12
Update soon... Any update on the way??

in about 4 hours max

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BUT A LITTLE CONFUSING...WHEN DID TEH ACCIDENT HAPPEN AS TEH SCENE DIRECTLY CUTS TO TEH HOSPITAL FROM BOTH OF THEM BEING IN THE CAR...GEET IS ACTING PLAIN SILLY BY NOT TELLING MAAN AND MAKING HIM MORE VULNERABLE...IS DEV SO STUPID TO WAIT...IS GEET SO STUPID AS TO NOTTO INFORM THE POLICE OF TEH MESSAGES...SORRY FOR THE SHOUTY CAPITALS...ISSUE WITH THE KEYBOARD

Geet has fear and its deep , after Maan dropped Geet he met with a little accident

yes Geet should at least inform the police but her fear is not allowing her to think logical

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: gbhat
Sorry for the late comments . But all the. Parts were fab. Geet is first little hesitant. But she also attracted to Mann but not sure if it's love. Good that she discloses Dev's truth. Maan has started loving her and wants her badly but keeping a distance until Geet agrees. Maan is naughty wither .. All the parts just brilliant

Thank You 😊

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: vrinda22
oh no..dev is back
n geet is scared of him
he is messaging her n geet is hiding it to maan
maan met with accident
n geet is scared is it doe by him
maneet away for 2 weeks
n maan asking what is bothering her
she is not ready to share it with him now
nice part

Yes Geet is not thinking logically at this stage all she wants is Maan to be safe

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