Ab ke Baras! Chapter 14 up! On 12th Apr! On Page 41!

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new story

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Take care of your parents n yourself dear🤗

Will wait for the updates

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Love the start 👏
Eager for the next part 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃

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Almina shaikh

@almin25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Hehehe dat was awesome dii 😊
Aajkal super natural thriller ka bhoot sawar hai dii pr 😉
wonder kya geet bhi reincarnated hogi??
5din??? And then phir?? Ki hoga 😲
cant wait to read more,update dii,once everything settles soon 😊

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Congratulation on your new story.

This is really interesting one.

Maan seems to be little arrogant here. His believe is different , more to be modernised.

Right after the award function he left to home but he couldn't keep his eyes open long because of tiredness. He should have get a driver with him.

He felt like seeing a girl with yellow dupatta and hearing someone saying 'Mohi".

Bad luck Maan's eyes dropped and hit his by into a tree. Glad nothing serious, once he got conscious he quickly went to hospital to get stitch else dadima would get tense

Yet dadima was still worried seeing Maan in such state but Maan brushed it on.

Again the girl in yellow dupatta passed him and Maan started to follow her in daze which he ended up at terrace edge.

Glad Dadima came right on time and Maan told her off everything. And now Dadima is shocked of the news. She need to do act fast before somethings attacks Maan again.

Maan tries to sleep but nightmares isn't letting him to sleep. and again hears someone saying 'Mohi'...

who's this Mohi Mohi... sounds like Mohini.. ghost!!!

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

hey dear !!
this is very hard situation for u ...
u need to be strong right now so u can tc of ur mum and dad .
wish them a speedy recovery 😊
don't worry about the updates dear and don't feel sad about it ...
family comes first
all the best to u 😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Congrats on the new story! thanks 4 da pm! read n commented already! update soon

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

intriguing

so will Maan think to find a solution

but will he believe in this past meeting d present

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Till part 1

Nice...

Yaar its so spooky...

Kahan se aate hai aise ideas tumhe..

Seeing Maan so scared itself makes it a lil' more haunting...

Cont soon...

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renjini263

@renjini263

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Hey kalpana... I loved this story :)

its damn interesting...

hmm so Dadi is worried for maan's life because acc to Pandit wen Maan will turn 25 form that day his life will be in danger...

and the only solution is to bring him to Pandit so that he cn suggest some way out... He was saved in that accident because of some powers..

coming to chapter 1: I loved the chapter.. So Maan won the award..and he was happy and proud to achieve this at a very young age..

he knew his Dadi will nw start looking brides for him lol..

So maan was driving and he suddenly felt sleepy.. OMG bt then he splashed some water and he was fine.. and out of no where woman came infornt of his car and he dashed into the tree..

bt wen he turned back/got down he saw no one.. and he feltas if someone is standing behind him.. and called him Mohi..

he was scared and he drove fast bt again he started feeling sleepy and a truck was coming bt luckily he swerved and dashed into the tree...

he knew he would need stitches and Dadi will be worried.. he finally reached the party and Dadi was worried...

and then the party started and Sonu Nigam started singing...

again he saw the same gal I mean yellow dupatta and he started following her and he reached the terrace and he saw her standing and started walking towards her... bt but but she was nt dere and because of Dadi's voice his trance was broken and he was standing on the ledge ..

Thank God he was saved ..He told the entire incident to Dadi and Dadi became scared,. and Maan was confused..!!

Wen he went to sleep again he felt someone calling him...

I loved the update.. I was actually scared reading this update...

Thanks for the update..

Take care :)