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Posted: 8 years ago
wow maan n geet love story...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
ab maza ayega. English babu desi mem. geet ko English atha nahin. waiting to see the romance. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved part 6 👏
Maan saves Geet and now both on journey together towards the same destination.
Eager for the next part 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow what chul buli geet happy and peppy! Maan saved her and she sees his good personality! VAT VAT VAT LOL both are going to have a fun conversation with each all the way to Hoshiarpur!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan seems more intrigued by the past life events and now he wants to find out more
waiting to see what will happen next
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_KaCy

Cool! No problemo!
Unfortunately dialogues has to be in Hindi because Geet is from village. Infact, one of the funny points of the story is Geet not understanding what Maan is trying to say because he speaks English in American accent which sounds weird to Geet!
Hence English dialogues isn't possible!
So instead of giving English dialogues, I will give english translations for the tougher dialogues and once the story ends I will add translations to the older updates too! Is that ok?

Thanks for the review!



Oh It's fine. Not to trouble you further. It was indeed fun listening to Geet's hindi. But could eventually make it out what's she's saying I was only having big time problem Pandit was speaking it sounded so alien.
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Posted: 8 years ago
The last two updates were good. Now Maan is able to connect himself with his dreams and slowly he will able be able to connect himself with his past. I think it's just Maan need sometime to digest things and take it slowly. As times goes he himself start to believe and connect himself.
Though I still feel creepy one remembering their past. As must it sounds interesting I think if it happens to me I might just go mad.

Maan and Geet's first meet is really wonderful. Maan as usual was being a hero to save Geet. Well must say Geet was equivalent being a brave person. She didn't just simply stood there let the guy harass her. She also fought back.

They conversation is really funny. Geet don't understand hindi where else Maan having difficulty speaking hindi. At least he did his best with his little Hindi.

The last part is the best. Geet quickly ran into his jeep once found out he's also going to same place. Cute act...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn



Oh It's fine. Not to trouble you further. It was indeed fun listening to Geet's hindi. But could eventually make it out what's she's saying I was only having big time problem Pandit was speaking it sounded so alien.

Of course he sounded alien. The Pandit spoke so pure Hindi that even I had tough time writing it. Had to research a lot to get those words right!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

The last two updates were good. Now Maan is able to connect himself with his dreams and slowly he will able be able to connect himself with his past. I think it's just Maan need sometime to digest things and take it slowly. As times goes he himself start to believe and connect himself.

Though I still feel creepy one remembering their past. As must it sounds interesting I think if it happens to me I might just go mad.

Maan and Geet's first meet is really wonderful. Maan as usual was being a hero to save Geet. Well must say Geet was equivalent being a brave person. She didn't just simply stood there let the guy harass her. She also fought back.

They conversation is really funny. Geet don't understand hindi where else Maan having difficulty speaking hindi. At least he did his best with his little Hindi.

The last part is the best. Geet quickly ran into his jeep once found out he's also going to same place. Cute act...

I know! In films, they show reincarnation being so smooth. A guy remembers the old memories and suddenly he jumps off to find his lost love! Where is the confusion, the fear, the uncertainties? The films never show the psycological effect of the whole reincarnation thingy. I am trying to show that here! And I agree with you, even I will go mad if I came to know about my past life like this!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Congrats on 5 years as a writer! thanks 4 da pm! bt read n commented already! update asap

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