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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Part 1

Excellent Start

Geet and Karan are Engaged and when he first saw her he was smitten by her beauty and innocence both eventually fell in love and now that they have to marry he sends her a message saying he cannot marry her why wait for the last moment did something happen that made him withdraw from his commitment

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Part 2

Unbelievable Just Shocking And Surprising

Geet was hurt she was in pain and so was her family when Maan her best friend comes

and comforts her he tells her that Karan will not come back and she needs to stop crying

Maan further tells her that he loves her and he wishes to marry her but at that same time

Karan too comes in all dishevelled and Geet runs to Karan oh please don't let Maan be the person that tried to separate Karan and Geet

looking forward to next update

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey nice part . Geet was so sad and maan was there to console her. I just loved maan's confesion so simple, deep, love filled and straight from the heart. And at last karan came back. I think there is a lot more to come . Eagerly waiting for next update

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

kuch to gadbad hai...

did Maan kidnapped Karan and messaged her from his mobile...

or there is something else...

waiting for next part...

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Mickyyyy

@Mickyyyy

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

nice update. is karan positive ya negative

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

when u update

plz pm to me

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

sad tht it was removed! I certainly was interested! 😭

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

People comments on this story but write say no reader
I don't know about the story
But sad remove
At lest continue for you self satisfaction that you write
If you have good story then reader will come
But what say your decision
Your choice

Edited by hira2010 - 9 years ago