MAANEET SS- LOVE LEADS THEIR WAY updated part 12 page 39 - Page 22

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again no updates from you

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why are you not posting the updates?

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awaiting the next part of this SS!

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Poojitha... Belated New Year wishes

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Part 10 was updated in Jan 2019

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If I am gonna update this ss then it will be only for you. Sorry I was daam busy with my life and job for past 2 yrs, will definitely try and give all the parts in a week or two. Thank you so much for your patience.

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To all the readers I would like to apologize for not being able to update this story. But I will definitely give an ending to and I really thank each and every reader from bottom of my heart for being so patient.

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Part 11


Hey Guys here you go with Part 11


So they all decided that they will start by 30th of Dec as the it will take around 34 hrs drive from Delhi to Goa. They took 2 drivers so they can have a easy journey.

Finally the day arrived and they started to their destination. In the caravan

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G: Guys chalo na we will play spin the bottle. (One will spin the bottle and to whom it points out they are bound to ans a question or do any activity that was given to them by the one who spin the bottle.)

Every one cheered and they started the game.

K: I will spin the bottle.

All: ok

It pointed out to Arnav, all started whistling

A: I am an open book Kushi which you have already read most of the pages and winked at her and rest of the people laughed at her flushed face

S: come on Kushi ask something na.

K: so Arnav, you have to tell us your most embarrassing situation.

Arnav know that kushi was doing this purposefully, and he know what she is referring to and looked at all the staring eyes at him.

A: Hmm who..... Once I gave lift to a person on a deserted road as he was not getting any lift and... And...

All: And what...

A: He turned out to be a gay and with a lot of difficulty I got rid of him

All: laughed their heads off listening to this.

G: bass bass now no one will laugh at my aaroo

Meera: now I will spin the bottle.

And the bottle points out towards pinky.

M: so pinky tell us about your crush?

Pinky was not expecting such question

Still she ans with a blushing face.

P: whooo Adi sir and blushed a lot

Maan: do you want me to talk to adi pinky and winked at her and seeing her expression everyone laughed.

Ammy: now I will spin

And the bottle pointed out towards maan

A: so ma'am tell us a shairy.

Ridzy: A romantic one maan.

Maan closed his eyes and he could only see geet's smiling face and spoke

"Bandh ankhoon se Dhekha hai ekk kwab

Jhaha zindagi dhiki jannat

Phir pata chala who khwab nai mera pyar ki hakikhat.

Jisne banadiya meri zindagi ko haseen"

There was pin drop silence, as and when he opened his eyes he saw geet and gave her a smile that made her heart skip a beat.

And this was observed by everyone.

Sid: wow maan tum tho chupe rustum nikhla.

And everyone teased him.

Maan: now I will spin the bottle.

And it pointed towards sid

Maan: play guitar and sing a song.

Sid: I can play guitar but I cannot sing bro. Listening to my voice all the people around me will start running. So one of you sing and I will play the guitar

Ridz & kushi: Geet will sing

And geet who was busy admiring maan did not expect this and was stunned and she did not know how to react and looked and everyone, among them she saw a pair of us asking her to sing and she said ok and told the song to sid in his ears so that he can play the guitar accordingly.

She closed her eyes and with a pleasent smile on the lips she started singing

Pehla Nasha.... Pehla khumar......

And everyone enjoyed her voice.

Later when everyone slept and sleep was far away from 2 people I.e our maan and geet.

Geet who could not sleep went to open area of the caravan and saw maan sitting at one of the corner sofas under the moonlight and she can clearly see a small smile playing on his beautiful lips. She sat beside him and as and when she sat he looked at her beautiful smiling eyes.

G: what happened maan? Aren't you sleepy?

M: I can ask the same question geet

G: but first I asked na?

Maan smiled at her childish words and said

M: nothing geet I am so happy nowadays and days are so bright and colorful that it seems like a dream that once I wake up everything is gone. This time if anyone or anything goes wrong then.....

G: shhhh..... Nothing will happen maan, there was a bad phase and it was gone now.

Maan subconsciously moved today's geet and kept his head on her laps and closed his eyes. He felt he is at home after many years.

Geet started admiring his features along with playing with his hair.

M: Geet tum kabhi apne life ke bare mein kyu nai bolti ho.

G: maan, I wanted to share this with you from many days, (maan was curious to know what was that as he felt geet's voice to be very serious)

Pre-cape : Geet's past and maan planning to propose to Geet

Edited by poojitha96 - 5 years ago
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Part 11

wonderful update! greatly written!

they are now in Goa and enjoying!

so Maan sings for Geet...

liked the song that describes his feelings!

Geet sings as well and the song shows her feelings.

now Maaneet alone

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