DRABBLE : A CUTE LOVE STORY || part 1 pg 4 april 10

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OK readers and my IF friends can consider me mad but this time m seriously mad with something or say someone..

I was watching some segments on YouTube and caught the cute naksh singhania of YRKKH of star plus though he is not a part of the show anymore but I watched some of his episodes and actor is just too cute.

So its just a cute love story I am posting on GF .

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Characters in the story ( main )

Gungun khurana : a cute six year old , she is her daddy's darling and the one who can make you smile with her cuteness..

Naksh singhania : he is a naughty super boy who loves his mumma the most and does everything that he wants even if is opposed by his father and mother but his dadi's are the biggest support in his all naughtiness..
He is given a dozen of nick names but now he loves his own name the most the reason is his small crush whom he met recently.

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now its upto readers those who want to read are most welcome
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Parents of naksh and Gungun

Maan and geet khurana : parents of Gungun and loves her the most , for maan his daughter's is his world and he never let her feel depressed (at least he tries) while geet is the third person when maan and his gun makes naughty.

Naitik and akshara singhania : parents of naksh and only they know how naughty he can get when he comes to himself , loves him to the core and supports him in everything from his football to his little lady love riya but they do not know that things are now changed.
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Introduction


Gungun was tying her shoe lace as they have untied and was bending when a ball hit her on back and a voice came which made her look at the owner of that ball..

Owieee.. Tumhe lag gayi .. Came a small boy running , he was wearing a red shirt with blue denims and was having mud on his snickers.. Gungun looked at him and she gave him the ball back while the boy this time smiled at her..

Owiee jyada toh nai lagi na.. I am sorry.. Me toh bas goal kar raha tha aur ball yahan aagayi.. Naksh tried to clarified himself while Gungun nodded in a No and replied ..

Hame nai lagi , par hume bhi kehlna hai , she pouted and naksh invited her ..

Chalo phir khelte hai.. Mujhe nai pata tha girls bhi khelti hun.. Mujhe toh lagta tha ki girls kitni boring hoti hain Jo sirf dolls se khelti hai.. Naksh was saying all and everything while they were walking when naksh her shoe laces untied and he stopped her holding her hand..

Ruko.. Laces tie karlo warna gir jaogi.. Gungun looked at her shoes and she bend and tried to tie but when she couldn't do , naksh too bend and he tied it for her.. Gungun smiled seeing him and thanked him..

Thank you .. And then she thought for something and forwarded her hand in front of naksh..

Hello , hum Gungun.. Will you be my friend , humara koi friend football nai khelta , she said very cutely while naksh accepted her proposal..

Myself naksh singhania , me sikhadunga don't worry gun..

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At singhania's residence..

Ohoo dadi , badi dadi please aaj aap mujhe lalla mat bolna.. Naksh bolna aaj wo aarahi h .. Naksh said with a cute baby face while his dadi asked him getting confused..

Kon lalla.. ?

Ohho dadi no lalla.. Naksh..

Haan.. Haan.. Naksh kon aarahi h..


Gungun..


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Khurana mansion..

Geet was trying to pacify the angry husband of hers and maan was seething in anger.. And Geet's next words made maan to look at her in anger..

Maan aap toh aise gussa ho rahe hai jaise hi Gungun ne bhag me shadi kar li ho..

Geet's words made her earn a loud geet with an earful of taunts..

Don't you dare geet.. I will select husband for my daughter and I just don't like that friend if hers that naksh.. And what does he say..

Geet completed suppressing her laugh , maan was turning a possesive daddy while their Gungun was so excited as she will be visiting her friends family for the first time in all this time , naksh and Gungun had grown very close these days and she loved how they spend their time together and play specially football..

GUN.. Naksh calls her gun.. Aur maan it looks so cute when he calls her so , ab aap J mat ho ki aapki bachpan me aisi koi friend nai thi.. Now come we have to leave ...remember this is official meeting too..

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so how is it

should i continue here

else its definitely on blog
Edited by suhaaana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting intro n cs...

loved it...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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hi congrats on the new story! fab concept n intro! Superb cs! Gungan n Naksh r adorable! Possessive MSK! update soon
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Interesting
really cute
they both are so cute
awww maan is a possessive daddy
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Interesting

really cute
they both are so cute
awww maan is a possessive daddy


thank you
Yeah dads are possessive
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Cute concept
Will going to love it
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi congrats on the new story! fab concept n intro! Superb cs! Gungan n Naksh r adorable! Possessive MSK! update soon

thanks
Glad you liked this one

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