MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-14~UPDATED~ Pt-132** Pg-130** 4th Apr. ***** - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
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Maan and Geet r spending time with each other ... Maan s saying about Geet in simple words ...
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di m going having headache again...
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Originally posted by: Donnaa

di m going having headache again...

good night..sweet dreams...
see you tomorrow di...


😊 i was commenting ..
sorry ..
oh again .. take care dear ..
😊 Good Night

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Lovely update. Maan confession left Geet in clouds. She is getting what she earned from her childhood. Beautiful maaneet date
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my dear friends




Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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The Myth


( Lots of thanks nd hug to Donna for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 129
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4583486/mg-ff-the-myth-thread-14-updated-pt-132-pg-130-4th-apr?pn=46

Part - 130



😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..

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Days wr slipping smoothly for all busy in their respective responsibilities nd works ,, Maan and Geet along with their friends wr very busy in study nd work ,, helping their Jrs too , though they also had a tight schedule .

In between many times crazy Pari tried hard to come close to Maan , but he talked very coldly nd ignored her which hurt her ,,she taunted nd complained him nd Geet that being an Indian nd known to her he was not talking to her friendly , but Maan gave damn ,, Geet assured Pari that she was there to help her nd her team ,, they wr not allow to take spl favour for anybody ,, all d students wr equal for them .

She cdn't force or blame for special favour or ill treatment ,, all d TL wr responsible for their team not to others ,, personal likings nd friendship wr diff things ,, Pari's craziness for Maan made Geet restless too .

Not only Pari but one more heart was burning seeing Maan nd Geet's closeness ... Vikram/Vicky , he many times tried to talk with Geet ,, waited for her near her classroom in d mrng ,, wished her GM , but Geet didn't like his presence nd behaved very coldly nd tried hard to ignore him ,, his look irked her to d core ,, in front of all he talk very softly nd mannered , but Geet knew his real intentions ,, his action in d welcome party was enough to make a clear note for him ,, he verbally didn't say any bad words to her , but sometime actions speak more than words ,, she never gave him chance to speak more than GM ,, always excused herself ,, she thought that there wr many typs of ppl in this world ,, if we don't like someone then avoid them .

It was lunch break nd all wr gathered in caf ,, today Maan nd Geet too joined their friends bcoz it was weekend nd Bill was going to join his family for his Bday ,, Geet with other friends organized a Bday treat for him ,, all wr enjoying , cut d cake nd then lunch ,, Maan with one of their friend went to counter for bringing d eatables (self service) nd when he returned after few min his whole world crushed down like a crystal castel ...

Where as d other friend was smiling nd moved ahead saying .. Oh I missed it ,, Maan rooted at his place lil away from d group ,, his eyes wr wide open nd face turned white seeing d sight in front of him ...

Bill was on his knee holding Geet's hand , his back was towards Maan , Geet was looking at him with a wide dimpled smile ,, all d friends wr cheering nd praising ... wow!! Bravo Bill ,, perfect Bill , she won't deny ,,, finally man u make d mind to propose her ,, woo ,, it's really spl day for u Bill .. go on ,, all d best , etc,etc...

Listening all d things Maan's heart dropped in his tummy nd breath stuck in throat ,, his mind cried ..no it cn't be possible ,,, Geet cn't do this ,,, she is only mine , but , but why she is smiling ? No , Geet don't do this to me , i'll die , i'll die , I cn't lose my Geet ...

Maan was standing numb with broken heart nd drained face ,, staring at Geet his eyes turned blury nd body lost it's strength ,, everything became oblivious to him , then ...

Geet's eyes went on him nd she smiled at him too ,, she came to him nd patted his shoulder nd he came in sense with a jerk.

Geet: MK what happened , why r u standing here like a statue ?

A friend: MK , come fast buddy we r hungry , i'll eat more in happiness for Bill .

Geet: MK see, what Bill is going to do , he is proposing on his Bday ,, great na ?

She dragged him close to grp , kept d trays on table , all took their softdrinks glasses nd cheered ... for d happiness , good health nd great future of Bill .

Geet smiled : MK u missed d chance to see , how beautifully Bill proposed ( Maan broken heart scattered nd looked at Geet hurt ) ,, it's so sweet , finally he was going to propose to his childhood GF Sarah on his Bday , it's great na ?

Maan get another jolt at d name of Sarah ,,, childhood GF ,, he looked at Geet shocked nd confised , his heart beats raised ,, he gulped hard nd asked in a crocky voice .

Maan : means ???

Geet handed him a plate served with eatables with a smile .

Geet : simple , Bill is going to propose to his GF on his Bday party at his home , nd he was practicing in front of us ,, aaww,,u missed that lovely confession .

Maan got back his life with this revealing that he was only practicing .

Maan : means that was not real ? I mean he was not prop...

Geet: what ???

Few more friends: what ???

John: OMG!! MK u thought that Bill proposed Geet ? didn't u know that Bill loves Sarah , his mom's friend's daughter nd childhood friend ? we all know.

Maan nervously : n, no , I didn't know .

Geet shocked : MK u thought that Bill proposed me ??? How cd u ?

Maan sadly: sorry , wo , I didn't know about him nd when I saw him ...

All : OMG!! MK , u r too much .

Bill teased : but why r u so shocked MK ? u r looking like u lost a battle ? didn't u like that someone proposed Geet ?

John smirked: yeah MK , why r u so shocked nd confused ?

Maan: n, no , I mean yes , I mean .. it was so sudden nd I didn't know d whole matter so got confused .

Bill: confused or heart broken ,, see ur face buddy , don't hide d truth ( he winked at him ).

Geet looked at Maan nd then at all stunned nd her heart beats raised sensing where Bill nd John indicating ,, she chewed her cheek's inner skin nervously nd looked down at her plate.

John smiled: perfect time MK , don't hide d fire , we saw d smoke .

Maan fumbled , looked at them nd then at Geet nd again at all , who wr eating nd staring at them curiously .

Maan: what r u saying buddies , I m not getting .

Bill & John: aawww.

Bill: not getting really ,, don't make us fool .. action speaks louder than words .

Geet's heart fell in tummy nd wanted to fun away from there sensing what Bill nd John wr talking ,, though Maan wanted to voice out his feeling ,, he looked at Geet with longings ,, he didn't want to hide their relation for long nd wanted to confess infront of all , but feared how Geet wd react?

Bill pushed Maan lil close to Geet nd whispered : go man , win her if u have true feelings for her , I think she too feels same for u .

Maan skipped a beat nd felt ripples in his body knowing that all witnessed that he was falling for Geet ,, he squeezed his eyes to absorb this fact nd then gave a nervous look to all with a faint smile .

Geet's another friend: friends be ready for one more cheers , m I right MK ,, Geet ? Make it fast buddies , I m dying to see one more Love story .

John gestured Maan nd show him thumb up ,, Maan composed himself , took a long breath nd came infront of Geet ,, all looked at them with open mouth , nd geet at maan with wide eyes in shock ,, her breath stuck in throat .

Slowly maan took d plate from her hand nd placed that on table ,, held her hand looking at her face ,, he was serious , very serious nd then he came on knee .


Precap - confession ...


Part - 131


sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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HELLO
where did you find this

is it from GHSP or PV

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