New Maaneet SS - HIFAZAT! (SECURITY) Updated Part 4 B Page 23!

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Prologue



A huge mansion, almost a palace. Done completely with shiny white and cream colors, the interiors show off the wealthy and powerful occupant very clearly. On the right side, a huge aisle covers up the long corridor passage and an oval shaped gigantic bedroom with an equally large and spacious verandah has a sweet and dainty 181/2 yr old young girl dressed in jerseys and a t-shirt. She is dressed in woollens as the weather is freezing cold. Sitting on the warm rug atop the marble floor, she sadly gazes at the scene below, as it is nothing less than a wild imagination or even an unrealistic dream.


Yes, this was Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana, beautiful, intelligent but kiddishly innocent wife of the great and powerful industrialist Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. She is lucky to have a loving husband and doting in-laws in the form of Dadi Maa, Smt. Savitri Singh Khurana and her brother-in-law Vicky Khurana who is her best friend, along with her sis-in-law Anvesha, who is almost like a sister for Geet. But even their love and assurance cannot help her, as the poor girl feels trapped in love. She has all the freedom and luxuries in the world you could imagine, but just one thing, a single flaw is enough to take the pleasure out of it.


But what is taking all the pleasures out of her life? It is one insane action, one hasty step by none other than her doting but super possessive husband Maan. And geet still curses herself for the day when she agreed to his idea.




Staring below from the verandah which bases around 15 feet above the ground, geet has her hilltop mansion surrounded by a large and 10 feet deep, cold water tank. It is one look at the tank and its occupants which is enough to curdle your blood.




Because the tank is completely filled with enormous and heavy, hungry potable water crocodiles. Yes, maan has filled the water tank with huge crocodiles. They are his pets and also the best security he could station around his dream home. Maan loves his mishty more than anything else in the wide world. He wants to protect her from a deadly nemesis, for which he can go to any lengths.




Hello, me back again with a new title and story. Plz weak-hearted people stay away coz its a different concept, apart from my other stories. I'll update this one along with Fra. Petal and shaapit say, within 2 days. Plz stay tuned with comments, likes and suggestions.










Part 1 - Page 3




Part 3 - Page 9

Part 4 A - Page 15
Part 4 B - Page 23
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awsm prolog ...waiting fr stry to progress
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Interesting prologue
Maan as possessive lover
Geet in a caged
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Awsome prologue, dear!!
This MSK seems super possessive...
I mean hifazat ke liyein Crocs!!! That's so scary!!!
Poor Geet!!!
Do PM me once u update...
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Intriguing and Captivating Concept

Maan and Geet are married her in laws are wonderful people even her husband but it seems like there is something wrong
waiting for the story to unfold

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Interesting concept... Waiting for update plzzz update soon. Add me dear 😊
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interesting n different concept ...
looking forward for it ..
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Interesting start... pls cont. Soon.
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interesting strt... maan as possessive husband wainting for d updte.. continue soon
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Congrats for new story.
Superb concept.
Update your other stories also specially Shapit.

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