Guzre Pal, Maaneet ke sang Scene 4 ~ Pg 117~ 23/3

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

haila do din mein itne saare gappe😲

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

Edits are zabardast.

Bada maza aaya har edit ko dekh ke

Wrangler jeans to Tom and Jerry too good

And Priya ka chef topi wala Maan uska toh alag hi hai andaz😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

Accha mere contribution for the edit.

Iss baar hum poetic andaz mein explain karenge

Aur phir chullu bhar pani mein jake doob marenge😆

Poem and me eeks.

Somebody shoot me before I post it.🤓

Oh well here goes nothing.

Hoshiayarpur se leke Delhi tak ka raasta

Aloo paratha aur Italian Pasta

Badi anokhi hai in dono ki daasta

Halla bol ke woh laagaye naare

Toh koi usse gusse se ghure

Josh hai dono ke saar pe saware

Woh bole tu mujhe pagal karti jaaye

Yeh bole toh jaaiye yaha pe kyun aaye

Dono ke gusse ka para bas chadta jaaye

Kadvi coffe pine ki adat hai uski

Chahkar bhi na mile isse ek chai ki chuski

Garam patila chuke nikli muh se zor ki siski

Chahe haath ya daant jal jaaye

Toothpaste ka hai ekmev upai

Hathon ki agan woh bade pyaar se bujhaye

Aloo Paratha khane ko dil bada hi lalchaye

Par yaha toh sirf hari pilli ghass phoos de dikhaye

Shak hai usse ki unhone aloo hai churaye

Har musibat se usne hamesha hai bachaya

Aaj bhi na padne dega uss pe woh bhook ka saaya

Pasta toh mohtorma ne chutikyon mein gapkaya

Chahe aap dono karo jitna inkar

Jaha hai pyaar wahi hai takrar

Ab baas baki hai toh woh hai izhaar

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: Susegad
Edits are zabardast.
Bada maza aaya har edit ko dekh ke
Wrangler jeans to Tom and Jerry too good
And Priya ka chef topi wala Maan uska toh alag hi hai andaz😉

chef waala mera msk hai😳😆

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: Susegad
Accha mere contribution for the edit.
Iss baar hum poetic andaz mein explain karenge
Aur phir chullu bhar pani mein jake doob marenge😆

Poem and me eeks.
Somebody shoot me before I post it.🤓

Oh well here goes nothing.

Hoshiayarpur se leke Delhi tak ka raasta
Aloo paratha aur Italian Pasta
Badi anokhi hai in dono ki daasta

Halla bol ke woh laagaye naare
Toh koi usse gusse se ghure
Josh hai dono ke saar pe saware

Woh bole tu mujhe pagal karti jaaye
Yeh bole toh jaaiye yaha pe kyun aaye
Dono ke gusse ka para bas chadta jaaye

Kadvi coffe pine ki adat hai uski
Chahkar bhi na mile isse ek chai ki chuski
Garam patila chuke nikli muh se zor ki siski

Chahe haath ya daant jal jaaye
Toothpaste ka hai ekmev upai
Hathon ki agan woh bade pyaar se bujhaye

Aloo Paratha khane ko dil bada hi lalchaye
Par yaha toh sirf hari pilli ghass phoos de dikhaye
Shak hai usse ki unhone aloo hai churaye

Har musibat se usne hamesha hai bachaya
Aaj bhi na padne dega uss pe woh bhook ka saaya
Pasta toh mohtorma ne chutikyon mein gapkaya

Chahe aap dono karo jitna inkar
Jaha hai pyaar wahi hai takrar
Ab baas baki hai toh woh hai izhaar

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😲 ye waala is liye as am shocked to know a poet in u... kaha chupaake rakha tha... mastam mast

😆 ye waala for the zabardast poem... couple of lines are too goooddd... sach mein... i even loved the rhyming ones...

thanku so much for this bootiful poem🤗

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Di... This edit is just too cute... 😊

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hoshiayarpur se leke Delhi tak ka raasta
Aloo paratha aur Italian Pasta
Badi anokhi hai in dono ki daasta

Halla bol ke woh laagaye naare
Toh koi usse gusse se ghure
Josh hai dono ke saar pe saware

Woh bole tu mujhe pagal karti jaaye
Yeh bole toh jaaiye yaha pe kyun aaye
Dono ke gusse ka para bas chadta jaaye

Kadvi coffe pine ki adat hai uski
Chahkar bhi na mile isse ek chai ki chuski
Garam patila chuke nikli muh se zor ki siski

Chahe haath ya daant jal jaaye
Toothpaste ka hai ekmev upai
Hathon ki agan woh bade pyaar se bujhaye

Aloo Paratha khane ko dil bada hi lalchaye
Par yaha toh sirf hari pilli ghass phoos de dikhaye
Shak hai usse ki unhone aloo hai churaye

Har musibat se usne hamesha hai bachaya
Aaj bhi na padne dega uss pe woh bhook ka saaya
Pasta toh mohtorma ne chutikyon mein gapkaya

Chahe aap dono karo jitna inkar
Jaha hai pyaar wahi hai takrar
Ab baas baki hai toh woh hai izhaar