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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: RM14
Congratz for new story dear Amna..🥳wow so happy to see your new story..🤗keep writing ..👍🏼i'll read and than comment..just read the starting..😳interesting concept.😃

thank u 😃😉 ..

Will be waiting for ur review 😉

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

interesting concept

wat geet upto

and y sam their

something fishy

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

nice part.. waiting for next part

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

I think sameera came with some motive...is she sent by Geet and who is that person who called Geet asked her to finish the Asap...when will maan and Geet meet?

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Is it geet...u r keeping so much suspense

It kills me

But it keeps interesting

Everytime maan suspects her she proves him wrong

What is geets plan

Nice part

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Sameera is actually making Maan go crazy with her behavior and yeah he is thinking about her way too much .
it was so cool seeing him spying on the maid ouch !!!! now he realizes no more spying or else he will get caught .
Geet what is she actually doing seems interesting

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Interesting update

Geet is doing some work for other person

Maan behind maid😆

Waiting for the next update

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Lovely update so maan was making hus maid understand not to touch the cupboard though she didn't understand but maan made her understand he was thinking abt her and cursing himself geet has been assigned a work which she dosent want to do maans maid drooling on him he hates her but lines her taste he saw her sneaking in his dad's room only to see her taking his clothes our maan cursing himself she question him he blasts her but she dosent say anything