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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Edited by tabby999 - 9 years ago

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

hi sangitha

read the last part ..its amazing ...

u r great as writer i must say that ...

the story was totally interesting ...rk a positive character ..that was different ...

when he killed maan i hate him so much but as the story unfolds the real reason behind his doing made him great man ..he did all for maan and his love ...

well he to get great gift in form of madhu for it ...

wish u would have included some parts of maneet together too in the story ...

finally the immortals tuned in mortals for their love ...

maneet together so does rkmadhu

thank u 4 a lovely story ..

looking forward for ur other works too ...

thanks

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Mind blowing update

Emotional n painful love story with happy end

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Fabulous update dear, loved it 👏 👏 maaneet get married RK helps them and thanks for the pm dear

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

wow this is amazing ..

something i never read ..

Maan came back .. he died and came back as human ..and all this was planned by RK .. that was nice ... but cutting the body and burying in 6 different places was horrifying .. i mean i couldnt imagine that :/ ..

dying and then immortal to human .. it wouldnt have been fair if geet was still angel and maan was human ..so equality :P ... But Rk played big ..

Rk's story was nice .. i like it ... so he has replica of Geet ...

thanks :)

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Kitne sare twists the yaar inki love story me👏

Wow... But sach me u are one of the most creative writers we have in our forum!!

Pm ki zarurat nahi padti if u would have edited the title to atleast "completed!!"😆

Ab story pe aate hai... I almost guessed they would become mortal if this story had a closure...

So itna tak tho i was already prepared...😃

Baki sab was so amazing like demon tears... Curses spells.. Protectors... Chants so on...

Truly enjoyed reading it... Thanks for a wonderful story

Do keep writing!😳

(Sirf spilling mistakes edit kiya hai 😆)

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 9 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Last Part & Epilogue

Geet lived for 150 years among the mortals but everyday she thought about Maan until finally one day at a supermarket she smelled that vile smell and she knew the demons were around that night at first she was scared but thinking how her Maan got killed she braved herself only to find out that it is Maan
he had spoken to RK and RK told him if he wants to be with Geet than he has to die so when RK killed him Maan was actually grateful to him because he knew RK would resurrect him and he will come to Geet
RK on the other hand was betrayed by an angel so he did not trust Geet but when she herself agreed to give up her angel powers to be mortal than he had to admit that both Maan and Geet does belong to each other and he also admitted that not all angels betray
Maan and Geet married in a church while RK and Madhu married according to demon rituals all lived in Paris

That was Fabulous Singhita

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! well written! terrific end!

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samidsamid

@samidsamid

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

awsm update loved it maaneet get married aftr 150years wait. ...RK helps them...it was all thier plan...wow maneet and rk mdhu all gt their love...and thanks for the pm dear