O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1 - Page 90

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Zabardast DEAL 😃

😆😆

Deal karlo Muskan 😉

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ch 10

Ahh!!! I sobbed my heart out as I read Tara's part. But I can see that she has begun her journey to get to the other side of survival. I love this Dev. He is such a strong man, yet so very gentle. His very strength is his gentleness and that is exactly what she needs right now.

I really really really need more of their story Avi.

This couple has too much potential and it would be too unfair to their story if it is not given a proper development.

As for Maan and Geet I was giggling through the whole Tom and Jerry antics they are doing. But the problem with Dr. Khurana is that try as he may he just can't see her as Jerry😆

Upar se Tom is bristling on seeing the oh not so senior woodcutter😆

Damn that pic is sizzling😉

At this point the serious tone of Dev and Tara's updates are balanced out by the humor in Geet and Maan's parts. This though is going to change I can feel. Maan and Geet seem to be harboring some misunderstandings about each other.

That was a fantastically written chapter Avi😃

hi Avi

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You knew what Finally i understood onething The Central Idea of NT saga !!

"When the world says, 'Give up', Hope whispers, 'Try it one more time"

THE JOURNEY AHEAD WILL DEPICT HER FIGHT BACK SPIRIT AGAINST ALL
HARDSHIPS , HER SURVIVAL AND HER PRIDE along with her the People who stud for her !!
will be waiting for unfold the story further...

And I just waited for the moment when you gonna create Devtaras eternal saga and you have no
Idea am so touched !! I know attempt such a concept n write down realistic scene never a cup of tea
it's really hard and hats of to you ... Believe Me My heart aches every time I read her scene i ...
NT's suicide attempt ohh while reading I had Tears in my
But Maan reached on time and when he saw her running like that he also ran behind her without caring
about anything he catched her hand but unfortunately both fell down from
Cliff but thankfully dev came to their rescu then n they both are saved but I love
the way you have portrayed maan's scene !! Specially when he remember his mother when he
hold NT's hand . "I can't lose her" the words echoed and echoed in his head" ...
"Ma! No! Hold me, hold me, hold me", he heard his own shrieks" the most touching scene !!


As I said in my previous comment this time am excited for devtara more then maaneet !!
And I have a reason your concept reminded me Varsha Di's BLEEDING HEARTS n
Geet was a victim and maan's oath to never let her give up them no matter what n
goshh title had made me shiver... you knew i won't had enough courage to read
But the moment i read it... and after reading the prologue...i was scared...!!!
i mean such a terrifying prologue "Porcelain Rose" ... i didn't had strength to read further...
but again curiosity is something which forced me to read it...and its one of the best story
I had ever read but unfortunately unhone complete nai k h !!

Still remember quote
Geet
It has been said...time heals all wounds...But I do not agree...The wounds remain...With time,
the mind protects its sanity...covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens...But it is never
gone...
Maan
The damage was permanent...there would be scars...But even the angriest scars faded over the
time...I belive my love is capable of soothing her pain...I will never let her live in those
moments ever again...
Hey don't feel offended am not comparing you with her ...
You know mein usually sad or dark story attempt nahi karti but Maine ye story read coz I trust her
Know that she will never disappoint me n I have same trust on you so pls
This story had a potential n it will be unfair if you wrap up soon !!!

I understood your POV you want a genuine reply from Your readers
n if u follow everytime yours readers choice ,like dislike bla bla n writer as per their wisher you
will lost real essence of your story bcoz its your story n your thinking and every individual have
their own POV which is totally different from other so please its a request think before you do
Something !! And You are always a good writer dear and i seriously
dont understand how could u simply shake our Hearts with simple words.. that is the main thing
Which attracted me to ur stories.. i can never get tired of saying this ...

oopsss i didnt commented orderly sorry in my eagerness...
actually mein maaneet scene bhul gayi .:P sometimes its happen with me sorry
ones again ...

Part-9
Yupiii Avi is back on her Torture Spree and Maan What a torture poor him ...
He was like Why the hell do I having erotic dreams ? This girl Geet Handa is changing his system
within few hours , and he simply don't like it ... Why do he feel something different for her? WHY??
when Maan was moaning in his sleep Geet though he is doing this out of pain
What an epic scene !! He behaves rudely with her to keep
her away from him .. but wrong move Khurana Ye dekho jaag utthe Sherni Handa
And Maaneet tom and jerry ride I just loved it ...

Wow Maan thinks Dev is an old men don't fly height maan Avi had prepared special Dev Shock therapy
For your peace of mind ROFL ROFL ... .)...I am sooo excited when he sees dev !!

Part-10
Maan and big fat Maaannn He is not able to digest the fact he is actually getting affected by her ,
Hr in ordered to control his feelings he decided to set things straight between them but he
don't knew he was dealing with his Geet who knows him in and out and
told him she will not do anything that sort of things for him n his mindless talk trigged
geet very badly and her reply shocked him !!!
God his No she was just an ordinary girl. , jaap matalb kuch bhi ha mjuhye toh yahi samajh
nai aaya convince kise kr raha h khud ya humye... kyu nahi wo ordinary or ye epic baba Maan Singh Khurana
Oh men you are completely on mess lol one moment He keeps denying the attraction he feels for
geet n other moment he can't tolerate her getting friendly with that pilot he he ...goshhh he
accusing her of lying about the senior doc was too much , Maan for your kind information
Ab Geet ne senior Dr kaha tha Senior Citizen nahi or ye toh Bande k overactive calculative mind
upaz thi ROFL by god Dev ko dekh k kya aag laggi h Maan ko esshh since he expected to see some
old man as her senior LAMO maan has gone officially crazy...
Ksi ka pata nahi but I just love your treat a shirtless hot hot Dr Dev or jealous angry Dr Msk all together thud
Babaji mujhye aayse doc kyu nahi milte ...

Originally posted by: dqno1

TEASER

A/N: Wrapping up the story soon.

A writer needs something from you too so that I can continue. It is just not happening anymore for me. Sorry to those who are following sincerely. I promise to make it good enough for you.

Please finish reading because once I am done, I will not send pm anymore.

Thanks!

Teaser is damn amazing but your not is damn scary Avi

why you always behave like Geet...She said NO to Maan and you said you will wrap up that wonderful story.

Please Change your mind😳

Take Care