O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Funny !

Hilarious actually...hi hi

Maan is going to hv a heart attack seeing the handsome senior dev instead of the old man he is thinking him to be.

N bechari geet had no clue to why he was moaning n now has bcum outright rude.

The pain of rejection is too huge a pain to bear.

Write soon avi.luv u

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Alamelu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

brilliant...loved how youtortured maan with having geet in front of him and dreaming about her but him not knowing it is her in the past whom he is dreaming about..haha..

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preeti.1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

i have commented on part 8 ,some personal reason i could not comment yesterday. plz sorry .

send me Password for part 9 plz

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nishamna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

I am feeling so bad for Tara.dev is having hard time to control Tara.he is alone here and she is getting scared seeing him. Omg maan was having erotic dream about geet. He was moaning in his sleep. Geet though he is doing this out of pain but unknown from the truth that he is recalling past incidents I guess.maan is frustrated about that dream as how could he think like this for a girl whom he met recently. Other nok jhok part was amazing. Waiting for next dear

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GBR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

I love devtara equally as Maaneet in ur stories...but unlike ur other stories here tara is not a lively girl or strong feeling very sad for her n waiting for her to recover the nightmare she gone through

N maaneet as usual awesome but seems like maan is going to have a tough time ahead when he see dev is not some oldie but smarty...

He pushed geet away now coz of his dreams tht r so irrotic but what will he do afterwards! !???

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shree2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

chapter 9

Wonderful update...

Loved it from start to end... The feelings of Tara being in heaven and the disclosure that she is still alive was well written... i loved the part how you explained the way she thinks and dev helplessness...Feeling sad for Tara😭

what an update yaar when it comes to maan and geet, they way they are fighting with each other makes me love them more... Poor maan think that Dev is an oldie whom geet is going to spent her time with , i want to watch his face after he knows who Dev is...

Can't wait for next update...

Continue soon...

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amrinderdhami

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Posted: 9 years ago

#417

superb update maans dream left him wondring was it reality or dream..maan being rude with geet to keep her away from him
loved maaneets cute banter too gud

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Priya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

overall update is very nice...feeling bad for tara and another side maan ke sapne bhi na

😳 😆

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nish285

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Posted: 9 years ago

#419

""""He sure hoped that the devil writer was not going to put him in the cold weather in front of a fireplace with Dr. I-am-irresistible Geet Handa.""""..
Wwwooowww...such a crooked way to put up a teaser... 😕
"""""Darn this writer! How she loved torturing him ...and the poor readers...""""...devil aaavvviii is very evil...
😡 ...
But i sooo loved d update...mr aroogant definitely needs a dose of his own medicine. ...
He thinks dr. Dev is an old man... 😃 ...
Yyyeeekkksss... .(rubbing my hands in excitement...)...i am sooo excited to see d jealous maann... 😆
Sinceee u have vowed to live up to ur tag of a "devil writer"...the only respite v can ask from u ...is to give updates sooon...plz plz plz ... 😭
And coming to dev and tara...its a high time ppl stop taking girls as the culprits inspite of de being d victims...irrespective of one s choice of clothes...moral ethics applies to everyone...to respect one self and to uphold the respect of oddrs ...so der is no way a girl can be blamed for everything...
Its high time to change such thinking not only in dis matter but also in many oddrs where men still have an upper hand when compard to girls...