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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Beautiful... Is the only word I can think of after reading this

You're so good at tantalizing the cords of hearts...

Awesomely depicting the emotions of both Geet n Maan

So glad to read your writing again...

Missed you sooo much

Thanks for updating

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taanee

@taanee

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

lovely update update soon dear

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Ankeeta Gupta

@dreamy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

both maneet r very stubborn

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

I read Rabindranath Tagore's verses and right there I knew this was going to be an amazing story.

Every poem that I have read by the great man weaves a story that begs to be told.

How the writer weaves the poems into the story is the magic each writer has the ability to create.

I read these verses during my research for Paarijat and thought they had such wonderful potential, but they did not fit in with my story and I could not use them.

But you ...you have created the magic..magically😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Will come back and comment on that beauty of a chapter after my mind and heart has assimilated it properly😳

Ok so I am back.

How can words explain all that a human heart experiences while reading something so mesmerizing that you are disconnected from the world for those few precious moments as your eyes soak in the wonder before you

How your breath shallowly reading the description of a sun god reflected in the moon beams.

How the embrace that happened after a decade had my heart pounding right along with Geet.

How I held my breath as I waited to see will she or won't she show her face.

Every action of this chapter played out like a lyrical note that pulled at the heart strings

God woman I am sitting still and I am still out of breath.

Fantastic, marvelous,, stupendous all the superlatives can't begin to explain my euphoria as I am reading this story.

So please make me more speechless with your words Aish.

Haaye ab intezaar karna padega

Edited by Susegad - 9 years ago