MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-12~UPDATED - Pt-118 ** Pg-132 ** 9th Feb. ***** - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago
mera bhi bye bye
too sleepy
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Originally posted by: Donnaa

Di kuhu mera good night
lappy abhi bhi bhai k kabze me hai...
see you tomorrow Di...
good night Di n kuhu...
sweet dreams...bye bye...


😊 koi na sweeties ..
chalo soty hein..it's late now..

Good night Dona nd Kuhu..
sweet dreams...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan is at a place where he cannot stay with Geet nor can he stay away from her and his baby.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats for the new thread.
Really nice update.
Maan wants to stay with them.
Daaijaan and kabir were right too.
hope Everything becomes normal soon.
excited for the precap.
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update di... Wanting maaneet to come together its like the major issue of how society reacts is forgotten but u have crafted it wonderfully with dj and kabir explaining him about the problems. It's not easy but has to be done to keep up the respect of Geet. Wish they find a way soon...
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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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The Myth


( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 113

Part - 114


😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..

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How do I fix this?
The shattered remains of an imperfect relationship?
Tell me what tools to use,
I will work for hours,
Rebuild those walls that enclosed us,
My hands will bleed,
My body will sweat,
But it will be worth it in the end,
Because I will have you again.


Geet looked at him nd find disheartened ,, pain was visible in his eyes ,, she kept d lappy aside nd sit straight sensing that Maan wanted to talk her ,, seeing his hung face she guessed that her Ma&Pa rejected Maan's wish to stay in this house ,, she too wanted to know that what both d elders said ?

Geet : Maan , what they have said nd why r u looking sad ?

Maan didn't reply ,, looked sadly in her almond eyes which wr looking at him worried he felt chocked losing that happiness of living together ,, this small gap was hurting him a lot , felt so helpless in front of cercumstances which wr created by him only ,, he felt a gush of pain nd hugged Geet tightly .

Donnaa

Geet startled : M a a n , what happened ?

Maan didn't reply ,, he wanted to ease his pain feeling her close to him ,, Geet felt his restlessness nd reciprocated d hug , though his closeness with Maan affected her nd she felt that she was losing her controle on her in his proximity , but when Maan held her like this she felt solace deep in her heart nd mind .

Geet : Maan , why r u so restless ?

Maan in a cracky voice: Geet how u bore everything alone ? this lil distance is paining me nd I made u all alone in this world , I m so bad Geet , I m sorry ,, I m sorry .

Geet: M a a n ,, that was really painful , but it gives me peace that at least u realized my pain ,, nd most imp my baby helped me to overcome that pain nd grief ,, Maan u have everyone around u , then why r u feeling so sad ?

Maan: don't know how long I have to bear this sep from u nd baby ?

Geet parted nd looked at him : what Ma & pa said ? is there anything wrong ?

Maan: no Geet , they r right at their place ,, If I ruined nd insulted this relation then it's my duty or responsibility to make is respectable nd trustworthy.

Geet : then why this pain ?

Maan: this lil distance between us is hurting me ,, Geet plzz be with me forever .

Geet smiled : it depends upon u Maan that how'll u keep me close to u ,, mai to pahale bhi tumhare pass thi aur ab bhi hu .

Maan: i'll do anything , I promise u .

Geet: all d best Mr MK .

Maan: thanks

Geet: u didn't say what Ma & Pa say ?

Maan: i have to give a respectable place to our relation to live together .

Geet: means ?

Maan: I have to give a name to our relation .

Geet sadly: till then u won't come here to meet us ?

Maan felt her hidden pain which somewhere gave him a hint of Geet's desire that she too want him close to her nd their baby ,, this distance also paining her .

Maan: will u miss me Geet if I'll live away ?

Geet: if I say yes then how will u stay with us?

Maan: like I lived before ?

Geet: means ?

Maan cupped her face with a smile : means i'll live with u from mrng to night nd went in next home at bed time only ..

Geet my day'll start with u nd baby nd will end with both of u ,, that lil distance i'll bear taking that my punishment to hurt u , my baby nd family .

One more thing Geet i'll do this only here , but at FH I won't live away , so no if & but there .

Donnaa

Geet smiled ,, she felt relieved that her baby wd get his father's love nd care ,, his happiness r above all for her ,, Geet nodded in yes nd Maan hugged her with a contented heart ,, there was only wait for a perfect day to express his feelings for her in front of all ,, he won't fear what other say or react ,, getting back Geet Singh wd be his mission .


Precap --- FH visit ,,, back to college ...



Part - 115


sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan poured out in front of geet

He has to make up for all he did with interest


Lets see how is he going to make his relation with geet legal to make them stay with him


Edited by mishtib - 9 years ago
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🤗 Hi Valli dear...

how r u ..?

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