Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 60

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Posted: 9 years ago

will update by evening😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Vibrant Update

I loved the entire scene between Avi , Maan and Geet
I'm now finally so happy that finally Maan gets to know that Geet is only his Dad's princess and she tells him about the Roka and everything how Daadima had made her come here to work Maan is not offended or angry which is a great surprise

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Vibrant Update

I loved the entire scene between Avi , Maan and Geet
I'm now finally so happy that finally Maan gets to know that Geet is only his Dad's princess and she tells him about the Roka and everything how Daadima had made her come here to work Maan is not offended or angry which is a great surprise


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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 24

Maan:"Tum Dad ki princess ho"😲

After narrating the entire thing she was dreading for his reaction, but was prepared for the question she heard,"Ji??😕"

Maan reconfirmed"Tum Dad ki princess ho mumbai se?"

Geet:"Haan Dad mujhe Princess hi bulate hain"

Maan:"And they never bothered to tell me this, now when were you going to let me know about it?"

Geet:"Nahi Princess ke bare mein to hume laga aapko pata hoga,it was not part of the plan. And about letting you know about the plan I was going to tell it to you yesterday itself but..couldn't...come...upto"she said last part stutteringly.

Maan:"ooh toh my mind blowing proposal left you speechless haan?"He asked bringing her more closer holding her waist,touching her forehead with his.She shyly lowered her eyes.

Maan:" Mishty..did you tell dadima about my proposal yesterday?"

Geet just nodded in no.

Maan:"O.K toh call her now and say it" her eyes grew wide hearing it"I want to know her reaction to it,How she speaks to you about it I've never seen her like this before.And is it your mindblowing Hot chocolate I want more of it make it na please".He said pickig the cup and making a puppy face.

Geet simply nodded, went to kitchen brought the whole jug and kept it before him.Maan brought her again on to his lap.Geet called dadima on her cell maan put it on loudspeaker.

Phone convo

Geet:"Hello Dadima wo I wanted to say you something"

Dadima:"Haan beta tell me"Excitedly"Did he proposed you already?"Maan widen his eyes hearing Dadima.

Geet looked at maan still sitting on his lap an says"ji"😳

Dadima:"Kya !!he Proposed?Did you guys kiss?😉"Geet looked at maan shyly Maan nodded like telling her to say no.

Geet:"Wo nahi"

Dadima:"What?He's such a waste I tell you aahh any ways tell me Where did he took you?What did he tell you?I want every little detail"Maan's eyes grew wider for her every sentence.And Geet's cheeks were turning redder by seconds.😲

Maan:"aaah I think I'll keep that to myself dadima thank you.": he said intrupting her as geet was not able to open her mouth.

Dadima:"Maan??"

Maan:"aah yes Dadima"

Phone slipped out of Dadima's Hands and it got disconnected.She was shocked to hear Maan's voice.After composing herself she picked up her phone and dialled maan's number.Maan after the call got disconnected pulled geet more closer and sealed her lips with his.Their kiss was interupted by loud ringing of maan's phone,he annoyedly removed it out of his pocket to see it was from dadima he picked it up.

Maan:"Haan boliye dadima"

Dadima:"Maan come home I want to speak to you it's important"

Maan:"not now dadima I'm busy"

Dadima:"What you are busy? with geet? are you both kissing?"

Maan was embaressed and cut the call.Dadima who was excited heard little avi's voice before the call got cut,was dissapointed again(if only she knew😉).Avi came to maan and said,

Avi:"Maamu put my mami down"sternly then said "see I made a dlawing" Hence, ending their little romantic moment.

Both were busy entertained by avi till afternoon, when both arjun and vicky entered in HH calling out to geet,They didn't notice maan or avi as they were upstairs in room.

Arjun:"Shona make the table ready we are very hungry.Waise Shona you said her about our yesterday morning's talk?"

Geet:"No Bhai"

Arjun:"Then why did she call me ?you know she started her rant as soon as I picked up my phone.She even got to know that I used Maan's idea to propose"Geet giggled to it ,where as vicky was confused listening to their talks,then asked,

Vicky:"What do you mean by bhai's idea to propose.Did he proposed some one?"to himself but audible to everyone"Already and I didn't even get the hint that he likes someone"

All the while maan was silent audience to the whole scenario closing avi's mouth as well so that they shouldn't know even he is here.

Arjun:"Ask geet about it, I officially don't know about it isn't it😉?"looking at geet.

She ran away blushing,😳

Vicky:"Now what happened to her?"arjun shrugged his shoulder as he don't know,vicky continued"officially don't know it means you know it unofficially. pls tell me her name na...all my dreams has gone to drain atleast bhai should get his dreamgirl"

Arjun:"what do you mean by your dream what was it tell me I won't say it anyone"He said.Maan strained his ears to listen to his brother talking about his dreamgirl.

Vicky:"Wo actually ...if you don't mind can I say?"

Arjun:"Sure sure I don't mind listening to any thing as much as it concerns maan and his dreamgirl".

Vicky:"Actually arjun bhai..I wanted geet di to become my bhabhi"both maan and arjun were surprised to hear this, vicky continued"I know Bhai want love marriage so only I din't give any idea to dadima about their alliance as I know she will by hook or crook make it possible, you know na she can even do her health drama to get bhai to agree".He said chuckling

By the time Vicky ended his speech,geet called them to have lunch.They left to dining hall.

Arjun:"Shona why there are two extra plates someone's coming kya Dadima or Ram uncle?"

Geet:"Wo..."

Maan:"yes!! those plates are for us haina?" nudging avi who was in his arms.

Avi:"haan mamu, aju uncle you ale late we wele waiting fol you, and you wale talking with buddy..I'm hungly mamiii" he said and then shouted for geet.

Both Vicky and arjun were shocked to see maan there.Vicky was stunned to hear avi calling geet as mami in front of maan and arjun and no body saying any thing to him then he noticed both friends having a smug look on each other's face sitting opposite each other on dining table.

Arjun:"Haan haan avi ask your MAMI to get you plate ready"he stressed on mami to make maan embaressed but it back fired on him and his face became pale by maan's next dialogue,

Maan:"Haan avi ask your MAMI when is AROHI aunty reaching here"he said stressing on mami and arohi.

Arjun:"Kya Shona she is coming here why din't you say me before?" said hystericle arjun to geet.Geet who was silently listening to their talk said,

Geet:"nahi bhai I din't knew AROHI BHABHI is coming here"She stressed on bhabhi teasingly.

Arjun:"Oh toh this is your plan to tease me very bad" he said pouting.

Maan:"Atleast I said it directly to you not behind your back"Arjun though was first confused then looking at geet's lowered eyes and maan's stern face he got to know that his 'bhanda phoot gaya'( his secret is out).Arjun gave a sheepish look to maan ,maan shook his head like 'iska toh kuch nahi ho sakta'.

Vicky:"Can anyone say me what's going on?"

Geet:"My bhai proposed my honewali bhabhi yesterday"said geet feeding Avi who was sitting on the table top.

Arjun:"And your bhai proposed your honewali bhabhi yesterday" These words took some time to sunk into Vicky's head after that his eyes grew wide and he was fanctically looking at maan and shy geet to and fro like as if its a dream.

vicky:"Bhai is it true?" maan simply nodded,"Then dadima should know about it you know she was waiting for such a long time to hear about it".

Maan:"Actually it is because of arjun and dadima that we are together".eyeing at embaressed arjun and geet.

Vicky:"matlab".Then arjun and maan narrated the whole plan thing to vicky:"OMG I din't knew dadima could do this"

Everyone had their lunch pulling legs of each other and laughing.

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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME STORY
all khurana's with help of arjun set-up maaneet
daddi did roka of geet without maan's knowledge
maan fell in love with geet just seeing her once, he already love her from childhood but realized now
maan propose geet
geet cut avi's nail n he complaint to maan so that he scold geet
maan comes to know whole story from roka to proposal n daddi's mastermind behind all this
finally he know who is princess

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Posted: 9 years ago
A Fascinating Update

Finally Maan gets to hear Daadima's mischievous side while poor Vicky had no clue on what was happening but surprisingly he too liked Geet and Maan to be together and his wish did come true

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahaha.. Omg rofl.. Superb yaar.. Maaneet arjun dadima, vicky... Everyones crazy.. Cont soon hun..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
love it
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow maan...dadima abhi doboo k band bajayenge...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update loved the dadi scene

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