Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 9

geet:"what???"exclaimed geet.

Geet's brother:" wait!! you didn't know?" she nodded no" well then maan is back and we called you so that maan doesn't meet you... we were late as maan saw you already but lucky enough that he saw you sleeping, and you are suppose to not speak a word in front of him i.e, he should not hear your voice untill I tell you to got it"

geet nodded and dadima asked" and why may I know?"

geet's brother:"That I will tell you later when time comes" and turning to geet "now you are not going to office you will go directly tommorow".

Geet again nodded her head in yes( awe my innocent doll) by then vicky and avi entered HH and the day went by maan being rest of the day busy in office and reached home late and slept after seeing avi sleeping with vicky.

Next morning again the same routine but today was a slight change as annie did not come to chat with geet. Vicky and avi ran to geet as soon as they got up.

Here in KM maan came to breakfast table and meet with everyone, he thought that avi went to school and vicky to college as both were missing and others also didn't give any thought of informing him of the new routine in fact all were surprised seeing annie having breakfast with them instead of geet but didn't bother asking her this. Priya started serving karela to ram with vegitable salad which he detasted a lot.

Ram:" Karela!!! phir se...maa see na your DIL is again feeding me the same im fed up of all these. I earn so much and have FOOD business, Foood, my son also earn so much but what I get to eat??? this!!!"pointing at his plate " kadvva karela every morning hunn!!!".he said making faces.

Priya:"Stop making those faces and eat this fully or else you wont get the cookies made by your princess and thats final" she said glaring at others who were giggling listening to them, this was ram's daily drama when ever Priya asks him to have karela for his health and maan missed this a lot in his trip.

Maan had a dream of marrying the love of his life and having cute little banters just like his parents, even his dadima and dadu had love marriage and he doesn't want to break this chain. His dream girl, mishty, she always comes in white dress and feeds him with her hands, makes him sleep in her lap in his dreams, but last night he saw face of his dream girl, she was the same feathery beauty that was sleeping in his father's cabin.

Ram was so pissed off by all that he left the table and went to office. Maan left behind his upset dad, Priya sighed calling geet, she took promise from her to feed ram karela in breakfast and give him his medicines.

In office geet as usual entered ram's cabin without knocking and started laying breakfast for him looking pissed with him as he was not taking care f his health hence, she was not even looking at him. Ram was first shocked due to sudden intruder but then he cannot say anything to her as he knew it was Priya's order to geet to make him have his breakfast and medicine.

Maan was first shocked and then amused by seeing geet enter his dad's cabin without knocking and started laying breakfast for his dad. Than he eyed ram asking what is happening? ram just bowed down his head and shrugged as if saying im helpless.

After laying breakfast she eyed ram to have it and he silently started eating. Geet suddenly became aware of someones gaze and turned to see maan staring at her and ram amused. Mean while ram finished one round and asked for more and maan:" what?? you want more of these karela, KARELA? dad are you ok?".

Ram:" ofcourse i want more who will leave such a tasty dish? do you want to taste it, its awesome but I will give you only half piece not more". said ram, maan took a piece and had it dreading its taste but it tasted really nice not at all like it would normally taste. Maan was regretting having only half piece and was looking longingly in ram's plate. All this while geet was lost in maan and his voice as this was the first time geet was seeing and hearing him.

Geet had actually added some fillings in karela so that it taste nice not that bitter ownself. After ram finished his second round he asked for more(lalchi ram)( bringing her out of her maan's land) but geet handed him juice with medicine and ram silently had it. Then geet left after giving him all the files that she had briefed him about and needed his signatures.

Edited by neasya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for likes and your lovely comments it means a lot😊
Hope you will like part 9 also.😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it
awesome
but short update 😭 😭
cant wait for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovly update...
Gert got the shocking news of maan's arrival..
I love yhe breakfast part..
Lalchi ram 😆 ..
Maan amazed to see geet so authorativly giving him bf.
Maan alsp love the kedva karela made by his mishty... 😳 ...
Geet also list in maan by seeing at first sight..
Both hv the same affect seeing each other at first time .. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow super cutie RAM...

when maaneet talk yaar

waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
geet comes to know maan is back
maan does not know about the changes in KM
ram has to have karela as ordered by geet
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update lalchi ram & awww maan some more karela donot get geet lost in maan voice

continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Fantastic Update

Maan has always wanted a love marriage because his parents and grand parents too had love marriages he had always dreamt of his life partner but after seeing Geet at his fathers cabin Maan actually dreamt about her at office Geet walks into Ram's cabin and lays out the breakfast for him and surprising Maan ask him he wants more and he says yes the dish is awesome Maan too takes an piece and finds the food is tasty it now seems like Geet too is lost in Maan waiting to see what actually happens at office with these two as her brother had told her
not to let Maan hear her voice
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Really who eat kerala at breakfast. It's too much.👏

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