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index

concept on page 1 (above post)

character Sketch - below post

part 1 on page 1

part 2 on page 27

part 3 on page 37

part 4 on page 40

part 5 on page 49

PART 6 ON PAGE 58

part 7 on page 66

part 8 on page 74

part 9 on page 82

PART 10 on page 89

part 11 on page 97

part 12 on page 106

Pre-bridal on page 112 & 113

part 13 on page 116
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Character Sketch

Geet handa : 32 years old

Daughter of late Mohinder Handa

loving own family so much



Rano Handa : widow of mohinder handa

she is house wife
want to see marriage of geet... but ?😉

Nandini Mehra : married with dev Mehra

living happily with him and own son prem

she is elder sister of geet handa

Rajji Handa : younger sister of Geet Handa

her marriage fixed with Rohit Bharti in this year

Maan khurana : 34 year old successful business man

due to lost of struggle & sleepless night, today he reach up to here...

Roshni Khurana : mother of maan
she already lost her husband few years ago
now only one wish left
seeing Maan Marriage

Vicky Khurana : maan is father figure for him
he is younger brother of maan
and loves him a lot

Meera Khurana : wife of Vicky Khurana

loves her family a lot

she have a cute daughter pari
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TERE LIYE

PART 1

Location: Delhi

Place: Khurana Mension

Time: 8: 00 a.m

One voice ringing in whole Mansion...

Vicky

.

.

Vicky

.

He fall down from bed...trying to stand own self, one cute laughter attract him...he stand from floor, go near to her...

Bhut hassi aa rhi hai tumhe

.

He pull her closer, rubbed his thumb around her lips... before he claims her, again voice hears... She giggle, pushed him...

Niche chale jaayo

Nhi toh veerji tumhare sath kya karenge

Ye toh bahgwan hi jaane fir

.

.

Pari ki bachi

Bdi hassi aa rhi hai na

Raat ko batata hu tujhe toh mein

.

********

Bhai let's go

He glares him...

Vicky : bhai wo mein

Pari : so rhe the veerji

.

Maine kitni baar uthaya

Par mjal hai

Ye tas se mas bhi huye ho

.

Par veerji aapki do-teen awaaz ne toh kamaal kr diya

Maan : Vicky

Maine tumhe raat ko hi bola tha hume

Aaj hume Nainital ke liye nikalna hai

.

Vicky : bhai

Abhi bs 8:20 huye hai

Hum puch jaayenge aaram se

Maan : Vicky tum

.

.

Maan bte

Bs bhi kro

Maan : maa

Ye aapke hi laad - pyaar ka asar hai

Ye kaam mein itni deel deta hai

Roshani : maan

Aur tumhare is gusse ka kya karan hai

Ye bhi bta do hume

Maan : iski laparwahi

Aur kya maa

Roshani : bs yhi hai

.

Ya kuch aur

Maan : maa hum chalte hai

Roshani : maan

Aap phle wale maan kyun nhi bn jaate

Maan : maa mein whi ho

Aapka maan

.

Vicky yhi rhehna hai

Ya fir chalna hai

Vicky left with him...

********

Pari : mummy ji

Ab aap kya soch rhi hai

Roshani : maan

Ghar ki zimmedariyo mein itna kho gya hai

Usse khud ka hi khayal nhi hai

Pari : veerji ki shaadi krdo

Roshani : wo mane toh shi

Pari : hmm

Kyun na hum ladki dekh le

Aur unhe bole

You have to marry with her

Roshani : ab mujhe lag rha hai

Yhi krna padenga

**********

Location : Nanital

Place : Handa house

Time : 9:00 a.m

.

Ye kya geet

Tu aaj bhi office jaa rhi hai

.

Geet : maa

I have to go

Nandini : maa

Isse jaane do

.

Kaam krne ke liye hum hai na ghar mein

Isne tbhi toh mujhe bulaya hai

Geet : di ye aap kya kh rhi ho

Aapko jaldi isliye thode na bulaya hai

Nandini : geet tu na bs rhehne de

Tu apne office hi jaa

Geet : maa

Di ko smjhayo na

Urgent work aa gya hai

Maine toh aaj ke liye leave hi li thi

Rano : hmm

Jaane se phle

20000 deti jaa

Geet : maa

Aaj jo samaan laana hai uske liye toh paise already hi de diye hai na

Fir ye

Rano : geet

Shaadi ka ghar hai

Teri badi bhen aayi huyi hai

Sirf raaji ke liye thode na kapde aayenge

Iske liye lene hai

Damad ji ke liye

Aur prem bte ke liye bhi toh

Aur mein kya purani sari pahungi

Geet : maa

Abhi toh nhi hai itne

Rano : kitne hai abhi tere pass

Geet : yhi koi 10000 hai

Nandini : utne dede ek baar

Baki ki abhi mein de dungi aaj

Par ha

Mujhe kal wapas kr diyo

Geet : par ye paise

Nandini take her purse and take cash, then empty purge give to her...

Nandini : ab tu jaa

Geet : hmm

**********

What happen geetu

Geet : nothing indu

Indu : common yaar

Bol bhi

Geet : kal hi last saving withdraw ki thi

Scooty ki EMI pay krne ke liye

Pichle month bhi nhi kr paayi thi

Wo ab

Indu : raaji ki shaadi mein lag gye

Geet : hmm

Indu : ek baar tu mujhse lele

Jb ho tere pass tb mujhe wapas kr diyo

.

Geet : are nhi yaar

Mein hi kuch krti hu

Indu : geet

Geet : indu

If I need

I tell you

Pakka

Indu (think) I know geet

Tu nhi kahengi mujhse

********

At 12 pm, maan & Vicky entered in Nanital...

Vicky : bhai

Why we come here

Wo bhi toh delhi aa sakte the na

Maan : Mr. Gupta request from us

Due to this, we are here

Vicky : bs yhi karan hai

He give one glare to him, vicky instantly zipped the mouth...

Maan (think) I also not know

Why I say yes

For this hotel project any one come here

But why I come here

.

Par wo awaaz kyun mujhe jaani pechani lagi

**********

Note : hey friends

I know it's so late update

.

I changed little bit Character sketch... Only about geet... I removed one line from her CS...

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Happy New Year! Congrats on the new story! waiting 4 concept, prologue, cs, banner n updates!! 😊
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Happy New Year! Congrats on the new story! waiting 4 concept, prologue, cs, banner n updates!! 😊


concept posted😃
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Terrific concept! beautifully written! will b waiting😊👏
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CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY
lovely concept
waiting for start

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