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Posted: 9 years ago





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Next day, last day of SP temple pooja,it was chariot pulling,as all mens of te village will pull te chariot to all te villages,SP family will started it and go for one village and rest village people will do it..

There was a big long rope was tied and All mens stood with their sons, and pray to god,ladies and youngers standing behind them..Ram narrating to Maan and Vicky how to pull,he got worried thinking will they able to do,as it will be very hard to pull te long rope and they hands will get hurt

He know how powerful his son is but he just worried thinking they both are not use to all tis but Maan assured him and said he will do and Vicky too..pandit lite te arthi and raise te flag to start,all pray to god and started to pull te rope

It wont be so easily but men will pull it..SP was standing and watching it as he cant do it as his sons strictly warned him,he just started te rituals and left to others who pulling and going around one street,then they stopped and others carry on..

They finished te chariot and end te pooja and night it will be dance and music and all invited SP family,they too decide to go after dinner..

Valli patti was ready with herbal paste as every year after tis ritual,she will prepare herbal medicine for te men and ladies will apply on their palms..Rani took te bowl,Geet know she is taking for Maan and she want to do,sensing her Rani came to her and gave te bowl ,Geet look at her

Rani : go and apply for my son,Geet smile and kissed her cheeks,haan take his dinner too,we have to go for music function

Geet node and left to his room with food and herbal paste,She enter his room and saw he was busy in some phone call..she kept te tray an on te table and notice tat he was switching te phone to right hand and then left as he struggling to hold te phone ,she know wat is bothering him,she just snatch te phone making him frown

Maan : Geet

Geet : chup bikul chup,she kept her finger on his lips and pulled him to bed..

She sat beside folding her legs,then took his hands and her heart winched to see his palm became swollen and red rashes occurred due to rope pulling,her eyes welled up,she kissed his palm moving her lips all over his palm like soothing his pain..

She know he is not habitual of all tis,he dont even lift a glass of water but here he is doing tis for his family..she is falling more and more on him..her tear drop fall on his palms startling him.. Maan know his MISTY will feel sad seeing his wounds so he try to hide it but whom he is cheating his MISTY know his each cell in and out..

Geet :who asked to do all tis,its paining so much

Maan: its ok geet

Geet : u don't believe in all tis things naa

Maan : but now i do,Geet look at him,to thank god for giving me a lovely beautiful family thru my angel who did so much wonders in my life

Geet kissed him: I LOVE U

Maan kissed her : do u know which hurt me more, Geet look at him,Maan took her tear drop in his index finger, tis one,i can win tis whole world but tis i cant see it,it hurts me Geet,to see u r tears which says im a failure who cant even take care of his angel ,tis is my weakness

Geet closed his mouth and node no : u r best in everything u does,u r every girl's dream man im so lucky to have u

Maan: no Geet im lucky to get u in my life

Geet hugged him keeping her head on his chest,Maan kissed her hair..she broke te hug and took te medicine bowl and started to apply it on his palm with peacock feather,feather trickle him and he started to giggle,Geet look at him

Geet : wat

Maan :it trickle me

Geet smile and bow air to sooth his pain,still she is sad

Maan :Geet if I get tis much care from u I can burn my hands daily,before he completes Geet wack on his,lips shutting him

Geet : Maan if u talk like tis again then u will see my worst side

Maan pout,she left to wash her hands and came and sat beside him, then only she notice he was bare,he didt wear his shirt nor vest only sitting in his track pant, Geet was staring at his bare body,his muscles were bulging here and there which is te result of his heavy work outs,and his biceps giving him a hot look,

Her gaze move down to his abs where his 8 packs were more prominent,how ever she try to move but her gaze was struck at his bare form,she felt some sudden urge to touch his body but chilled herself for thinking like tat,she felt tighten in her body seeing him like tis

Geet :cant u wear some thing

Maan smirk to see a red cue on her cheeks :why Geet some thing some thing is happening inside u

Geet :nothing,

she got up and went to his wardrobe and took a vest and put it on him,he winch wen he try to hold te vest

Geet :im sory,she hold his hand and bow air

Maan:its ok

Geet then put his vest properly :Maan why cant u try for 10 packs,now my Guru too having 8 packs and SRK tried for one movie 10 packs widening her eyes showing her ten fingers

Maan :tis is enough and don't compare me with tat stupid hero

Geet :oyiee don't call him stupid ,then see pointing her finger to him,Maan sighed, I heard how they keep packs sleeping in sun, doing heavy exercise haan,he node yes, say naa

Maan : Geet for tat we have to work hard and he explain wat all to do,her eyes widen in shock and her mouth hang open

Geet :u too did all tis

Maan : Geet who ever want to have packs have to me, im also

Geet felt bad thinking he went thru so much,he beared all te pain to build his body,her hands caressing his biceps like soothing his pain,Maan chuckled but know his MISTY who cant even see a small hurt on him, Maan pulled her inside him and kissed her hair seeing her love for him

Geet :from now on no exercise for packs,so stop all arts.pointing her finger towards him

Maan :then how u drool my 8 packs and u ask me to keep 10 packs haan

Geet :I don't want any pack vack,if u have family pack tat is enough

Suddenly they heard Maan's stomach grumiling making both to giggle,Geet took te plate and feed him,he took it and smile at her..

Geet fed him,Maan saw her grumily face and thought to cheer her,he just licked her fingers making her shiver

Geet :Maan wat u doing

Maan :Geet u r finger taste more than tis food,so I want to have it

Geet try to pull her finger,Maan hold her wrist,Geet was shuddering inside wen he was licking and nibbling her fingers

Geet :Maan we are getting late

Maan just pulled on his lap :where

Geet :we are going out,they have arranged some music and dance,every year all go and just be there for few mins but we youngers will sit there till early morning,it will be very nice

Maan : Geet wat we are going to there ,i have more entertainment here, caressing her waist

Geet wack his hand :always thinking only tat

Maan :then say wat to think,wen my MISTY is near me all my thoughts is roaming around her

Geet saw his lower part,nowadays wen ever he romance her gaze travelling to his lower part and cursing herself for thinking like tat

Geet :leave me naa

Maan :no,just sit here and feed me

She sighed and feed him,but his naughty hands were playing on her waist making her shiver,she finish feeding him,she pushed him and stood

Geet :now enough Mr.Khurana get ready and cum ,pointing her finger to him,as she felt his hardness slightly on her back,so to hide her blush she glare at him and left

All got ready and left to music,SP inaurgrated and music started, they will be some debate competition, music and dance ,then some dramas,all sat on their chairs which was arranged for them

Maan and Geet sat beside of all, Maan hold Geet's hand and caressing it,Geet try to pull it but he tighten his hold..she gesture to watch te drama,but he node no and kissing her hand without obvious to anyone,she smiled and look here and there and kiss his hands making Maan to grin widely

Maan whispered to her ear : can we go im feeling bored Geet

Geet :wat we are going to do all are here

Maan :tats why im asking we will go,pls

Geet saw his baby pleading face,she node and both got up and left,they both walking in te road holding each other's hands,it was nice weather

Maan :its so nice Geet

Geet :hmm

Maan was holding her hands in his and caressing it,Geet felt chilled due to te climate,Maan pulled her and hugged her to give his warm

Maan :now u ok

Geet :hmm with my personal sweater, Maan hugged and kissed her cheeks,Maan and she look here and there and wack his stomach with her elbow

Maan :ouch and hugged her,

they both walking in cool weather in lonely road as everyone in te village went to see drama..Suddenly her eyes widen seeing a gufi staff,she removed her hand from Maan's hold and rush to it before he realize wat

Maan: Geet

Geet : Maan I want gufi

Maan :wat at tis time and its chill Geet,not good for u r health so no

Geet :pls pls licking her lips

Maan : Geet stop It or else staring at her lips,Geet pout,ok cum

Geet took two gufi and Maan paid it,she asked him to have it,he just took one sip and said ok

Geet : Maan it will be nice u buy one more for u

Maan : no no im fine if u want u buy another one

Geet : no no its enough

But we need it

Maaneet look at te voice and saw all te youngers were standing beside them and giggling

Shiva :tis is too bad sagalai gufi date alone we too want

Swetha :me too

Maan sighed :ok and gesture te man to give for everyone

All enjoying and teasing each other,Maan was just admiring his family who enjoying themselves,they finished and sat for te drama for some time and left as they were feeling sleepy

Next day,

Pooja of Ram's temple and NAkul and Sundari's wedding, everything as arranged and all getting ready,but girls have a desire to go in carts

Geet :maama we will go in cart naa it will so fun pls maama,to Ram

Ram saw her,all girls joined them ,atlast he have to accept

Ram :ok we all go in cart and elders with Maan and Vicky will cum in cars ok

Geet :hmm

Dadi :why I too want to cum in cart it was long back I travelled in tat

Anni :wat is tat vehicle

Geet giggled : it bullock cart can u able to cum in tat

Anni :wow I want to cum

Geet :ok,but looking at Maan and Vicky u both cant cum so they will cum in cars

Vicky :dii im also cuming in cart I want to enjoy te ride

Geet look at Maan who was standing :hmm

Ganesh arranged and a row of carts was standing out for everyone to travel..two persons in one cart, all mens sat with their spouse, Dadi and Valli patti in one along with kids,Kousalaya and Kasturi in one,Anni with Rajji,Swetha and Savitha in one, Dinesh with Santhose and Vicky with karthi, Sundari with her brother and Nakul with bgs..Maaneet in one,Geet sat and saw Maan who was struggling to get into cart,Geet was giggling to see his plight,

Geet giggled : wat Mr.Delhi son can't get into haan for tat u have to get training darling

Maan frown but before he try he was standing in air and saw Ram was lifting him to make him sit in te cart,All whistle,Maan felt embrass and Geet was laughing at him,which he try to shut with his glare but she pinched his cheeks and he too smile at her

(THANKU MONA)

Te cart started all girls enjoying the ride,Maan was struggling to sit and staring at Geet who gave te idea to travel in tis vehicle,she twist her lips and enjoying..Maan cant able to sit and now and then falling on Geet,she laughing at him,He sighed and just lie on her lap startling her

Geet :Maan

Maan : u enjoy u r ride and me mine,kissing her waist

Geet pushed him making him frown: everyone are there

Maan :so wat,

Geet :poda and hugged him

Maan hug and saw everyone were enjoying te ride,soon Maan too started to enjoy te ride and smile at his MISTY who was laughing and teasing him

There was a mandap arranged for Sundari and Nakul's wedding,even though Sundari is servant but SP and LK they she was like they kid to SP and LK..LK gave jewels to her as a mother to her,she felt touched and hugged her, SP and LK did all te rituals as her parents and Dadi did for Nakul...

They wedding completes with all te rituals and they both blessing form everyone who showered them with gifts and lots of love,Maan hugged Nakul startling him thinking abt his Maan babu ki love for him

All had lunch which was arranged and resting for some time,then they left ,on te way home they kuladevi temple was there..SP saw it and asked te cart to stop

Venkat :appa wat happen why stop it

Sp : our kuladevi temple lets go,our whole family is there,we will go and get blessings from our kuladevi maa

All got down,khuranas saw it was old temple

Venkat :maaji its our kuladevi temple (anestra temple),oh

Anni :then te temple we did pooja yesterday

Venkat :tat one we build it but tis one is like family god,wat ever we do we have to get premission from goddess maa

Anni :oh

Sp :yes after Maaneet wedding invitation printed we have to cum her and do small pooja and invite devimaa for te wedding, giving te first invitation to her

Maaneet look each other thinking abt te invitation and smile..All went inside and pray,they came out and te whole place was very beautiful and lovely, girls saw some boys playing kites

Geet : we also play kites haan

All smile and gesture yes,Rajji saw Maan standing

Rajji : maama cum naa,Maan node no

Geet : Rajji he don't know to play all tis,he born with diamond spoon only basket ball, golf,

Vicky :who said wen we go to Punjab in small bro use to play kites

Geet : wat else u don't know Mr.Khurana

Maan node his eyes,before he realize Rajji drag him and all went to play,all are playing and enjoying,kids too playing,Karthi and Aaand playing with kids

All are enjoying te kites and elders were sitting and watching them,Geet was with girls and enjoying,she frown wen others kite flying high,she saw Maan's kite flying high and look at him who smirking at her,how can she let him,she went near him and try to distract him,She hold his hair and pulled it,Maan frowned

Geet:u r hair is so soft Maan,she touch his cheeks,he ignored her but she pinched him,making him to glare at her

Maan : Geet wat u doing

Geet :wat im doing Maan,with baby innocent face im just feeling u r soft skin,she turn his gaze,why Maan u feeling some thing some thing,with a naughty grin

Maan :nothing and haan u have to learn skills to divert MSKfrom his work with a smirk, and concentrated on his kite which flying very high

Geet flare her nose seeing his smirk,she want to punch him,Geet pout and saw him and te kite,Maan kite flying high and high and she just went and try to cut te thread but it cut her finger and blood came, and she screamed

Geet :ahhh,holding her bleeding finger

Maan got panick,drop te thread and hold her hand ,there were little but away so no one saw them,

Maan :why te hell u have to cut haan

Geet : u winning so

Maan glare at her,he drag her near to tap and kept her finger but still blood didt stop, Geet was winching in pain,Maan saw her and he kept her finger inside his mouth, Geet startled and saw him

Geet :wat u doing

Maan smirk seeing her shivering : wat im doing Geet just stopping te blood

Geet :why medicine is inside u r mouth haan

Maan :yes do u want to see, with a naughty smirk

Geet know his intention : no need and murmured enough of seen

Maan started to kiss her finger one by one and slowly his lips moving up to her wrist,then her elbow ,Geet was shivering and clenching her pallu

Geet : Maan wat u doing

Maan :treating u r finger

Geet pout :here, pointing to her arms where his lips was licking shamelessly

Maan node yes yes and kissed her arms and further move to her shoulder and nibble her skin there, Geet pushed him and run away,Maan chased her and hold her pallu and pulled in a jerk made her to stumble and fall on his chest..

Maan came to her ear and whispered : Geet im teaching u how to divert, Geet look at him,see now u r pain went off,biting her ear lobe

Then it clicked her tat he is taunting abt how she try to divert him from playing kite,she glare and try to move but he pulled her

Maan hold her waist and pull her more towards him,Geet was staring at his eyes which was turning dark,her eyes automatically move down to see his hardness but it didt seen as his shirt was hiding it,she pout for not seeing but controlled her corrupted mind which always moving down

Maan pinned her on te tree and lean on her,his breath was fanning on her,his nose was nuzzling her cheeks,she clenched his shirt,he hugged her and rise her little bit high and his lips kissing her shoulder,nibbling it,she hide more inside him and kissing his neck making him groan,but she gasp feeling his hardness poking her thighs, she pout thinking it don't have any other work always poking me,chi chi like him it also shameless creature

Before they get lost in their kiss,Raghav broke they trance by calling Maan sir,as they were behind te tree so he cant able to see wat they doing but just saw his shirt and thought to call him..

Raghav :sir

Maan broke te kiss and rest his forehead on her and both panting and stood like a thief got caught,Geet giggle,she corrected his shirt and gesture him to go ,he move and Geet was correcting her dress

Maan :hmm

Raghav :sory sir,Adi sir in call

Maan wonder why Adi is calling in his cell,he took and node hmm,he left

Maan :Adi why u didt call to my cell

Adi :if u only attend it ,always romancing Geetu haan,keep some for after marriage yar,

Maan grin: why Adi getting jealous tat u cant romance u r GF being close haan

Adi :nice joke but im not in mood

Maan :ok ok wat happen why u called suddenly

Adi : MAAN very imp thing came as u r presence need 2mor

Maan :why wat happen

Adi : gov project PM wants to talk with u and some foreign dilecates are cuming ,so u have to cum here

Maan :but, ok i will be there,he cut te call and call Raghav and give te phone to him,He turn and saw Geet,with her expression he know she have heard it

( THANKU SHAWON FOR TIS BEAUTIFUL EDIT,I CANT RESIST TO POST HERE)

Maan :wo wo

Geet pout :so u r going haan

Maan :we are going

Geet : but we have one more day naa

Maan :Geet its very,before he complete she run away to all and said tat Maan is leaving,

All look at him,he stood like a school kid in front of all

Maan :wo

Sp : wat happen

Maan : oh I have to leave 2mor ,All got startled hearing his words

Ram : wat suddenly

Maan: imp clients, Govts delicates asked to arrange a meeting, msg came from PM office so cant avoid it

Ram : but

All became sad they know all have to leave but wen te moment cums it pained them..

Rani : 2mor pooja

Maan hold her hands : amma pls if u feel sad i cant go, then i wont care abt business and lye on ur lap

Rani even though her eyes welled up,she compose herself and gave a faint smile..with in few months Maan became her own son that she want to keep him with her forever and shower so much love,tats her motherhood for him..but at te same time she know they have a different world which need them,Maan sense her pain and hugged her

Dadi : wen u leaving

Maan : 2mor after noon dadi

Dadi : ok u leave we cum day after 2mor after finishing te pooja ,to SP anna im taking Geet,Maan felt happy to hear tis, as she have to complete her work and till holi she can be there and i want everyone to attend te holi and then i will send all

Sp : u all should also cum till then invitations will also cum and we have to do pooja in our family temple before distributing it

Dadi : ok anna

Saranya : ok now we have moonlight dinner

Vicky : moonlight dinner?

Saranya : haan anna

Swetha : haan chinna maama

Vicky : chinna maama?

Swetha : hmm Maan maama is elder u r younger naa so chinna maama showing her fingers like small

All smile

Swetha : we will have dinner in terrace under moon light our maas will feed us

Anni : it will be very lovely

They left,in cart Geet was grumily and avoid to talk with Maan who was trying to gain her attention..she sat with Rajji and send Anni to his cart,Maan was frowning to see her ignorance

They reached home, it was almost dinner time and Setha asked servants to arrange everything in terrace..they send Nakul and SUNDARI to room as their sr today,with so much shy she enter and then setha asked servant to arrange they dinner in terrace..

All mothers sat with their respectively kids..LK with Venkat Prabhu Ganesh,Valli feeding Ram and Sundaralingam,Setha with Anand and Swetha,Meena with Geet Karthi Rajji,Rani with Maan,Vicky, Saranya, Anni,Rohini with Dinesh ,Saritha,Sarada with Shiva, Janani, Santhose..

Rani was feeding her kids Vicky was overwhelmed seeing all tis and he know he will miss all tis once he left to Delhi not tat he wont get love but tis one is different ..his heart chilled thinking abt going to Delhi after years but his thought was broke wen Rani fed him..Maan too fed rani who took with a smile

Sp : see Savitri no one is there to feed us,all mothers feeding their kids but us

Kasturiammal : why im there to feed u all she feed to SP and Dadi,

All had a wonderful time and decide to sleep in terrace and enjoy as Maan's last day..

PRECAP : DELHI

NEXT PART: 190,PG - 56


Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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NOW BYE BYE TO MADURAI AND BACK TO DELHI.. WITH MY MAANEET AND FAMILY KI MASTI..
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic fight goons misbehave with geet how can maan leave him broke all his bone
maan's power slaped police but commissioner also on maan side, maan solved property matter
geet being romantic
turmeric bath ohooo maan & vicky become their first target but all boys got their dose
omg ayesha abhi turmeric bath maan big j
geet match making nakul& sundaree


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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic Update

Maan worried about his family and at the same time he was shocked to see his Paa's in action Maan's possessiveness is always a highlight for me especially he also gets into heavy action
his love for family is always above everything

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii diii
Lovelu updates ... Fight part was amazing .. Majjja aa gya ... Maan ne bhi apna jalwa dikha dia ... Goons nd inspector shocked maan rocked ... Geet putting paste on maan's hands nd feding him ... Cart part was cute .. Finally back to mumbai ... M eagerly waiting for that ...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
all went to temple rope pulling but very difficult to pull but all pulled together
rashes on maan hand but geet applied paste nicely
naakul and sundaree wedding
travelling in cart maan enjoyed with geet
omg kite playing maan's kite flying very high geet tried to cut the thread but geet finger got cut
kully party
ohhno maan got urgent call to return delhi all are sad hearin this



waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pakka tn update
Loved d tamil taste n t
Am gonna miss madurai🥱
But back n delhi my maaneet ll b all alone n vicky ll gt to know his di btr
Am waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwnnn it was funny, sad, emotional and naughty all at once.. Oh i forgot to metion it was thriller tooo... Love the family bonding.. Maaneet love for eachother and family.. Oh no maan has to go... Lol everyone including adi teasing maaneet.. Cont soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful and Vibrant Update

I really liked the scene where Geet sees Maan's palms are injured due to the rob pulling it was so filled with care and love and concern

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