MG SS:The Snow White Tale.. PART 5 @Pg 38 ~ 25th Nov 2017~ - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Such a cute n sweet update.. I love this cutie pie maan who so eager to tell story to his princess... Awwe.so adorable yaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Nice starting of the story dear...
Loved the cute talks of maan with his snow white...
Beautiful bonding of both the families...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
greate start with little Maan geet at the same age. But going to turn ammy as negative in future. Waiting for next part That with leap of 19 years.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on the new story
loved the cute start of maaneet...
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Thank you soo much for liking and commenting!!🤗
Soo happy reading your comments😃
If this story is not upto your expectation...then plzz forgive me.😒
I am not sooo good in writing

Thank u all for ur support and encouragement😳
Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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(Banner credits to me😆)



PART 2


Soon years rolled by..and Maan and Geet's friendship became stronger day by day. Everyone were well aware of their friendship.Chahe woh school, college mai ya among their relations.But none know the secret love that Maan had for Geet.Yes!!Maan was in love with Geet.Even Geet was unaware of it.From the day they born both had a bonding that none can understanding. Both can't live without seeing each other even for a day.Now too Geet is Maan's Princess and Maan is Geet's Prince.


Maan was afraid that he may lose his Princess if she came to know about his love for her.So he hid it from her.This was the only secret that Geet doesn't know about Maan.And both are highly possessive for each other.Their family always admired their bond while in the outer world many were jealous seeing them and their family.


It was their 21st b'day.Both were eagerly waiting to know what gifts are waiting for them today. Especially Geet was waiting for her Prince gift and Maan was waiting for his Princess gift.Both got up early that day..actually this happens only once in every year that both the buddies wake up at 5 am.


Maan just got off from bed and jumped from his balcony to geet's as both house were nearby and Geet to did the same.And BANGG!!both banged and fell on the floor.Geet opened her mouth to scream but Maan closed her mouth instantly with his palms.Princess don't shout!!Its me ur Prince.

Geet left out a sigh but then her eyes widened in shock.Noo...she can never let this happen.She can't let him wish her 1st.Only she should wish him first.Last year too he wished her first but she will not leave this year.

She bit his palm that covered her mouth and Maan shouted at top of his voice... Ahhh!!!Sherni ahh!! Maan yelled in pain.Though Geet wanted to wish him now but seeing him in pain everything in her mind started to vanish. Tears rolled down her cheeks seeing him in pain.


Sorry Prince.I..I hurt ..you on our ...bir..birth day.I am sorry and she started her sorry puran.Shh!!Its ok baby..see nothing ok.Don't cry plzz.Shona don't cry na Maan can't stand her tears.No..you lie na..its paining na with that she held his hand and started kissing where she bit him.But that kiss was doing something something to Maan😉.He was soo lost in the kiss that whatever Geet was speaking at the moment he couldn't hear.He was completely lost in the feel of her lips.

Prince you are angry on me na..so only you not talking with me na cribbed Geet.I am sorry Prince and she came close to Maan and kissed his cheeks.This was normal in their childhood days but when Maan realised his love for her from that time it always aroused him.That kiss brought out of his GeetLand.Princess.. ur Prince can be angry on you kya...aisa khabhi ko saktha hai.Nahi na.So don't cry samjhi.She nodded like a little girl.Both of them would forget their world if they are with each other and they will become the same 3 year old Maaneet.

Maan took Geet in his embrace and kissed her forehead.

And both wished Happy Birthday Prince/Princess at the same time.Maanuu...my cutie Geet started her buttering. Princess kitni baar kaha hai ki don't call me by Maanu,cutie and whatever the soo called weird names.Tu khabi nahi sudaregi na.Now tell me ab kyun maska lagarahi ho? asked Maan knowing his Princess intensions clearly.Maan can i see my gift..please..please pretty please na asked an very excited Geet.

Ok but i will give my give 1st ok?No cheating in this said Maan.Okkies..ab batha na where is my gift?I want to see..plzz Now Geet was getting impatient.Ok meri maa chalo mere saath.By grabbing her hand Maan took Geet to his room and showed her a basket.Open it Princess..its for you only said Maan.Geet excitedly ran and slowly opened the basket.Inside the basket was a cute little puppy sleeping peacefully.

Geet slowly stroked it and her happiness knew no boundaries.She quickly got up from there ,ran and gave a tight hug to Maan.Thank u soo much Prince!!You are the best and he was showered with numerous kisses on his cheeks.Wah maan beta!!Aaj toh teri lottery lag gayi.My best Birthday ever.Itna saara kisses.Thank u soo much Geet ki babaji self taught Maan while having his love in his arms.

He was lost in that blissful moment.Geet came out of the hug and dragged Maan with her..Princess now where are you dragging me?asked Maan.Ohhfoo mere Idiot Prince..you gave me my gift na..now come i will show yours and continued her dragging.Both started walking but Geet suddenly stooped..ran and took the Puppy with her.Princess ab kutte ko saath mai kyun leke aarahi ho? asked Maan.

Here Geet's anger raised when she heard Maan called the little puppy as Kutta.Prince!!Why are you calling him as kutta? pointing to the puppy inside the basket.Ab kutte ko kutta nahi bulaungi to kaise bukaroon..hmm??Maan wondered why on Earth Geet should ask such silly question only to him.Arre haan..i forgot this completely.Still we didn't decide name for our Baby.Our Babyy?? asked a shocked Maan.

Yes its our baby.Ab fatafat humare baby k liye naam select karo.Both started thinking of some names.Finally Maan came up with the name "Titus".Haan perfect for our Baby..haina baby Geet asked the puppy as if it would understand.Pagli Maan murmured seeing her talking with her..oops their Baby now...😆

And the trio went to Geet what Geet brought for maan.And maan's eyes twinkled seeing the Gift in front of him.OMG!!Princess thank u soo much.The latest bike of 2015 was standing infront of him and Maan was jumping as if a child got his favourite Candy.He couldn't wait more just ran and sat on it and was excited to ride.

Princess come na..lets go for a ride.You should be the 1st..come come and both Maan and Geet went for a long drive along with their Baby.


Evening a grand birthday party was arranged for them.And the big surprise was waiting for the Khuranas as Armaan finally proposed Riddhima whose was the daughter of close friend of Yaswanth Khurana,in front of all.None in the house were against love marriages.All wanted their children's happiness.So everyone agreed wholeheartedly.Maan and Geet were soo happy that they got another company to trouble Armaan.😆

Soon marriage was Armaan and Ridz marriage was fixed.And it was a grand wedding..afterall Khuranas ki bade bete ki shaadi jo hai.And it became true...Maan,Geet and Ridzy never let a chance to trouble Armaan.Their bond was strong and everyone admired it.A Happy Happy Family!!!😃


Precap-🥺


This SS has very few parts less..nearly 2-3😛

All pic credits to Google and Twitter😉

Sorry for grammatical mistakes🤢


Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Simran_Maaneet

Haanji madam next part ..


yess😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

you are updating !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
nice part disha
so maan is in love wit geet bt is afraid 2 confess as he thinks dat he ill loose his princess bth giftd each other their bday gift
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow lovly cute fantastic update..te way my maaneet grown upand my maan ki secret love for his geet was lovely..te way my maaneet ki b'day and both want to wish and they desparate but geet is really no:1 seductress bechare my maan..opps my maan gift her puppy titus their baby and geet gift bike,omg maan babu u r kanjoos ur geet gave u bike but u puppy too bad..i love te update yar

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