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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
part 2 - so pari got less marks and his father blamed him. he wants him to get marry again. but maan doesn't want to. pari is very smart. liked jay saleel convo. he was surprised to see the biodata of geet. he wanted to warn but maan already saw her walking on ramp. geet was very happy to her dream man there. thinks him as her role model. in anger he rejected her. geet was already dead in front of maan. then how she is alive..? seems she lost her memory. how the name is same then.? geet wanted to ask her about her rejection but he refused to give any answer. she was heart broken when he said that her face was the reason he rejected.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
GEET DREAM BREAK DOWN
HE REJECT HER

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Geet is full of lfe
Pari why is she sad
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Maan rejected Geet
And his explanation made her cry poor girl
She is strong enough to fight his accusations


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Waiting For An Update

she updated on previous page, part 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
loved it
Geet is crazy for him
but does Maan even remember her
will his cold heart feel her warmth
n who is d mysterious person
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You updated this one :)
Can you change the title to reflect the new update, many readers would not know about the update otherwise..

Pari is a smart, she knows how to bend others..an angry glare to the tutor and an innocent smile to Saleet..she is missing her mother..
Jay and Saleel in your stories, I always like them for their humor and jovial nature..

so Maan's wife is also Geet..and this Geet..they look alike...are they the same person..but this Geet I guess has just completed her studies..

Geet reached to him, but he is still out of reach...Geet was waiting eagerly all these years to meet him, to work with him, and he closed the doors, by rejecting her because of her face..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ch#3

Even da pleasent morning breeze of park couldnt able to bright her mood. Their first unbeliveble encounter was playing in her mind again & again. Last night was like a cruel wind which took only a moment to shatter her 'castle of cards'. What was hurting most? Her lost of chance,her insult or his cruelty to driver..,his strange face.

"Why are you so sad today?" A sweet chirpy voice broke chain of her throughts. She turned her neck & found her 'Gesture friend of 2 weeks' sitting behind on da attached bench. Pari face was still straight in forward direction. Geet followed her gaze & found dm on her governess who was busy on cell.Pari precaution confirmed her possesive parents dosnt allow interaction wid strangers.Smiling on her tactics Geet replied too looking straight:kuch nhi.
Pari:kuch to hai.fail ho gai?
Colour flew away from her beautiful face.FAIL. .exactly da right word for her"haan fail hogai"
Raising her litte shoulders she said:to kya hua? Fail to men bhi hogai. Aur Robert Bruce ki try try again wali story nhe padi? dubara try kro phir pass ho jao gi?
Geet teasingly hit her head wid her :to tumne try kya dubara.
Licking her chocolate she replied: nhi,wo men ek hi kaam se bore ho jati hun.
Her innocence made her brust into laugh. Thenda colourful butterfly flew away showing her path!

~*~
In Night-
Saleel quickly step down stairs & surprised to saw Maan already headed toward door:is time kahan ki tyari hai?
Maan stopped in his way: .bhool gaey?Michael aaeya tha invite krne
Saleel interrupted:tum Michael k function men ja rhe ho?mujhe to lga tha he has top rank on your hate list.
Maan:No doubt but important for busness.wese bhi u know men apne personal issues ko profession men obstacle nhi bnata.
No doubt he was best. Rudar had retired from buisness due to health issue,leaving all da weight on Maan shoulder. After death of his Geet he dissolved his 24/7 in business. And wid his skills & effort by each passing day he was climbing steps of success,in dis glamouros world widout a single scandal.He added:men manage kr lunga tum Purvi se baat krlo.
Saleel wid a silly smile informed him:wo skype par nhe aaey gi ab direct india hi aaeygi.
Maan:par tum to keh rhe the wo ek month tk America men he stay kregi.
Saleel chuckled:well u cant predict jealous wife.Wo nhe bdli jese tum nhe bdle. .Aaj bhi gam bhulane k lye parties ka bahana.
He felt da expected tension in Maan still body. How best he had been trying to remain composed since last night.. How can nature be so cruel? After snatching his Geet from him, it send a alive stranger in his path with her face even his wife name.

Saleel cud feel da explosion in him. He softly continued: tumhe yaad hai jb pehli baar party mein tum aur Geet mille the.
Maan cut him harshly: Saleel

He finally gathered courage: us ladki ki shakal bikul Geet jesi hai. Usko rokne k bchaey tum ne use bhejh dya.tumhe use jaana chahey tha.

Maan in warning tone:is dunya mein ek shakal aur naam k buht log hote hein. wo meri Geet nhi hai. Aur ye mein ache se janta hun.
Saleel stared quietly at da man infront of him. His friend who was becoming stranger by each passing day. Lose of Love,unjustice of nature hadnt just turned him to old "Maan Khuranna" bt even worst. Throwing bitter good night he left.

~*~

In span of 10 minutes he took third glass of wine. Everything was there to mk it perfect party but too him it was barren like a desert. Floating in memories his eyes sudden caught an unbelivible reftlection which made his heart forget to beat.
The white dress,simple but stylish was making her curvy figure even more delicious. The creamy skin of her exposed legs & shoulders was hinting youth. Her shiny black eyes with that full lips of her were unavoidble for every man present there. But da crown of her beauty was flush dt appeared by just one luk of him. Instead of all her determination & anger she found herself suddenly nervous. Wid her hammering heart she turned her back to him, kept repeating"i have to face him wid confidence.Mujhe khud ko proof krna hai"

Michael turned as his conversation was interrupted by a poke on his back.His clients left as he gave her attention to Tanisha,his buisness partner:anything wrong?
She asked wid her sharp attitude,pointing toward Geet:ye ladki kon hai?
Dev:Geet. .wo
she snapped:mene pehle hi bta dya tha,next assignment sirf Mr.kapoor ki beti ko hi dena hai.hum unse advance le chuke hen.hmare buisness ka jo haal chl raha hai hm sponsor k bger kisi model ko hire nhe kr skte.
Michael ran fingers in his hairs:i know. .Par men use bol chuka hun.Come on baby,try to understand.I dnt wanna lose her.Ek chota mota add dilva denge.wo bhi khush,tum bhi aur men bhi.
He added wid a wink"enjoy da party" & left Tanisha burning wid anger. Womanizer nature of him was getting on her nerve by each passing day. Her less skills & his scandls were doing da bad worst..her bad luck.She dreamily look at da hottest successful man on da earth .Her life,her status,her poistion everythng would change if only Maan Khuranna accept her purposal.

Geet jumped back on finding him standing mere inches away from her. Instead of all her practice she found herself lost of words in cage of his charms. And than his words blown away her mind:What da hell are u doing here?
Stunned on his such rude behaviour, she luked at her both sides to confirm dt dis fury was realy meant to her? And dn raising her chin she snapped:meri shkal shayd itni buri ho skti hai k mujhe select kr k reject krdya jaey par itni bhi buri nhe k koi mujhe party men invite na krey.
Instead of her ladylike composore da childish anger proudly shined on her prky nose.He mocked in too polite way: dusro k comments par experiment aksar mehnge padte hen.
Before she opened her mouth he added in his poisonous tone:Is trhan ki private party men invite krne ka kya matlb hota hai,nhi pta? London se aai ho ya jungle se?
Her jaw dropped wid combination of her saucer eyes.Speechless on her 1st ever insult she stumbld on words:i know. .no i mean.men london se hi aai hun aur men wesi ladki nhe hun.
He snapped:par Michael bilkul wesa hi hai. .I think u know Agr tumhe news padhna aati ho to.
"I hvnt missed a single fashion newspaper or magazine in these last 4 years just because of you" But her lips sealed da reply to herself. Here she was almost vibrating wid emotions & he wid cold eyes,his hand in his pocket was still like a handsome statue. He was da one who did all wrong wid her but now his gaze & words made her feel like she committed some sin. And dn his words blown away her mind"Ghar wapis jao"She blinked & took a long moment to register his command.

"men nhe ja rhi"With dt she passed away from him like a wind,striking her silky hairs on his face.

His heart skip a beat,da similar encounter wid dose silky hairs wid enchanting fragrance threaten to broke his castle walls. His fists clentched as to clear da doubt he once again reminded his wounded heart funeral of his Geet wid his own hand.
Too friendly touches of Dev,cheap advances & disgustive gaze of da other men present there were mkng her feel nausea.She had realized da atmosphere on keeping her 1st step inside.Truth was she wanted to flew away at da moment but founding Maan & his all attention on her gave such pleasent she cudnt put in words.He was odd,rude,arrogant but no doubt he too was da only man who instead of all dis rule her heart.For her "she & her" da rest world is blur. Her heart was almost thundering wid strange pride & joy to feel him following her everywhere. The dances of butterflies in her stomach were non stopable feeling his gaze on her.Her smile shrink as finally Michael found her alone"where were you beautiful?Kb se dhundh raha tha"
Giving a look to his hand which he rested on her back she poliety spoke:its getting late,i think i should go.
Dev: arey abhi to party start hui hai.Drink,music,masti
She slipped his hand away: thank u for inviting & for ur offer.But men aap k sath abhi koi contract sign nhe kr skti.
Michael got irritated on failure to trap dis goldfish. He snapped:acha?To yahan mujhse zyada achi offer mil gai?
Wid sharp attitude she snapped:thats none of your buisness.And by da way offer kon krta hai ye zruri nhe men kise chose krti hun. .ye zruri hai.
Michael realized his wrong step as she started to walk away.For stopping her he grab her wrist:hey i am sorry. .I didnt mean to offense.And in his gentleman style he praise her:you are so talented.Ab tumhari jesi talented model ko khone se bura to lge ga na.But as you wish. .its all your choice ma'am. Waiter come here.
Geet didnt notice his special signal to waiter.He handed her glass taking final step of his plan. .A plan to nt letting go dis chit widout getting a taste!
Her anger might made her refuse da drink but catching eyes of Maan she accepted da glass wid pride.
On Michael request she moved to dance floor. The music felt too loud to her aching head.Her eyes were roaming for Maan when Michael snapped back her attention. She excused:pani.
He slipped away to fulfil her need. Before she cud move A hand on her arm frozed her.
If she could doubt da musky colonge,her knots of stomach confirmed da burning touch only belong to him. And dn her legs felt like rubber when his hot breathy whisper made contact wid her sensitive ear:Come wid me. .Right now.
She watched him slipping down & taking leapord step toward exit .And drown in magic of his husky voice she followed him.

She raised her pace to follow him"ruku,pehle meri baat ka jawab to do. If you are regretting ur decision of dis selecting me so u have to give me a written sorry note first.
Reaching his car he turned in reply to her statement. Noticing his clentchd jaw she shrugged:ok. .Oral appologize bhi chle ga agr thoda polite way men ho to. Aur agr thoda aur polite hua to men soch lungi aap k sath dubara kam krne ka.
Before Maan opened his mouth da chatter box muted herself. And in next moment holding her head she fall on his chest.
Holding her both arms he shook her.Checking her breath he patted her cheeks.On her constant uncncious response,carryng in his arms he slipped her in his car. .
Unaware Michael was capturing each moment in his cell.

Precap:. ...made her realize da man of her dreams is father of a child.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ch#4


Jay: Next please.
From camera lense his eyes went to her & dn in disbelief dy continued their journey up from her toe to head. Long white skirt wid baggy blue t-shirt wid big black spectacles. .a Strange attire for any model at time of shot. But he could not deny da fact there was something to hold his gaze. The way she was standing wid a pose of lieutant felt quite new & interesting to him. Sipping his coffee he stared her openly dn keeping da cup aside he walked to her. She remain still as he circled around her"Not too good but not dt bad. .Size kya hai tumhara?"
A momment of silence passed dn followed by a loud thunder slap.Jay jumped back from da insane wild cat:what da. .Are u mad?Ye kis lye?
Keeping her hands on her hips she snapped: tumhari himmat kese hui meri friend ko select kr k reject krne ki? Contract law32 parha hai? Men iske lye court tk jaungi.tumhe jail kra skti hun men.
Jay stared her bewildred as she continued:pta hai tum log ki wja wo kitni ulti hrkate krti phir rhi hai. Agr use koi bhi nuksan pouhncha to tumhari kheyr nhe? Smjhe.
She turned again:aur ye tumhare ladies k sath cheap way of greeting k lye.
Before Jay realized she stomped her foot on his,making him jerked back to his desk in pain. She flew away while Saleel walked in hearing his "aaao".Saleel brust into laugh noticing his hand on cheek & raised leg: itni ladkyon k sath tumhe akele chod k mujhe hmesha dar tha k ek din to ye dekhna pade ga.
Jay frowned: pagal thi. .ab modeling k lye aese dhyele kapre pehn k aai hai to size to pouchna pade ga na.Bdi aai apne aap ko DDLJ ki Kajol smjhti hai?
Noticing Saleel raised eyebrow he added: thapad mara mujhe.
Saleel smiled at him: thapad itihas mein aksar love stories ka start hota hai. Lets see what it has in store for you.
Ignoring Jay confusion he asked:Maan ko dekha?Wo hai kahan?
Jay:apne cabin men hain. .Kaha koi disturb na krey.sb meetings bhi cancel kr di.
Saleel nodded & dn realized his odd behaviour was some how related wid last night. .

~*~

Geet opened her eyes & instantly got rub crushing hug from Shefali whose joy had no limit"tum theek ho,tum theek ho,tum theek ho"
Geet tried to tk breath: agr tu ne nhe choda to ab mar jaungi.
She sat up holding her heavy head. Shefali applying jam on bread:breakfast krle,phir hum park chlte hen.tujhe acha lge ga. Mene aaj college se off lya hai.
Finally remembering everything she whispered: men ghar kese aai?
Shefali kept it down:tumhe is trhan unconcious dekh kr to men buht dar gai thi.par i am happy to know tum safe ho,unharm ho. .
Geet again asked: mujhe kon chod k gya?
Seeing Shefali irritated Geet gasped: WO?
Shefali frowned to saw her go all dreamy:t o?hua bhi to sb Mr.Khuranna ki vja se hai na? Na wo tumhe reject krte aur na tum us ghatya Michael ki party men jati.
Instead of Shefali bhashn da salsa of butterflies continued in pit of her stomach.Her dazed words interrupted Shefali: mujhe god men uthaya hua tha?
Shefali irritated:haaan. .unhune he tumhe gadi men bhitaya aur phir god men utha kr yahan bed par bhi chod k gaey. Doctor ko bhi bulvaya,jb usne kaha tum theek ho phir gaey. Aur mujh par bhi barse k men apni Pagal dost ko smjha lun. .aur kaha na tum Michael k sath kam kro gi aur naa hi uske office ya party men nazar aani chahey ho. Men bhi sunati par raat itni hogai thi aur tumhe is haal men dekh kr men itna ghbra gai thi. .Par men sari ksar abhi puri kr k aai hun.
To Geet look Shefali added: boss to miley nhe. .to us bdtmez Shahrukh ko khub suna kr aai hun.
Shefali shook her head:just forgt it. .Breakfast kr men coffee le kr aati hun. Park chlte hen.
As she went,Geet couldnt help to hold her smile back. Pressing knees to her chest she dreamily tasted "Pagal" on her lips.

~*~

"Kyun?" dt was da 1000th time he asked himself. In panic he got up from chair & luked at his reflection who was accusing him"Kyun. .Kal raat ko tum ne jo kuch bhi kya wo kyun kya?insanyt k naate tumhe ek anjan masoom ladki ki fikr hui thi? Ya phir guilt tha k tumhar unjustice ki vja se wo galt logo men phas rhi hai? Ya phir ye sirf tumhari kamzori aur dil ki bebasi thi. .sirf us chehre ka jadu. hansta,bolta phir se sanse leta. .
He stepped back & soon da big vase hit da mirror wid such force dt scatterd it like sand.

~*~

Michael grin luking at da pictures of Maan & Geet. .which he captured last night. Ruining his pious,heroic image will surely brought loss to his buisness & surely gain to his. He decided not to tell Tanisha & wait for da right time. .He locked da pics in safe & whispered: Kash ye Geet bhi mera sath dene k lye tyar hojaey to dekho is Maan ki goodwill ki men kese dhajya udata hun. Sare bdle ek sath hi le lunga.
He couldnt able to belive his luck when Geet no. flashed on screen. Michael acted all innocent:hi Geet. .Hw r u?aese achank kahan chli gai thi kal?Hr kism k log be hue the party men. .
Geet interrupted: mere sar men dard ho rha tha. .anyway mene pouchne k lye call ki hai?
She hesitated:jo kl aap add film ki offer kr rhe the kya wo aaj bhi hai?
Michael grinned: 1st of all aap nhe tum. .Aur tumhare lye to men hmesha hi availble hun sweety.
Geet:thankx. .to phr men kb aaun?
Michael:kal shaam ko. .aur haan apne sar ka dard thek kr k aana kyunke dinner hum sath krenge.
Wid a fake sweet Bye,Geet ended da call & met wid Shefali burning gaze. Shefali kept popcorns beside on bench & snapped: Geet tum pagal ho?Kal k baad tumhe realize nhi hua ye sb kitna dangerous ho skta hai?
Geet: haan realize hogya k yehi ek way hai jis se men bar bar usko dekh skti hun.
She hold Shefali hands: men nhi janti kyun ya phir kya hoga. .Par men Maan ko us 4 saal pehle ki raat k bare men btana chahti hun. .ye btana chahti hun men use kbhi ek pal k lye bhi nhe bhuli.Aur kal raat ko Michael ki party men uska behaviour dekh kr lgta hai wo mujhe mile ga bhi,sune ga bhi aur ho skta hai mujhe wapis bhi select kr len.
Before Shefali opened her mouth in protest she ceased her worry wid her beautiful smile:aur wese bhi record hai mera knight in shining armour mujhe kbhi kuch nhe hone deta.
After tight girly hug dy picked their popcorn & started walking toward her car.Like always her eyes roamed for Pari to gesture her Bye. She smiled luking her cute skills in playing football. Than da smile replaced by horror as da ball went to road.Throwing popcorn away she ran toward her. . .

~*~

"aaaouch" She screamed on top of her voice as nurse cleaned wound on her leg.Not much deep but visibly long.Shefali sooth her head: ab superwoman ki trhan bchi ko accident se bchao gi to chot to aai gi na? Miss beauty bhool jao koi bhi shot jb tk ye heal ho kr fade nhe hota.
Geet instantly: kesi hai wo?Use chot to nhe lgi.
The mere thought of her pain made Geet heart ache.Nurse: wo bilkul thek hai.Ek khroch bhi nhe par dar ki vja se behosh hai.Dad aa gaey hen uske.
Geet sat up in anger. Shefali: kahan ja rhe ho?
Geet: us stupid dad ki class lene.kese parents hen jo apni choti si bchi ko aese servants k ouper chod dete hen.
Before Shefali stopped her she marched out to Pari room. Shefali too followed her & gt confused seeing Geet frozed at da entrance. She went near her & followed her gaze..da sight too blown away her mind.

He was not at all luking Dynamic Khuranna who was used to mk people dance on rhythm of his fingers but only a father. .worried,helpless,miserable. He raised his head, tears were visible on his handsome grantie face. He kissed pari hand enclosed in his"i am sorry baby" He kissed her forehead: mere pass to tumhare elawa kuch bhi nhe hai. agr tumhe kuch ho jata to men kya krta? tumhare lye hi to je rha hun. .warna kb ka mar jata.
After Geet death Maan almost had taken 2 years to come back in social life..to see Pari. There was no doubt on his love for Pari but in all these painful year he became too weak & vulnrble from inside. The fear of getting hurt again was creating distance between him & his precious love ones.
Kissing her again he whispered: please forgive me. .Agr tum mujhe maaf nhe krogi to tumhari mom bhi mujhe maaf nhe kre gi.
She jerked back holding her breath...the man of her dreams belongs to someone else.. father of a child. The realization shatterd her heart in million pieces.

~*~

Sid took another bite of delicious sandwich:haan suna hai. .Yahan Delhi aane se pehle Sir ki shadi hui thi Shimla men. unki baby ek month ki thi jb unki wife ki death hogai thi, shayd accident tha. Sir apni personal life k bare men sawal jawab pasand nhe krte to zyada kuch nhe pta kisi ko. Unki beti ko bhi aaj tk office men nhe dekha. Servants par he hai sari responsibility. He admired:looks,paisa sb kuch hai par itne saalo men kbhi kisi ladki ko unke kareeb nhe dekha. Apni wife se buht pyar krte hen. .tum kahan khoi hui ho Geet?
Shefali luked at Geet all calm & composed but she could feel da storm inside her. In just a night her face had become pale & eyes empty & swallo from cry. Geet smiled faking da pain:. .Maan Khuranna is adorable in each way.
Pushing her untouched sandwich away she got up from bed & walk to terrace: tum log khao. .I think i need some fresh air. .mera dm ghut rha hai.
Sid confused asked her: whats wrong?And dn teased: lgta hai medicine zyada he karvi hai.
Shefali:gehri chot thek krne k lye dva karvi istmal krni padti hai. Ek hi bar ki tkleef hai phir to aaram hi aaram hai.
Getting meaning of Shefali words she marched out quickly holding back her tears.

~*~

Khuranna House-At dining

Purvi:i am so sorry Maan. .Mujh Pari ko chod k aese America nhe jana chahey tha.
Rudar interruptd: tum khud ko kyun ksur war thehra rhi ho. Kal jo kuch bhi hua usme sari galti sirf Maan ki hai.
Maan kept his spoon down: meri?
D.K: haan tumhari.Pari ko maa ki zrurt hai jo uske lye uski maa kr skti hai wo koi bhi nhe krskta.
Maan snapped :uski maa mr chuki hai.Mere kisi bhi aurat se shadi krne se wo uski maa nhe bn skti.
Rudar wid equal fury: bn skti hai.Kyunke wo apni maa k bare men kuch nhe janti,naam tk nhe. Isi din ko asan bnane k lye mene kbhi Geet ki tasveer nhe dikhane di use.tumhare lye new start krna asan hai.
Maan got up,unable to bear any more: mere pass servants ki fauj hai,mene guranted governess k lye bhi apply kya hai aur wese bhi Purvi hai uska khyal rkhne k lye.
Maan turned to left but Rudar words made him pause: ab nhi rkh skti.She is pregnant.
Maan surprired lukd at Saleel & Purvi who were luking quite & hesitant. No doubt after all these years of their marriage dis was da most precious happiness for them for him but dn da realization too hit him in next moment. .After two miscarges her condition was so delicate specially to run behind his naughty devil.

Maan:Congratulation.
They nodded Saleel assured him: tum pareshan mt ho.
Maan cut him:tumhare hote hue men kese pareshan ho skta hun? Itna kuch to kya tum ne mere lye. .Purvi bs ek request hai. Governess k lye kal interviews le lo. Salary double triple krdo par 24 hours jo uske sath reh ske..Kya skills aur qualification require hoti hai. .mujhe nhe smjh aata ye sb.
The way he whispered those last words wid helplessness made their heart ache. Holding her tears she nodded while Maan went away.

~*~

Mrs.Jenny,da 12th 'hope-to-be-governess' too left disappointing Purvi & she waited for da next hopefully. Rudar joined her for evening tea:i think u should tk rest.
Purvi: 5 bje tk ka time hai interviews k lye,abhi half hour hai thoda aur wait kr leti hun.
Rudar stared out through da glass wall to check Pari who was playing in lawn. Purvi:aap Pari k sath khel rhe the?Aap ne medicine le kr rest nhe kya?
Rudar smiled:khelne ki to himat nhe hui bs uske pass hi bhetha.Itni shaitan ho rhi hai hr waqt nazar rkhni padti hai. Aur wese bhi uska mood buht khrab hai governess ko le kr.
Purvi:haan mujh par bhi gussa hai.Lunch bhi nhe kya.use koi governess pasand hi nhi aa rhi aur sch kahun to mera bhi dil nhe maan raha.

Rudar::tum aur Saleel Maan ko smjhate kyun nhe ho.use is haal men chod k men skun se mr bhi nhe paunga.
Purvi assured him:aap pareshan mt hun. .Bhagwan kisi na kisi ko zrur bheje ga.
And than she frozed at da sight infront of her.The servant guide Geet inside in living room. Her lose black pant comfortbly hiding her bandage leg,White high neck wid pink jacket suited to her style & chilly evening. Seeing Purvi face white Rudar turned & abruptly got up in disbelief. They watched her widout a blink. Confused on their odd behaviour Geet gave hesitate smile. Placing chocolates & teddy down on table she decided to introduce her own self: hello. .I am Geet.
Their shock cudnt be described in words.
"Geet" da cute,chirping voice echoed around as Pari ran to her. She bent down to welcome Pari loving hug. She complained wid a cute pout: mene tumhe buht miss kya,mujhe koi park aane he nhe de rha tha.
Purvi & Rudar luked at eachother in horror. Pari made Geet sat by pulling her hand & yelled on top of her voice: choco flakes le kr aao. .meri friend aai hai. She told her dadu & aani:ye meri park wali friend hai aur meri saviour bhi.
Geet interrupted her:park men do din se dekha nhe tha to. .Her eyes fall on da Cvs of governess: interview chl rha hai?
Pari: par mujhe koi governess nhe chahey.Wo sb buht buri hoti hen.
Her words didnt made any sense to them because deir mind was strike by power of nature. Same face,Same smile but still so different. Geet but still not Geet. .Cant!


"What da hell u r doing here?"their shell of shock broke by Maan roar. Geet breath hitched up. Ofcourse she was nt expecting work alcohlic Maan Khuranna returned to home before 7;courtesy Saleel. Honestly da reason of her visit was her worry for Pari, an innocent desire to see dis angle safe & healthy.
Before Saleel stopped him he marched to her. She stood up,totaly confuse on his burning anger: wo men Pari. .
He snapped: Pari ko kese janti ho tum?
Geet slowly: Park men. .
"ye tumhari wja se hua?" On such insulted accusing her voice too raised in anger & hurt: kya mtlb,men aesa kyun krungi?
And than his eyes caught scatterd papers on table: oh. .Modeling men luck nhe chla to ab mun utha kr governess bne aa gai? Kahe bhi kud padti ho? Pagal ho ya dusro k pagal smjhti ho. tum men aesa kya hai jo tumhe lgta hai tumhi select hogi?


The proper reply was"you are getting wrong"but instead ye snapped: haan men hi hongi. Jo insanyt k naate ek ajnbee bchi ki bger kisi mtlb jaan bcha skti hai. Wo salary le kr us k khud k baap se bhi zyada khyal rkh skti hai.
His family eyes were wide in shock to see some one standing infront of him wid equal stubborness & raised chin. .After so long.The servants condition were nt diferent.After long moment of silence he looked Pari who was standing petrified & staring him like a stranger. Like always scare of his anger: papa agr ye nhi pkrti mujhe aa kr to car mujhe hit kr deti.Mujhe chot nhi lgi par is k paun se khun nikla tha.
And her next words made Geet jump in shock: and i ll to love have her my governess.oh please papa
All faces turned to Rudar hearing his: to phir done.
Maan looked him in disbelief: what?
Realizing da shine of hope in his father eyes, he reminded:u dnt even know her. What about guarntee?
Saleel:Sid. .jo 3 saal se hmara accountant hai. Uski family friend hen. .sath he stay kya hua hai.
Getting angry glare of Maan Saleel instantly:par chose to Purvi ne krna hai. .tum ne he kaha tha.Right?
Purvi whose eyes were still glued on Geet,whispered: tumhe dekh kr naa krne ka sawal he paida nhi hota.

Geet dead shock, shook her head:par men. .
Her eyes met wid threatning gaze of Maan. And instead of all her mind yelling she replied: i ll join from tomorow..for a trial.
What these seven days have in store for them?

Sorry for mistake.So much busy.Kindly let me know if da story is worth reading & i shud continue it or not.

Thank u so much for reading.Plz do commen

Edited by AAKMH2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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How could even you doubt about your writing? You are the gem of a writer so please keep on writing always like this, can't express how much I love your stories, the dialogues, the descriptions of love scenes, everything is perfect so don't even think to quit nd please do continue rest of your past wor ks too. Thanks a lot for back to back updates.

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