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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4

😆 a slap to Jay from Shefali..perfect start of their love story..
so Geet agreed to work with Dev to get a chance to meet her Knight in shining Armour..
but she does not have to take that risk now, by accident (also because of Pari's accident) she was chosen to be the governess of Pari..


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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5

Pari is missing her mother...her reaction to the Cinderella story was like she will do anything to get her mom or new mom for her..
Geet has won the heart of Pari and everyone in the house, while Maan is trying to find a reason to remove her from the job..her face reminds him of his Geet and for him no one can take the place of his wife..
but the dynamics between then are changing living in the same house..Will she remain the Geet and will he remain the cold and rude Maan during her stay...

PS - can you change the title for the update of chapter 5 as well.. :)

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just read all the 5 parts.Nice storyline.I really enjoyed reading it.continue soon
Can u plz pm me whenever u update?
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Ch#6
krle kabool Khudaya mere sajde
ab to naseeb men use mere likh dey


Pari ran away from Geet: No No No.Aaj sunday hai mujhe breakfast nhe krna.Bs aaj hum khelenge.
Geet followed her out in lawn wid glass of milk:sunday hai to kya?Chutti school se hoti hai khane se nhi.
Chlo ab ye jaldi se peeo.
Pari made face:i hate milk.
Geet tried to mk her understand:milk men buht sare vitamins hote hen.Ise peene se jaldi bde hote hen,aur strong bhi.
The little chuby girl dressed in jeans & pink t-shirt,like Geet finally showed some interest in hearing her lecture. Pari extended her hand:phir to men isko apne fav plant men dalti ho ta ke wo jaldi se tree bn jaey. Men kaka se kehti hun sara milk dedo. Ab hum plants ko pani nhe denge Milk hi denge.Theek hai?
Geet pulled da glass away from her approch & rolled her eyes"aur mujhe lga tha men ek hi item hun dunya men":jii nhe.ye tum hi peeo gi.Aur phir baad men sari games.
Pari:ek idea hai. .Hide & Seek khelte hen.Agr men har gai to ye milk men pilungi wrna aap peo ge.
Geet gave up:done par milk bhi peeo gi aur phr hum hm koi game nhe khelenge bs chup chap beth kr drawing kro gi.
Pari wid a smirk:ok. .no problem.Wese bhi Jeetungi to men.
Geet placed da glass on nearby table & Pari tied black cloth around her eyes & started to ran around her.The pleasent memories of her childhood became more beautiful in Pari musical laughter.Following her hearing instinct she tried to follow Pari &Felt da edge of lawn in her step,she complained:area se bahr kyun ja rhi ho.
Pari ran to pool side:area kb decide hua tha.Wid giggle she tease:pkar k dikhao.
Geet:cheater. .tumhe to men btati hun.
Pari laugh instantly disappear as she saw Maan coming out from house in pool area.Following his sunday time table he took out his shirt to get ready for pleasent sunday swim.Pari tried to alert Geet but she was so far from her to hear her whisperd warning.As Maan walk toward pool,Pari ran opposite to lawn side,quietly as possible.
Hanging his bathrob he started to unzip his trouser when da sudden female voice froze him in shock.Geet unknowingly kept walking to him:acha ab ye wali trick?tumhe kya lgta hai tum awaz nhe krogi to men tumhe pkr nhe skti?Champion hun men is game ki. .
Maan was still rooted on spot in shock to find her in such childish manner.And dn she grabbed his bare arm wid joy:pakkar lya.
But in less dn a second da joy replaced by horrible confusion.He remain still as her delicate,soft hand explore his broad shoulder & muscular chest.And dn she instantly pulled da cloth away from her eyes & da sight made her jump back in horror.Her high heels cudnt bare her stunt & she lost her blance.
Her eyes sequeezed shut in fear to drenched in cold water of pool in such embarrassing way.But dn she felt a tight grip on her hand & he pulled her back before its too late.Her one foot was still hanging so he wrapped his arm around her which made her delicate curvy figure crushed into his hard one.Her heart beat wildly & her body became paralyze in magic of closeness wid him.Feeling warmth of his skin against her set her whole body on fire.The unknown desire to seep inside him,to ran her fingers on his soft steel torso throbbed inside her dangerously.She raised her head up & open her heavy eyes.Her throat became dry,her legs became rubber to saw reflection of storm inside her in his eyes.Those brown eyes flickerd like fire of hell in golden day light where instead of knowing all da danger she wanted to drown for ever.Her breathing became noisy noticing his parted lips..so full,so soft so promising.Her alcohlic sense wiped wid reality when wid a jerkd he pulled away.Noticing da frown return to his handsome face she blabrd:Wo Pari dudh nhe pee rhi thi. .
As he remain silent she continued to defend herself:khel to lawn men hi rhe the . .Pta nhe kese yahan.I know la parvai dangerous hoti hai par. .par Pati mene apni aankhon par bandhi thi,pari k nhi. .
"tumhe chot lag skti thi"


Hearing his unexpected reply in dt soft tone frozed her in shock.She luked up him in shock."Koi hai jo mujhe kbhi koi chot lgne nhe deta" The words slipped from her heart to mouth. How could she control to express her feeling when her dream man was standing mere inches away from. .Not arrogant Mr.Khuranna but just his Maan.Before she lost more senses,biting her soft lip she chosed to walk away."Chot kesi hai tumhari?"
Her heart danced in joy to see his concern. She felt gose bumps all over her as his silky voice rolled over her. Pushing her silky hair strand behind her ear she whispered:t heek hai.
He was staring in space but she felt his eyes all over her:off le kr doctor k chli jana. .I think stiches re check honge.
Her face became scarlet.The butterflies in her stomach started salsa.She found her tounge tied so simply nodded & almost ran away from there.
Maan gaze followed her till she enterd inside & than he noticed his dad sitting in lawn. .wid all his attention focused on him.
Runing hand in his he wore his shirt back & walked to lawn to join his dad for tea.Maan:Good Morning dad. .mujhe lga aap so rhe the.
Rudar:men kafi deyr se bhetha hun,par tum masroof the.
Maan poured tea for himself:Wo gir rhi thi. .mene smbhal lya.
Rudar:dts very good.mujhe koi aitraz nhe.
Noticing Maan warning glare Rudar laughed:bchi k baap bn gaey ho par phir bhi aaj tk nhe bdle.apni feelings se darna. .sch se chupna.bilkul bchpan jese.
After a long pause he answered in his hard stone tone:i think u r right dad.wo jawan hai,khubsurat hai.ada hai,glamorus hai. .
Rudar stared him in shock as he continued:achi lag skti hai.Par sirf wese. .jese kisi bhi aadmi ko koi bhi aurat lg skti hai.Par Maan ko "Geet" nhe lag skti.
That was truth. He was ashmed of his behaviour wid her,finally admitted dt it is nt her fault if she has face of his "Geet". This curse is only crueltly of his fate. So he decided to be strong, to behave her like any other woman. No doubt a beautiful woman wid all da charms.. Wild hairs, dazed eyes, soft parted lips, figure wid all da perfects curves & slopes. Charms wid dt precious face might successful to threat his damn man weakness but never ever able to conquer castle of his heart. Leaving untouched cup of tea he got up & marched away from there.

Geet face was scarlet in joy. She was nt able to stop her smile for a mere moment."tum jo is trhan muskura rhe"
Geet blushed as Saleel sing questionly to her. To his raised eye brow Geet stammred: kuch bhi to nhe.
Pari came: men btati hun.Hum sb ladies shopping par ja rhe hen islye khush hen.
And grin at Geet: ab game draw hogai. Khelna aur nhe khelna decide nhe ho skta to shopping par he chlte hen.
Geet wid equal smirk: Tb. .Jb aap dudh k bjaey Corn flakes khaeyngi.
Before Pari could protest Geet called for maid.
Saleel pulled her in lap: "Ladies" itna zulm?Aaj sunday hai phir bhir akele akele plan.
Purvi sitting across him: kyunke kuch logo k pass wese bhi sunday ko bhi time nhe hota.
Saleel became confused & dn suddenly rememberd da meeting: arey haan wo.Par kya tum bhi ja rhe ho?
Purvi made face: kyun?Kya men ladies men nhe aati?
Saleel shook his head: no. .yes.I mean doctor ne tumhe aaram krne ko kaha hai.
Purvi: to tumhara mtlb hai men 9 mnths ek he jga bheti rahungi.
Geet watched in aww as dy argued wid eachother. Purvi: Geet bhi to hai na mere sath..Bs men ja rhi hun decide hogya.
Geet excused herself to answer her ringing cell:hi Shefali. Whtsupp?
Shefali sacrastically: kuch nhe.Yehi souch rhe thi.tum ne un sb ko god le lya hai ya unhune tumhe? Ek call tk nhe ki.
Geet: men krne wali thi.Shefali interupted:call ko chod.Aa milte hen.Kya sunday ko bhi off nhe hai?
Geet bit her lip: haan wo . .men tumhe sms krti hun address.tum aa jao.
~*~

Shefali was burning wid fury,nt because on finding Purvi & Pari but Jay-da duffer wid Geet. Saleel gave up to her stubborn wife but ordered Jay to accompany her. The shopping was fun. .wid Pari excitment,Geet & Purvi chatting & Jay, Shefali glaring. Geet noticed Purvi absence & found her sitting on da corner bench. She walked to her:aap thek hen?Jay k sath ghar chli jaeyn.
Purvi: nhi,men thek hun. Aur abhi thodi shopping bhi reh rhe hai.
Geet: to hum kal krlenge.
Purvi: nhe. .Kal k lye hi to shopping kr rhi hun.Kal shams darbar par urs hai.
To Geet confuse gaze she added: hr saal hota hai.kehte hen jo kal ki tarekh men wahan chadr chdata hai,mnt ka dhaga bandhta hai uski hr chaht puri hoti hai. Is lye bche ki hifazt ki dua k lye men kal wahan jaungi..tum ne nhe dekha na kbhi?Chlogi mere sath.?
Geet in excitement: bilkul. .Par men pehnu gi kya?I mean.
Purvi smiled: to ek salwar suit ki shopping krlete hen.Tum par acha lge ga.
Geet teased: mene kbhi nhe pehna phr aap ko kese pta?Acha lge ga?
Purvi smile fainted bt dn she forced it:mujhe pta hai. .
Geet became confuse on her sudden quiteness.But still she asked:ek baat pouchni thi..Kal mujhe Pari se pta chla usne apni maa ko kbhi nhe dekha.Tasveer tk nhe.Aesa kyun?
Purvi:uncle ka kehna tha. .dekh kr use zyada tklef hogi.
Geet protest:par ma'am ye uska right hai. .Galt hai uske sath aesa krna.
Parvi stood up,uncomfrtble to cntnue da convo wid hiding so much:jese uncle aur Maan ki marzi.Men kuch nhe kr skti.Aur ma'am mt bola kro mujhe.
Geet:par
Purvi:dii bolegi to mujhe zyada acha lge ga,infact itna acha jitna tum soch bhe nhe skti


Shefali picked da dress & checked herself in trail mirror."Absolutely Sexy"Shefali brust into anger hearing Jay voice. She turned:how dare you?
Jay who was selecting shirt for himself turned in confusion: kya tkleef hai?
Shefali snapped:agr Geet ki wja se men tumhe brdasht kr rhe hun.Iska ye mtlb nhe tum apni limit cross kro.
Jay:tum Geet ki dost ho islye men tumhe brdasht kr rha hun.Iska ye mtlb nhe men tumhara pagl pan brdasht krun.
Shefali:tumhari cheap baton ka jawab dena pagalpan hai?
Jay:mene kya cheap kya?
Shefali:ye jo tum ne mujhe "Absolutely Sexy" kaha wo cheap nhe?
Jay eye wided:tumhe? Wo mene khud ko dekh kr kaha.hr ladki itni lucky nhe jise Jay compliment dey.
Shefali: my foot.men un stupid ladkyon men se hun bhi nhe. Smjhe?
Tossing her hairs she left,While Jay in anger stared himself in mirror: ye baat hai?Jay ka jadu kis par bhi chl skta hai.Chahe wo "jin ki nani" Shefali hi kyun na ho.

Purvi payed for da new salwar suit: ye meri trf se gift.
Geet quickly: nhe. .Ye men nhe le skti.Men khud payment krungi.
Purvi: abhi tumne mujhe apni dii manna na?Ye hmare rishte k new start par gift.
Geet opend her mouth to protest but Purvi didnt let her finish: bdi behn k samne koi bolta hai kya?
Geet shook her head in no & hug her.

~*~

Dressed in red salwar suit Geet walked in dargah wid Purvi,covering her head wid dupatta.The atmosphere was so sacred,so heavenly. She watched everyone action in amazement. After putting chadr & tieng dhaga Puri stood in line to tk special blessing from baba. As Geet found her distracted she slipped away & walked to prayer area. Her heart throbbed violently as she took "mant ka dhaga" and went to tie it. Closing her eyes she whispered"hr chaht puri ho skti hai. .to meri bhi hoskti hai naa. .Maan"
She opened her eyes & frozed in shock to see Maan there. Far away from her,in da crowd of men he was standing there raising his hand & closed his eyes.
She walked near him to confirm her doubt but equally careful to keep herself hidden in shadow.
The humblnss on his once proud face strike her deeply. Dressed in simple blank pant & white shirt he was standing lost in his own world. When he raised his head from floor da shining tears left no doubt about his wish,about his prayers. The way he luked up at sky wid hope. .instead of knowing da bitter reality of life & death made her eyes full of tears. She backed away as he like all da other people tie dhaga wid all da belief.
Hearing Purvi voice she turned,wipping away her tears. Purvi:kahan chli gai thi tum?Men kb se dhund rhe hun?
"agr di ko pta hota Maan k aane kaa to sath men aate na?" Geet stole a glance of Maan & turned Purvi in other direction to secure his self respect: men bs ye sb dkh rhi thi.
Purvi: driver phone hi nhe utha rha.Jo dan k lye gram kapre khri dey wo car men hen.mngane hen.
Geet: aap wahan aaram se bheto men lati hun.

Carryng da bags in both hands she climbed da stairs but stopped finding Maan descendng. His eyes finally met wid her. The shock on getting caught instantly masked. Geet:men Purvi di k sath aai . .
Maan: janta hun.
Geet: par mujhe lgta hai. .wo nhe janti k aap yahan aat.e ho


Yes no body knows dt from last seven years he had been coming years here.
Maan: janta hun.
He was about to walk away when Geet spoke:na btane ki koi khaas wja?
Maan paused: yehi k btane k lye kuch nhi. .
Wid warning he added: Shayd men nhe chahta,mere mangne par sawal ho.


Geet wid confidence: mangne par sawal kese ho skta hai?. .kehte hen mange se to Khuda bhi mil jata hai.Mohabbat to phir Mohabbat hai.


Dumbstrk by her right guess he stared her in disbelief. She gasped as her dupatta slipped from her head in result of pleasnt breeze. She helplessly stared her full hands, cursing da wrong timing of stupid wind. She frozed as his hand raised & hold her flowing dupatta & put it back on her head. .dn left her behind hypnotize in his charm.


Precap:kbhi jo badal barse. . .

So here is da updt,
Hope u like it.
Ab dnt be kanjoos. .Do Comments & Hit Like
thankx for reading

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Maan finally realised that Geet's face being same as his ex wife is not her fault. They have a strange connection which can't be denied.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
maan ko apni galti realise huya ...n woh geet se softly baat kr raha hai...
pari she is so noughty ...
geet ne mannat mei maan ko manga hope uski mannat jldi puri ho jaye...
can't wait for next part... plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ud geet behind pari but she's not ready to drink milk
maan behavior change towards geet as he realize that her face is not hr mistake

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update... maan behaviour s changing...hope geet ki mannat puri hogi...
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6
Lovely update
Geet and pari are bonding well with each other.Maan realised his mistake and is trying to behave normally with geet.The darga meeting was symbolism of their future relationship.
Precap is interesting.Waiting for next part.

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