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- 177

Maan just run and suddenly dashed on a person

Maan : sory Person : sory


Both said together and both look at each other and felt they world crushed under they feet..Maan freezed, te paper in his hands dropped down..

Maan whole body became numb he cant even move an inch,his eyes struck on te person without blinking thinking its dream or real..his heart pounching fast,his legs frozed,he hold te pillar to support himself

The person in front of him was also not less than him,right now shock is a small word,he never thought he will cum face to face of his past which he left behind years back,he want to rush to him and hug him cry his heart and beg for forgiveness

But compose himself thinking abt his guilty, his legs turned to move but stood still hearing his name after so long from some one,his name, his identity which he buried himself with his own hands, first with his anger and then with his guilty
Geet felt happy to see both but seeing him moving she cant be quite so try to stop him

Geet : VICKY SINGH KHURANA ,Khurana freezed


FLASHBACK

Last night Geet was sitting watching te stars thinking abt Maan and his surprises..she felt out of world and want to do some thing for him,she want him to remember tis day forever..suddenly she felt some one tapping her and she look and smile seeing Ram..

As Ram came to get water he saw Geet going to terrace he know her from childhood if she is extreme happy or sad she wont sleep and today she was so happy,he followed Geet and saw her sitting,he went near and sat beside her

Geet leaned on him: im so happy today
Ram : i know kutty maa, Ram's habit to call her
Geet : but i didt do anything for him
Ram : love never expect, he wont expect
Geet : but i want to do some thing to give him also a unforgettable day in his life,he made my day maama im so lucky to have him in my life
Ram caress her hair : how long u will hide him
Geet raised herself and look at him then it clicked: VICKY,Ram node Geet eyes beam in happiness,thanku maama but suddenly her face felt low
Ram : wat happened
Geet : maama im scared wat if he again run away..now atleast he is in front of our eyes,if again we lost him,I cant forgive myself
Ram : how long he can hide himself, any how one day he have to face everyone why not today and u said his pov changed now then
Geet : but still


Ram : its time Geeta let him face his family once he met them and see with his eyes wat they going thru he never think to part from them, Geet look at him,Ram kissed her forehead, try once,Geet node and hugged him everything will be fine
Yes wat Ram said is correct how long he will hide himself let him face but she cant do it alone she thought,and one person came n her mind at once, and mission started with a help of tat person who she can trust

Geet : thanku maama and she run,Ram smile and thought abt 2mor which going to be great day

Ram look at sky : bless us appa

FLASH BACK ENDS

Geet : : VICKY SINGH KHURANA

Vicky : so u know
Geet : yes
Vicky : u all cheated me, he want to get rid of tis place as he felt ashamed to face his family thinking he left them in their worst situation and now he don't have rights to return to their life, he thought if he hurt them they will hate him and wont feel sad for his absence


Geet: Cheating she give a smile, tis word wont suit from u r mouth VICKY SINGH KHURANA

His name, prickle his heart wen ever she call VSK, his guilty cuming and killing him, right now he want to run away and hide himself some where,everyone surrounds hearing they voice,Dadi and Anni felt shock seeing Vicky there..

Dadi stumble but Rani hold her before they move, Ram hold them and node gesturing them to wait, Anni hugged Ram and crying,Vicky heart crying to see Dadi,Anni and his Bother but not once he did glance him,his guilty not letting him to face Maan

Geet :wen u r cheating urself and hurting others talking abt cheat, wow great VSK,she was intentionally calling him VSK

Vicky know she is right he closed his eyes thinking how he hurt his own family..all stood still no one opened they mouth as Geet wants to talk to him,Maan was watching both, he was not in state to talk or react

He was happy to see his brother after long years ,but at te same time shocked thinking how he came here and Geet accusing him,wat hurts him more was , in all tis he not even once look at him
Dadi : Geet
Rani : Geeta let him cum
Geet : no maami not until he decide wat he wants,all look at her,will he cum back to his family who crying for him and living like souless thinking one day they son will cum or,she paused, he will again run away hide himself thinking let them cry for him
Vicky heart was slitting with her words..
Geet : let him decide then we will think abt we will accept him or not wat MR VICKY SINGH KHURANA, im correct naa

Vicky cant bear any more, Maan can sense his pain his heart felt like he got his life seeing his brother after ages but seeing his painful tears with Geet 's words he cant see his brother crying so he try to stop Geet

Maan : Geet let him go

Vicky still hearing his brother's voice after long time, all look at him
Geet : no Maan without giving answers to my questions he cant leave
Maan : pls Geet, he cant see his brother in pain
Geet : no ands i want answers from tis selfish person who standing in front me


Maan yelled : Geet in stern voice, he hold her, pls, he pleaded to her
She snap his hands

Geet shouted to him : no no ,if u don't want then u stay away,Maan was startled to see so much anger in her eyes,I want to get his answers not for a woman who stood like a strong pillar for her grandkids even after saw her family member dieing in front her eyes one by one,Dadi crying
Geet : not for a girl, who control all her desire for her brothers and lost all her pampered from her brothers, Rani hugged Anni

Geet : not for a man who look very strong and te world says he is heartless but inside he is not wat he showing ,All cried Maan tilt his head down,

Geet : im want answers for me, im so selfish person after all we are humans, Heian VSK

Vicky look at her,he know he have to listen more

Geet : I want answers for me, im talking for my family becoz I cant see they pain,her eyes welled up, even though their lips smile, I cant see my dadi crying in pain waiting to see her lost kid before her last breath,she was crying for a person who was hiding himself in his stubborness

Vicky know his Dadi love them and wats he did for them, Dadi crying on Ram's shoulder

Geet : im want answers for my sister in law who lost all her fun in this years and got more matured than her age and suppressing her desire thinking her brothers who forgot to pamper her ,

Vicky look at Anni,he remembered how she will cum to him for each and every thing and love to depend on him..

Geet : im want answers for my hubby My Maan,she look at Maan,who crying each sec for his brother thinking one day he will Cum and hold his shoulder ,Vicky know how much his brother wants him to join their business and always feel proud for him, his lips was smiling but still his yearningful eyes missing his brother wen ever he see karthi and Anand anna,she can always sense his yearn wen he was with karthi and Anand,even though he was not wrong but still drowning in his guilty thinking he is reason for his brother's condition and hurting him.

All crying seeing they kids pain, but they have to break him, Geet know it will be painful but tis have to be down to erase everyone's pain

Geet tears flowing: i can give him all happiness but tis one..if I lack in one thing too im a big loser in my love, I cant be a loser,im selfish for my love for my family ,

Maan still and stare at Geet, yes he was but he thought he hide it well but whom he hiding his MISTY who know him in and out

Geet stare at Maan: he thought he can hide his pain but he don't know tat his eyes is enough to voice his feelings..and

She paused , all looking at her,the whole, place was very silent only they tears were heard

Geet : im talking for my brother in law who living normal life wen te whole empire is waiting for its prince,Vicky stilled, his guilty is not letting him to face his own family thinking he mistook they love and have no rights to be with them in their happiness wen he was not in worst,haan

Vicky stilled and stare Geet,how she know his heart,Khuranas look at Geet and trying to register her words,

Geet : how can I erase all they wounds wen u took te medicinesVSK,how can I,

Vicky cant bear any more and he fall on ground : no pls stopped it,pls enough,All heart winched too see him breaking,I cant im sory yes im selfish,im selfish

No one was in state to move,Maan cant see his brother crying, from childhood he never let any harm to touch his sibblings,now how can he let it,he move near him and touch his shoulder ..Vicky at once got up and hugged Maan,as he don't need to see who it was, his one touch is enough to know he is his BRO,his brother..both felt like they got they breath back feeling each other

This embrace made Maan still, he didt hug him but feeling his tears wetting his skin, his hands hugged his brother and crushed him inside his arms like hiding him from tis world, all felt happy and tears flowing from their eyes,seeing tis blissed moment

Vicky : im sory BRO, Maan heart felt like he got a water drop for his long last thirst, hearing BRO from his mouth
Maan : no Vicky im te one who have to say sory for
Vicky cut him : no BRO u can never be wrong,im wrong, im te one who mistook ur silent i thought u didt trust me
Maan broke te hug and cupped his face : but i would have cleared u i didt fulfill my duty as elder brother,I failed as a brother
Vicky : I made u to fail, Maan look at him,i never give u a chance to nor listen once to ur words, Im wrong, no one can be best as u,u could have searched if i lost but i was hiding myself naa

Maan again hugged him, Vicky too felt peace,Dadi touched Vicky which broke their hug and look at their dadi ,Vicky hugged her
Vicky : sory dadi ,Dadi kissed his cheeks and hugged him


Anni : Bhai
Vicky : Anni she just jumped on him hugging him
All smile with tears in their eyes it was most precious moment,Then he saw a small girl peeping thru Valli patti,staring at him,they broke te hug and dadi point to Ayesha, he dont need any intro to know she is his Anjali dii's daughter,they angel, he gesture her to cum near him.

Vicky took her in his arms and kissed her whole face : u know who im

Ayesha node : maama

Vicky smile : who said

Ayesha : amma ,all smile
Vicky got confused: amma
Dadi : she is calling Geet as amma
Vicky look at Geet : im sory dii
Geet node her head and hugged him
Ram : but she is ur anni not dii

Vicky didt get his words,not like he don't know tamil, staying here for some days he have learned tamil but he was confused with te relation and stare at Ram

Dadi : going to became ur bhabhi, Maan's wife

Vicky shocked and look at Geet who smiling at him,he remember she have said once abt love with Delhi wala boy and call him with names,so she is going to be his bhabhi,he felt so happy hearing tat

Vicky : tat RAKSHASHAN DD is my bhai,Geet node yes yes so ur complaining abt my bhai to me haan, she smirk
Vicky : if bhai cums to know
Geet : he knows heina Maan but Maan was no one know where he went, all look at each other..
Meena : he went to his room
All felt sad before Ram was abt to move,Geet stopped him
Geet : maama i will
Ram: hmmm,she left to Maan's room
Nakul saw Vicky baba : Vicky baba
Vicky : nakul kaka Nakul hesitate to hug him but Vicky hugged him

Then all surrounds him and hugged him expressing they happiness seeing Vicky

Maan silently left to his room and sat on his bed thinking abt te moment happen few mints before,he cant bear all tis,his heart is crying and jumping in joy at same time,for four years he is waiting for his brother but wen he came in front of him he cant speak anything,

His guilty is eating him up..even though he felt happy but still how Geet found him wen he cant,where he lagging.. Is his love for his family is shallow tat he cant feel them,tats why everyone left him
Maan : Am i tat bad thinking all these his heart started to bleed..he cant over cum tis emotions,he can deal any matter related to business and make everyone fear with his one look but wen it cums to his heart he is weak,yes Geet is correct he is not wat he show

Till now he hide it but today being with everyone and got so much love, he cant mask his weakness,he want to open himself..how he could't find Vicky wen geet did,he used all his power to search these four years he hired best agency but still failed to search his brother but his Geet did..

She found him and brought him ,why he cant do to his family..how will he thank his Geet who brought him of his guilty,wat he will do to her in return..

He lost in his grief tat he didt notice his tears wetting his face,Geet know wat he is feeling so thought to talk with him,but wen she enter her heart winched seeing Maan sitting like a statue,his eyes shedding tears,his tears is enough for her to know his pain..

Geet touch his shoulder,Maan hugged her from the waist...she was standing next to the bed,he rested his head close to her heart encircling his hands around her waist, Geet held him closer and ran her fingers on his hair,pushing his hair behind,tat touch made him feel smoothing his heart

He pressing himself more into as he want to pour his pain thinking if she didt hold him now, he will broke,Geet startled with his sudden hug,but she know he need her and hugged him more hiding inside his embrace,she heard his cries and his tears wetting her dress..she have seen his pain and tears but not like tis,she know Maan is very sensitive wen it cums to his heart but tis weakness,she hugged him patting his back.

She didt stop him, she want him to cry and wash all his pain which he hold these manys years,tis is te only way to get rid of his pain,she wont stop,she thought let him cry and lessen his heart,but tis will be last day for tis tears in his life after tat he will only have happiness, tis is her promise

She patting his back,his tears wetting her dress and she can feel wet on her chest..Maan pressuring himself more on her like a small kid crying to his mom..yes she is his mom, his angel his everything,without her he is nothing a dead soul,Geet presence sooth his heart

Geet felt his cries slowly subsides,still she patting..Maan broke te hug raised himself and look at her who crying along with him,her tears too falling on his face,mixing with his tears,both staring at each other,Geet bend and kissed his forehead and saw him

Geet can see so much questions in his eyes,Geet wipe his tears..Maan hold her hands and kissed it,he pulled her to sit beiside him..he lean on her shoulder..Geet hugged him

Maan : thanku Geet,Geet did stop him, i know tis thanku is small in front of u..u dont know wat u given me,u have lessened my pain,u took me out from my sins,I never thought I will get tis much happiness

Geet just holding him and let him talk

Maan : my name fame money power everything became small in front of u, Geet im nothing in front of u
Geet node her head : Maan don't say like tat u r best brother best son
Maan : if i could have been best i would found my brother long back..im not tat much lucky Geet
Geet wipe his tears : no Maan its not ur mistake its fate which played its game
Maan : no Geet helpless people only blame their fate,im helpless and a coward
Geet : shhh dont say like tat then if u blame urself ,then im also equally have to be blame he look at her..im sory


Maan : sory
Geet : i didt inform abt Vicky before itself, he look at her i know Vicky before u

Maan was startled : before me
Geet : yes he was karthi's friend she don't want to open how she saw him she know it will kill him thinking how his brother lived a worst life
Maan : Karthi friend
Geet : haan but we dont know anything abt him
Maan : we
Geet : in Chennai we all know him as his friend, he never opened his mouth and didt said anything abt him so Karthi got a job for him
Maan heart slit hearing te owner of mutlti companies working in a company its shame on him

Geet sense his pain : dont think its shame,Maan look at her thinking how will she read his mind, u think he decide to stand on his own legs without disclose his identity u have to feel proud of him,Maan smile kissing her hands..after dadi said abt ur past and she showed our family photes then it click to me its Vicky..i was shocked, want to inform abt him to all but dadi ki words stopped me, he gave a look, tat we can find who was lost but cant a find a person who is hiding himself..he was hiding himself if he cums to know tat we found him and wat if he again run away we cant lose him, so I thought to know his POV first Maan was staring at her
Geet : then during diwali i intentionally planned with Rajji to make him realize wat he is doing,she narrate how she planned with Rajji to make him realize..

Maan felt emotional hearing how she was concern with his family..

Geet : in all chakar i forgot to ask his pov but yesterday i want to gift u something and Ram Maama said she narrate how she talking to Ram..then i brought him..

Maan staring at his MISTY who did so much magical

Geet : but im sory Maan after seeing u both I curse myself for keeping him away from u,if I could have said abt him to u before naa,seeing u all he could hugged u,clearing all te mist,Maan node no and try to stop her who was blaming herself

U r wrong dii, they both broke their hug hearing te words and look at him


PRECAP : FAMILY TIME

NEXT PART : 178 , PG - 56



Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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FINALLY VICKY KI ENTRY..FINGERS CROSSED.. I DONT KNOW HOW IT CAME..HOPE U ALL LIKE IT..MUMMY
Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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Hmm finally they are gng to meet
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hahah I can't help myself to read
kal exam bhi h

jaldi reading and bhaging
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finally maan,dadi and annie ko vicky se mulaqaat karwahi diya geet ne.. it was so emotional moment.. vicky's guilt doesn't allowing him to talk with maan and dadi.. good geet ne sab kuch kehdiya jo vicky ko ehsaas karega ki usne kya galti ki by hiding from his family... atlast vicky came out of his guilt...b ut now maan is guilty in not taking care of his brother.. ab yeha bhi geet ne hi sambhaliya😆😆😆
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Finally the mch awaited encounter has taken place..
It was really emotional 😭
u have written it very beautifully..
Very smartly geet made vicky realise his mistake..
continue soon
Edited by kajalparijat - 9 years ago
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Amazing update. Maan planned a surprise engagement. Thats so cool. Geet faked anger at him.
He set up a gym in Madurai. Wow.

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Sooper dooper
now only partners are yet to be decided.
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awesome pts
maan make geet happy with his differents surprises
and end he brought hr hr house and whole family wished
happy bday and maan time to time become naughty Romeo
geet give maan surprise by Vicky entry
maan was amazed how his mishty understand him in and out

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 176 Is Awsssmmm😳
loved it nia 😛
and hows the weather and surrounding in channai now sweety becouse in news they never tell the accurate facts😡
Edited by huma12. - 9 years ago

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