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( THANKU SHRUTHE DII FOR A LOVELY

BEAUTIFUL BANNER)


- 172

Geet for past two days trying to make Maan open his mouth for te surprises but he is stubborn, she was cursing him for tat, then she thought to put some bit to her family and make them open up abt te surprise as she know Maan will never disclose,KALLULMANGAN

All were sitting after they dinner and chatting,Maan was discussing some thing with Venkat abt Bangalore branch audits..Geet sat beside Prabhu and lean on him, playing with his buttons, all stare at her and know she is upto some thing

Geet : wat u all planned

Prabhu : for wat chella (SWEET HEART)

Geet : for our b'day, pointing to Maan and her, our first b'day naa,Maan know without knowing te plan she wont be calm and chuckled inwardly te way she trying to put maska

Ram : we thought to celebrate in Madurai

Geet face lighten up and look at Ram : wat we all going to Madurai

Ram : but Maan changed as he want to celebrate here itself with u

Geet : oh .then we have party haan

Dadi : no Geet only u and Maan he want to celebrate with u alone, and then party in farmhouse

Geet : farmhouse

Dadi : I said we having a farmhouse in outskirt of Delhi, Geet node , there only evening party

Seetha : as we don't want to be like kardi in shiva pooja (kabba mein haldi)

Ram : u have to ask him,wat he planned

Geet : hmm and look at Maan who shrugged his shoulder like he don't know anything, KALLULIMANGAN..

It was day before their b'day,Morning all had their BF and packed they things to go to Farm House, as per Geet's knowledge..Maan too left to office as he had some pending works to complete, he wont be available for one week so he just thought to finish his major works..

Geet felt bored how long she will roam in tis huge palace , KM staff too left as Maan gave them leave for one week and Nakul left to farmhouse with others for help, even pets too left with others, so she alone roaming here and there

Geet cribbing : DD IDIOT he want to celebrate alone only us but leaving me here,he went to romance my sautan, let him cum wat he think of himself, I didt even buy dress for 2mor,she pout, no shopping, no decoration,KALLULIMANGAN cant even judge wat he planned and left me alone, poor Geet baby was staying alone in tis huge place, wat if any ghost cum no baba no, but Raghav anna is there naa, but, she look here and there ,

It was evening still no call nor any msg from him..she was trying to call but his phone was not reachable,

Geet : wen I need his phone will go some where to romance, his things too same like him DD,with frowning face

She went to her room and sat on te bed : atleast I will watch Drasti serial, she on te dvd and put te dvd of Drastic serial which she downloaded all te episodes ( like me,he he he)

She was watching te serial with her tea which she prepared,same time one of te bgs knock her door

Geet : cum in

Bg : mam

Geet : suresh bhaiya wat happen

Bg : sir have send a parcel for u

Geet face brighten : sir

Bg : hmm Maan sir

Geet took te parcel and thanked him

Geet : so KALLULIMANGAN ki surprised started hmm lets see,she saw a note

MISTY save all ur cribbings and cursing wen I cum ,till then take rest as today night u won't get enough sleep

Geet : NSK

There was another note

THIS ONE TO MY MOST BEAUTIFUL ANGEL , she smile, get ready before 9 clock

Ur MAAN

GEET : IDIOT,she thought not to open now, but why 9 clock she saw te time its 6 clock till then wat I will do , and my Guru's show, I will miss , she pout I have to record it, DD ,he dont have any other time to choose for his surprise,he only got 9 clock

It was 7 clock GEET thought to take bath, she wore her towel and came out after having a nice bath for hours,her wet form making her look more sexy,today she felt so excited as her heart says some thing good things going to happen,she on te dvd and put some song, te song was from Gemini Deewana, where a girl sing crazily for her love..she too feel crazy for her Maan so thought prefect for tis moment and increased te volume

Deewaana Deewaana

Netri nanaithavan neethaanaa

Are you the one who filled my forehead


Deewaana Deewaana

Nenjai pizhindhavan neethaanaa

Are you the one who squeezed my heart

She started to dance, smiling twirling herself,she became mad her Maan ki deewani

En veetuk koalathin pullikul
Olinthu un kaadhal sollum
Maayakannanaa?


Hiding behind in my rangoli dots,proposing ur love Magician Kannana


Deewaana Deewaana
Netri nanaithavan neethaanaa

Are you the one who filled my forehead

She was dancing moving her hip front and back,The wall clock started to ring tick tick , she saw te bird cuming out of te clock and screaming like her heart screaming for her Maan,she kept her finger on her chin and her eye move right and left thinking some one watching her



Vellikizhamayil veetu thotathil
Vaal mulaitha chittu ondru vandhu vittathe

Friday a bird with tail came to my garden

Keechu keechendru koochal poaduthe
Nenju kootil koodukatta mallu kattuthe

Its cooing with the sound keech keech trying to build the nest inside my chest

Summa adhu kathi sellomoa ? illai
Yamma nenjai kothi sellomoa


Will it Just shout and go or will poke my heart and go


She stood in front of te mirror to see herself,she was shocked to see some one standing in front of her rather than herself, she is not any more a girl but became a woman,her feminity was glowing in her Maan's love,she shied

Her Maan te name itself send shivers down her spine, how well he made her to forget everything and revolves around him, how she is going to face him tat too all alone, she is always been with him but nowadays Maan's boldness and naughtiness increased day by day making her shudder,she cant even face her own family in presence of Maan


Annai thanthayay aasai thoazhiyay
Kaanumboadhu naanam vandhu kangal kooshuthe

When i see my Mother, father, best friend my eyes close becoz of my shyness


She saw her lips, she trace her lips with her finger and thought how he will eat it his cherry,tis is te first time she is admiring herself like tis, she don't know why but today she love to do crazy things, he wont leave a sec to grab her lips,always chewing like its his fav candy

Her finger slowly slide down to her neck and thought how he will be nibbling and his hands shamelessly roam around her hands, waist back, her hands too moved where ever he touch her,her feminity is arousing her


Thookam vitruthaan kaadhal vaanginaay
Endru endhan penmai ennay kaeli paeshuthe

My femininity Tease me saying i Sold my sleep and bought the love


Ayyo innum ennavaahomoa
Endhan aadai naalai kollai poahumaa

What will happen next, will my clothes get robbed tomorrow

She felt shiver thinking wat he will do after they marriage,her temperarture increased Thinking abt all tat, she got shy and closed her face with her palm, blushing ..Slowly she open one hand and peep thru it to see her face chupke chupke and bite her tongue,


Mele Ek Ajnabi kese koyi aap ne ka peeche
Tum he ke ho kya baathuhe

Deewaana Deewaana
Netri nanaithavan neethaanaa

Are you the one who filled my forehead

Geet twirled herself : omg I became mad , she started to giggle humming te song, she didt imagine love will cross her life, she will laugh wen some one talk abt crazy love things but now she is sailing in te same boat, but she love tis feelings

Kaadhal ennamae ayyo asingame
Endru kangal Kaadhu mooku pothi kondaval

I thought the thinking of love is bad

and shut my Ear, nose and eyes

She opened te balcony door and went outside and inhaled te fresh air and moving front and back holding te door,


Kaadhal kaaladi oasai kaetathum
Veedu vaasal kathavu jannal thiranthu kondanal

But now hearing the footsteps of Love ,all te doors and windows of the house opened by themselves

She hold te air and kept inside her heart like hiding her love and giggled,she closed te door and came inside and open her towel And started to dance holding te end of it on her either hands, then she blushed thinking she didt wear anything and how shamelessly she dancing, she look here and there bitting her tongue and covered herself blushing

Kaadhal ulle vandhuvittathu endhan
Naanam veliyae sendruvittathu

Love has come inside and my shyness flew away

She saw his phote frame and took it in her hands,seeing him her desire aroused, her each cell burn with his touches,she was desparate to pour her feelings to some one, but wen ever she try words struck in her throat

Thoazhi oruthiyay naeril niruthi naan
Kaadhal outre saetho solla nenju muttothe

I want to stop one friend and say one news that my heart is trying to open up


Aanaal naavile aanaa aavanna rendezhulathai thavire
Vaeru vaarthai illayae

But my tongue is tied except the 2 words a, aah..

She tap his face : all becoz of u, cant even pour my feelings to my friend,she forgot her own mother tongue and flowing on her own feelings which increasing day by day for her Maan


Aasai vandhu thathalikiraen
en baashai maatri ucharikkiraen

Im drowning in An anxious desire and even stammering my own language


Geet : KALLULIMANGAN,
She twirl holding his phote and she saw herself and him , SSK u don't have any shame watching urMISTY like tis nangu pangu, and smack on his face,SSK

She kissed his phote , she was giggling kissing him again and again,she thought how one year went so soon..

It was last year Maan came into her life,last year she fall on him and tis year both feel into love..she didt even imagine in her dream tat she will fall for a man like him who is opposite to her in every means..

Mele Ek Ajnabi se koyi aap ne ka peeche
Tum he ke ho kya baathuhe

Deewaana Deewaana
Netri nanaithavan neethaanaa

Are you the one who filled my forehead


Deewaana Deewaana


Nenjai pizhindhavan neethaanaa

Are you the one who squeezed my heart

She smiled thinking opposite poles attracted each other naa..she staring at his face,suddenly she got a desire to trace his face,slowly took her index finger and started to traced his features, his hair and thought how soft it will be wen ever she hold in her fist wen he shudder her with his kisses, his forehead,it looks sexy wen his hair fall,on his forehead due to work out and mingle with his sweat ..his sweat haan how she love his masculine sweat

She traced his eyes which caged her with his pierecing gaze ,which always pierce her soul, her finger came to his nose and at once she snap her finger

Geet : ouch,snapping her finger like he touched fire, how much hot , always gussa will be sitting on it, mokka (nosy man),tapping his nose

Then her finger traced his stubble thinking it gives a sexy look to u,making all te girls go thud thud..Then her finger slide down to his lips,she was tracing his M shape with her finger

Geet : how u got tis M'shaped lips ,no one in tis world have liks tis lips and always pinkish,make me to carve for it, kissed his lips

She was kissing his whole face and smiling at him: poda wat u made me to do,

She roll on te bed and lying on her stomach swinging her legs in air..she was still in her towel, her budge pop out of te towel as she is lying on her stomach,she staring at his pic, she look at his gaze and look at herself,

Geet : CHI DD where u gaze moving always thinking only abt tat, she poked his eyes,wat im going to do after our wedding, yes Shanu is correct u wont allow me to step out for a sec too,thinking abt his desparate, no baba no I will make u to fast for 4 days per week..IDIOT wat u made to me. see wat all im thinking and talking and how shamelessly im drooling u, DD,she pout

She saw te time : babaji, in ur chakar I forget te time, she kept te phote on te bed and went to get ready, she open her wardrobe and saw Maan's pic on te cupboard nangu pangu,she trace his 8 packs

Geet : for tis only I fall for u,she giggled and kissed his abs

She thought to get her inners but without knowing te dress colour,how would she select her inners, she sat on te bed and took te parcel which Maan have send,she open it and saw a green colour dress which had so much designs and classy

She felt overwhelmed thinking why he got green colour dress as last year wen they meet she wore green colour dress..she smile at his concern,she took te dress out and saw another pack inside..she took it out and her face widen in shock seeing wat Maan got for her, she took it her hand and saw he even got her inners, her b*** and p*****

Geet frowned : IDIOT DEVIL SSK, she saw note falling from it

IM NOT SSK,ITS MY RIGHT DARE U CURSE ME

Geet zipped her mouth and pout thinking how he know her..she saw her inners which was her fav red colour..she made faces thinking red colour for green dress prefect Mr.Khurana

She changed into her inners and saw herself in te mirror,she traced her curves and it was perfectly curved her body, she shied thinking wat he would have thought while buying tis, he would have imagine her in tis naa, her face flushed and her breath heavied thinking abt him

She wore the dress and look at herself, it fit her prefectly, how cum not wen her Maan himself brought for his MISTY with so much love..she was admiring herself, she know wat will Maan do seeing her,today wat ever she deny she cant escape from him

she sat on te dressing chair and started to get ready,she wore te bangle which was gifted by Maan,then his fav payals,then she wore a small chain and she trace her neck thinking soon it will get his possession, her Maan will tie mangal sutra, her eyes welled up in emotions

Geet pout and kept te bindi thinking soon he fill her mang..she smiled and got ready,once again admiring her

Geet: prefect and twirl in air in happiness

Suddenly she thought some thing and went to Maan's room, she took his fav perfume and apply on her..she love his perfume smell and today she want to smell like him,she smell herself and smile

Geet : hmm yummy with tis only u making all girls go gaga over u,

She came to her room and sat on te bed,it was 8:30 but still he didt cum..she was watching te clock and te entrance

Geet : why tis time is not moving but he can cum soon naa, if he said 9 clock means he should cum only at 9, MR.Prefect Singh Khurana ,im here very eager to know wat he planned for us but look at him,not even opening his mouth and teasing me,KALLULIMANGAN

She yawned and her stomach too started its alarm but thought to have with MAAN..she lean on te bed post , hugging his pics to her chest soon her tired eyes closed and she slept..

Here Maan too was not less than Geet..his desparate increased each sec to see his MISTY..he know she will be cribbing for leaving her alone in km but he was helpless he have planned so much for her and he want to give few days to her,so have to attend all te meetings and settled everything before he takes off..

He even brought dress for her , he remember last year he saw her in same green colour and today also he want to see her in same colour and got tis, when he passed te shop he saw te inners and thought to buy for her,any how he is going to buy after marriage why not to try now itself it will be a trial for him too

But wen te sale girls ask for size his x ray eyes scanned hisMISTY's size and got it for her, NAUGHTY SINGH KHURANA,he chuckled, in his MISTY's language..he send her thru his bg and thought to finish all te work asap and rush to hisMISTY..he had a last dinner meeting but he avoid to have his dinner thinking to have with his MISTY

Atlast his all work finish and he enter into KM,it was very silent which was unusual of it..he went to his room but stopped and went to see wat his MISTY is doing..at once he open te door, he stood mesmerised to see his angel sleeping resting herself on te bed post..te dress which he brought look perfect for her..it fitted her well, how cum its Msk's choice naa..

His legs carried him to her and he slowly sat beside not want to disturb her..her hair strand was disturbing his view,his hand slowly raised and his finger slide her hair and got his angelic face which is glowing under te moon light..he just sat admiring her,he slowly bend and kissed her forehead..

He saw her hugging something, he slowly removed her hand and took te phote and saw his face..he chuckled and know she would have been cribbing abt his late and would have given new names too,he kept his phote on te table

Maan cupped her face : today I will make it a very unforgettable day in our life MISTY, tis te day I got my angel who came as a light in my darkness,so I will shower u with all my love today and make speechless with my surprise,so get ready for te surprises baby,

He bend and kissed her lips, he smelled something , he bend and smell her again and smirk thinking she have put his cologne,

Maan : not bad misty , he once again pecked her lips and went to get ready

PRECAP : SURPRISES STARTS..DESTINATION-1

NEXT PART :173 ,PG - 29

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really wonderful update😊 while imagining geet is soo cute wait for suprise
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wow one more part
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awesome update..
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beautiful update...
Loved it ... Maan planned surprise for Geet to celebrate der bday ... All went out leaving Geet alone in km .. Geet s drooling and thinking about Maan ...
Maan send the dress ...
Continue soon
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geet eager to know whats the surprise maan has planned
but maan has kept his mouth zipped
she is using her maska skills on her family
but its of no use
all couldnt help her n only said its maans plan n they r going 2 celebrate in fh
all left to fh leaving geet alone
geet cribbing about maan
n maan surprise gift started
geet went to fresh up
n her dreamy song..lolz..
she too has become shameless
he sent her a green dress with matching inners too
maan is trying 2 buy it from now itself
maan came rushing home knowing his mishty will be cribbing n feeeling lone
she is sleeping holding him
nice part
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