MG DRABBLE : SHOT 1 / NOV 9

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DRABBLE

He looked at his brother who was standing in front of him. His eyes were focused on the paper which he was holding and the guilt that was residing in his heart was very well reflected on his face, he smiled and asked his brother.


What's the matter Vicky, why you are here, is everything fine. you are having any difficulty in any project. His voice was lowered and his eyes were still focused on the paper where some words were written and he was now pretending that he was really lost in that paper where he was trying to find something. His insides were burning and his eyes were red with the pain that have been inflicted upon his heart. he was not that strong but he had too. he again looked at his brother who was standing still with a hard face, Vicky's posture was something that couldn't be judged for the first time by him. he was maan , the beloved brother of Vicky and Vicky never fails to read the expressions of his elder and loving brother. His maan bhai. they were like the refection of each other, maan loved Vicky aka vishal khurana like anything. he when found no answer from Vicky asked again.


What's the matter Vicky why are you here, you want something? maan asked seeng him standing still and looking at him intendly..


Vicky who was having a bout of anger busted on his brother for the first time.


Where is Bhabhi bhai, do you really think that she is at fault? where is all your love now. how can you just leave her now? you know that it was not her fault she was and will be pure bhai. do you think that she is not for your standard, do you feel that now you cannot even call her your wife?


Vicky's words were no less than any salt on the already wounded heart of maan and he was trying hard not to say anything, the pain he is boring in his heart was enough and he doesn't want anyone to hurt him now. not even his own brother. the pain of betrayal was so much.


Vicky I don't want to say anything, maan turned his face away from Vicky and he went towards the window where he could see the vast ocean of the sky but the reflection of her face was having tears that pierced his heart.


You cannot turn your face away bhai. today you proved that you are like others. you are no good bhai. you are punishing her for the incident she wasn't responsible and I wish that I could have got that rishabh kundra once I would have killed him. but bhai he is already dead and I wish Bhabhi would have too.


Vicky's words made maan turn and he shouted at him.


Vicky!!! just leave I don't want to talk.


That's because you know that you are wrong. You are afraid bhai, you are fearing from the consequence of hurting an innocent heart. She is pure and if you feel that her body is tainted than I am sorry to say MAAN SINGH KHURANA you are no less than thousands of men out there who feel that a woman is only needed for physical satisfaction.


He left in anger and the impact of Vicky's anger could be seen with the loud thud that came with the closing of the door of the cabin where maan Singh khurana was still trying to formulate the words which were spoken by his own little brother.


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this is just a shot no further story as of now.. i will be posting some more shots and less see if if makes any story


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Posted: 9 years ago
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lollzz dona di its an adaptation mujhe batana kis cheez ki h
my mind isnt stable after reading all those mythos na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

lollzz dona di its an adaptation mujhe batana kis cheez ki h
my mind isnt stable after reading all those mythos na

😆😆 hey bhagwan naah hey rama 😆😆
ramayana jitna bhi pada maine 😉 haina??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lollzz tukka sahi Mara aapne
I am really so low reading uttar kand of ramayan

waise this has really not linked with that coz Kali -Yug is far apart than what happened in treta yug di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

lollzz tukka sahi Mara aapne
I am really so low reading uttar kand of ramayan

waise this has really not linked with that coz Kali -Yug is far apart than what happened in treta yug di

aeee its not tukka 😆 RK n geet ek line me vicky ka maan pe gussa indicates one thing only...
hmmm treta yug me ravana only kidnapped sita n in kal yug it will be r*** if m not wrong...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes Di
u r right

and ramayan is vast to even understand
whatever I understood is still too much for me

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Originally posted by: suhaaana

yes Di
u r right

and ramayan is vast to even understand
whatever I understood is still too much for me

ramayana is one of our most cherished mythological book suhi...it will take trs to understand it fully...it has many faces...many reasons...many POV's...
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Originally posted by: CrazyEyes


ramayana is one of our most cherished mythological book suhi...it will take trs to understand it fully...it has many faces...many reasons...many POV's...


Hmm I can never understand Lord Rama's POV.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start.
Maan left geet.
Vicky is really gud..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sad part
Maan throw geet out of his house because of Rishabh.
Vicky gets angry on maan nd he showed maan the mirror wat he does.

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