Maaneet OS: You Made My Life 10/30

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

That was so romantic .enjoyed every bit of story . Plz do post ur works in,forum ,would like to read

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Beautiful. Loved the way you made the scene come alive.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

So beautiful os madhu. Sweet & simple. Totally loved it. I liked the way you changed the story and still kept the original track as it is. It was my one of the fav track. It was first time she realised her love for him but still she could not voice out due to her situation.

Loved the way he wished her happy birthday thru' her fav radio program and the way she expressed her gratitude. Simply awesome.

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Amazing n beautiful OS. ..

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Absolutely Vibrant And Beautiful OS

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Lovely os.
Maan is so cute.
Their confessions ws beautiful.

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I read this in the kehna hein kya space.. truly wonderful 😊

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

super os... loved ur writing style⭐️⭐️⭐️

i loved the kitchen scene... it was so realistic and the whole scene ran before my eyes when i read that... maan asking geet to be calm and her in turn calling him insensitive jerk😆

how romantic he is... biwi ki saari gaaliyan khaayi and went office with out bf too... but he had planned such a sweet surprise for her😳

past was so beautiful too... restless geet after blasting a gal just beacuse she was talking to her maan😆...

and the way u ended... dreammy...

thanks for such a beautiful os

Edited by -lakshmi- - 9 years ago

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey Maaneet

I've read this in the kehna he kya thread and liked it alot, but the extended version is even better. I loved it. You write really well and loved the picturisation 👏👏

Geet's defo a character, my type of character. I love it when she's in her element, the crazy wacko type i mean 😉 Poor girl's working her socks off (not literally) and Maan 😲 i loved him, he remembers Madonna's bday ohhh no wonder Geet is angry, his turned her into a frying pot 😆😆😆😆😆😆

ofcourse he remembered he had too, i liked how youve included the past and the present. It was an awesome OS, completely my type. I like crazy geet's and a pacifying Maan.

It was a huge step for Maan to declare his personal life on the radio yet he did. Thank you so much for a fantastic story

Your an amazing writer

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Preeti Menon

@OmushDefo

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Excellent story.

Mann acted like he did not remember their anniversary. He said its madonna's bday. Geet was really irritated. He announced his love to the world through Radio. By playing Geet's favorite song kehna hai kya. Their past is very interesting. Geet is very possessive about Mann. Finally he came home and wish her . Too good