Readers/Writers C- 3S: Lovely Diner shot 3 @ 1 on 30/10/15 ~COMPLETED~

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Ohk so here you go... I got another challenge from sophiexxx... Did I wrote correct number of x's??? anyways... So this thread is for her challenge...
As the name suggests... let me tell you... DINER is an inexpensive restaurant normally illegally... those who don't know... But here don't worry not going to show loan sharks chasing Maneet and they are on run... HECK NO!!!!
Also there is other meaning as well... DINER is a customer who dines in restaurant... well on what context I used this for that to reveal you have to wait...
So... Have fun reading this new story... and sorry you will need to bear this one as well...
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INDEX
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SHOT 1- Below This Post


TEASER FOR SHOT 2 ON PAGE 11


SHOT 2- scroll down below


TEASER FOR SHOT 3 ON PAGE 22


SHOT 3 scroll down below

Edited by BlackWidowBaby - 9 years ago
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SHOT 1
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Maan Singh Khuarana, is a well known personality in the hotel industry, not so arrogant but a personality with high patience. His dream was being a best cook and to open a small restaurant for people... though he was rich he never showed it off... a very down to earth person who actually thinks for the others... He completed his degree in world's best renowned culinary university "Le Cordon Bleu".

Maan was also famous in the University for his Skills... He never disappointed his professors whether it was cooking or studying... He even won various awards in his university... No! don't think that he was rich so he was bound to get such popularity... Maan chose this university as his hotels were established in India, US, UK and Australia mostly... Then you might wonder if he is this famous even the institute is so much famous as professors must have known the recent activity about hotels and everything rest... so the answer is Yess! They knew but Maan who always respected hard work told to the authority that if he comes to know he is being treated like celebrity then he will transfer himself somewhere else... And why won't they will agree once if Maan gets famous there college will also get some more limelight...

As we all know, there is a saying "Person's exact opposite copy exist in the world..." Like this Geet Handa exactly opposite personality than Maan's. Geet believed to enjoy to the fullest though she is not so rich. She will enjoy till every penny is used... Orphaned at young age, lived in orphanage but due to her smartness and interest in studies took her on higher level... Today, she has job as in MNC which gives her seven digit annual income. Also because of her passion she is also a modern artist. But one thing she hates the most... COOKING!!!!!! Oh yess! She hates cooking. Interesting part is she don't even know the difference between salt and sugar, hence she daily go out and looks for something to eat... but till date nothing satisfied her taste buds...

As Geet was looking through internet, she came to know about a new but already famous restaurant... She was reading reviews of it... "Wow! Who wants to eat when you get to see such hot masculine man cooking haaye... Going to visit again SOON!" "Awesome food, Bless the chef and the owner for the generosity" "Awesome food... nobody makes it delicious as he makes..." "well they need to change the location... it has a capacity to become five star restaurant..." Geet sighed and noted down the address... As cue her stomach started rumbling... "Let's go tummy, hungry too your mummy... "

Geet looked at the board... She thought about the restaurant being so simple and not her types but the reviews about food chuck that about hotty here made her go inside... As she entered bell which was hanged above the door chimed. Maan who was in the kitchen came out to attend the customer stopped in his track... He was looking at the Apsara (ethereal beauty) came down from sky...

Maan belonged to those groups where his mind is full of old thinking... Geet who entered looked at the Greek god, she was thinking about how can be the man be so beautiful at the same time sexy... Geet blushed... Maan who was in dreamy mode came out of it and asked her to take sit...

Geet sighed and took place and said to him "can I get the menu card????" Maan scratched his head and said "well miss you are here at midnight 12'o clock and this is happy hour here... so whatever you want to eat order and I will make it for you..." Geet liked this one... She prayed for the taste of food here so she can come here and order whatever she wants... After thinking she ordered "can you make butter paneer with butter naan and may be butter chicken too if you can"

Maan was shocked he was thinking how a skinny girl like her will eat this but nodded and went into the kitchen to prepare as per the order... Maan murmured "this girl is may be obsessed with butter... Huh..." While thinking deep he forgot to add salt in his dishes... He gave her as per ordered and waited for her to start eating... As she took one bite, frown appeared on her forehead... Geet called Maan near her table and asked "there is no taste in this dishes didn't you add sugar in it????" Maan got confused but he told her he will check... And he used the same spoon oh her and tasted it... Geet was about to stop him but she controlled...

Maan looked at her and said "sorry, I will make it another one for you..." Geet suddenly stopped him by grasping his wrist "its ohk I will eat this... you must have worked alott..." Then and there Maan skipped a heart beat... he smiled and took the salt from other table added into the dishes and asked to try... when Geet ate naan dipped into the curry her mouth opened to say it was awesome but she started digging her dishes... in no time she finished everything...

Maan was astonished looking at her... Geet demanded if he can give her dessert... Maan went inside and brought something forwarding towards Geet he said "would you eat jalebis????" as Geet took the first bite her head went back eyes closed and moaned with satisfaction... Maan who wanted to ask her to stop making those noises but he can't as she was his customer... Geet was licking her fingers after completing when she was about to pay... she held his hands and dropped a kiss on them... Maan dragged back his hands as current passed through his body... he looked uncomfortable but Geet ignored "if it is in my hands I would have hired you as my personal chef... you have magic in your hands... Well expect me most the time... Bye remember this customer's name GEET HANDA... "

Geet went but Maan was numbed never ever someone did this to him... but is it normal feeling this electrified???? Maan was confused he noted in mind to check later...

Next night when Geet came to the restaurant Maan was keeping two steps away from her... Geet frowned looking unusual behavior of Maan... but shrugged it off... and ordered Pasta with Chana Masala... by listening this Maan's eyes popped out and groaned loudly "Who eats this... this combination... Is..." Geet gave him whatever look "are you making it or not???? Otherwise I will go..." Maan just went into the kitchen to make this weird dish...

Maan was looking at Geet intently as she devouring the dish, soon Geet asked him "tomorrow I want chicken hope you will keep them..." Maan nodded unbelievingly and went smilingly inside to get her dessert as he knew she won't go otherwise... But soon bells chimed marking the entry for another customer...

Maan looked at him and came to know that he was drunk... he looked at Geet felt protectiveness sip up in his heart... As customer was taking steps towards Geet, Maan called Geet, who was busy relishing last bite of her pasta... "hmmm..." Maan looked here and there again... "can you come inside to have your dessert..."

Geet looked at him questioningly... Maan gave her answer with his eyes... Geet looked at the drunk man and hurriedly went inside... when Maan was preparing food, Geet asked "how come you allow such kind of people here????" Maan not looking at her replied "here every type of person can come... from beggar to high class people... From drunkards to smokers... This place is meant of everybody I really can't stop them coming here... My work is to feed people..." Geet looked at him admiringly "wow! You have a very unusual interest... Why there is no salt in this???"

Maan looked at the dish she was eating he rolled his eyes and said "you mean sugar????" Geet bite her tongue as Maan added more sugar in her dessert... Maan served the dish to customers and came inside to talk to her... "Normally every girls should know how to cook then why not you????" Geet was annoyed by this question she kept the money for the things she ate and started moving out...

Is this the end of Maan-Geet????


THE END


Word count- 1414 😲 (first update so big😲)


so here you go most awaited update... do let me know in your comments 😳 criticism always welcome... so DO IT!!

p.s. inspired by another korean drama... i think i will make you all soon drama freak 😆😆


To Sophie- i tried giving comedy tadka but i think i suck in that... so hope you will like this one 😃😃


DON'T COPY OR SHARE MY WORK TO OTHER SITES WITHOUT MY PERMISSION 😡 OR YOU WILL BE PUNISHED SEVERELY

(Thappad padega agar chori ki toh hum aapki mummy se bhi complain kar denge🤣).

credit goes to one and only aayesha aka HUHU

Edited by BlackWidowBaby - 9 years ago


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Meee first...
Waah meri shono puttar...
Chand chupa baadal mein..
Pehne laga lafzoo mein...
😉
Kya plot..kya adaa hain ..kya shero shayari hain..

Ab no bahana wahana accepted. ..tum likho..jaldi likho...khichdi socho n plot complete. .
Hum likes n comments ka DOSTANA KARAINGE TUMHARI UPDATES SE HAHA...
LOVED THE PLOT...NOW SHOoT SHOT obe sweeto 👏
Edited by nelokulood - 9 years ago
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Congrats on your 2nd challenge
will be waiting
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Originally posted by: nelokulood

Meee first...

Waah meri shono puttar...
Chand chupa baadal mein..
Pehne laga lafzoo mein...
😉
Kya plot..kya adaa hain ..kya shero shayari hain..

Ab no bahana wahana accepted. ..tum likho..jaldi likho...khichdi socho n plot complete. .
Hum likes n comments ka DOSTANA KARAINGE TUMHARI UPDATES SE HAHA...
LOVED THE PLOT...NOW SHOoT SHOT obe sweeto 👏

jaldi milega reee 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting concept... Pls cont soon.

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