RVWC-3S- hard trap & willing sheep shot 3@1 on 25/10 ~COMPLETED~ - Page 3

Originally posted by: doll.12

Its beautiful with mysterious touch in it... Kuddos to you and the one who challenged... Loved the start... So the possesive guy is back in action.. Ahan.. Liked it... He have everything ... But when he fallen for a girl ... His parents denied him becoz of her status... And that's when he took stand ... A stand to gain such position where no one will say a no to him... Thats was really good... Geet has done much struggle in her life and still doing... The maan Singh khurana... Always kept his possession under his gaze ... She is teaching now in school .. Now the mysterious part was maan's son... Sanmaan... Cute boy... Is maan the daddy?? Or he adopted?? There are so many things running ... And don't know how will you end it in 2 more parts .. U should make a ff of it .. Thanks for such a nice shot

Originally posted by: taahir004

Interesting and Very Mysterious Too

Geet started her business and was studying at the same time but now that her rental on the caf

has increased she had to take on another job , she indeed seems like a strong willed person

and determined in her stride .

Maan had visited the caf once and saw Geet and it seems he always than came just to see

her and when he asked his parents permission to perhaps marry her he was told she is not of their

status making Maan determined to open his own business and stand on his own feet so he can be

dependant on himself only

he has asked Adi to always keep his eyes on Geet but now he wants to come face to face with her

and he plans it with his son as he takes him to be admitted in Geet's class

was Maan married before but than why does he refer to Geet as Sanmaan's mom

Originally posted by: MadelineCutie

Lovely part 1

Mann is really possessive and dont want any other male near Geet. His family wont allow Geet tk be a part of them because of her social staatus. Mann is a royalty and Geet is a simple civilian. Who is sanmaan?? Mann reffered Geet as his mamma?? Waiting to know more..

Originally posted by: aparna3011

sweet

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Good storyline!

Maan is in love with Geet but iska beta kaha se aaya?? Geet is all unaware and he is ready to make her fall in love!!

Originally posted by: love2_soma

agar maan geet se hi pyar karta tha toh shadi kyun kiya usne aur kisse kiya...

interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

Originally posted by: nelokulood

Loved shot 1..but this is soo not done again shono...since morning im eagerly waiting to read something big and delicious. ...you provided me with that deliciously awesome update but im sad ciz it was sooo smaalll...

Why are u testing ny patience girl. ...pkzz pist soon n a vigger one this time...dont doubt ur skills honeybee...coz u truly write amazingly😊👏

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Superb part.

Interesting story.

I loved it.

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: disha31

Its awesome!!
Sanmaan whise son is he?

Originally posted by: poojitha96

Wowww nice shot really awesome waiting for next part 😊