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GC_TheKing

@GC_TheKing

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Waiting for the next part. Wants to know more about their past.

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Just read both parts.. They are awesome... What is " my baby"...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Superb story

Superb updates. Maan is searching for Geet. Adi gave him information about Geet in Mumbai and having twins. Maan came to Geet's apartment in her absence and gelled with kids. Later he also convince Geet to marry him. In past it looks Maan and Sameera had given lot of pain to Geet. Maan is asking for his baby than whose babies the twins are. Waiting for next update.

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: -ASHU-
Just read both parts.. They are awesome... What is " my baby"...

in this story Maan asked Geet to give birth to a baby where he is the father... so he said my baby 😳

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ambeern

@ambeern

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Waiting for the next update

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Loved it shono puttar...

Maan is forgiven..hmmm..KUCH ZYADA JALDI MAAFI DEDI GEET NE.

It s gerts right to throw some tantrums just like

mr TAICHI TOOCHI threw parathas on her face..

Yeh sameera chipkali kidhar hain...wonder wat happened between maan n sameera n how come maan who loved sameera now loves geet..

Whos the father of twins... these queries are revolving around my head just like bees revolve around honeycomb..

Jaldi vonfusion door karo else my head will become homefor honeybees🤣🤪

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: fict
Nice part but bit confusing in the end. Maybe need a bit of clarity regarding what happened in the past.

it will get clear slowly 😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: neel11
Maan huuuh love it waiting for the next update

thnk u 😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: hermoso
Good going ,what does maan meant " my baby" ? Insecurity will develop ,will maan will remove her insecurities
Continue soon

he meant he wants his own baby whose father is he.

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Nice update i think she melt very soon he should have try more to win her but she has also reason she still loves him very much about baby what will be her answer thnx 4 pm

the people who dont get love knows the meaning of love in true sense just the same i am showing Geet here 😳