The Princess and the Pauper - MG - Ch 6, pg 138, new thread link pg 1*

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vrinda22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Awesome start

Mohinder who didnt spend time for geet is now showing his power

N not at all worried for her feelings

He insulted maan

N kept geet as captive

So mean

Maan in bmw..must be he have proved himself

But precap...are they married

W8ing to know

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Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Lovely update... They r childhood friend... Status problem... For this they have to suffer... Now who is her groom...really interesting ... Looking forward for next update

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vandana73

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Oh ho! New story Avi

Geet and Maan are together so the story is is flash back. Geet a princess and Maan a struggling business man , villian father of the girl but how can he condemn her without getting her side of the story?

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leena63

@leena63

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Awesome part

Poor geet she payed the cost of love

She send to hoshiyarpur & left to leav the life in cage

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SGAYATRI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

So geet is sent to hosiyarpur &maan is also not there .maan loves geet does geet loves maan .precap is interesting but i dont want geet to marry someone else

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SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Very interesting concept.

So finally maan has bcum rich n successful to get his geet n seemingly he has rescued geet from some trouble n married her, perhaps the clutches of brij or someone.

N now mohinder handa would not be able to say anything to maan.

Cant wait to read next. Luv u avi, write soon

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Concept of Rich girl & poor guy falling in love & a cruel father who doesn't like their closeness because of guy's low standard background, Interesting!

Waiting for further parts.

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Hemlata

@nitika20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Ye kya bat hui...
Geet ke Dad ..
khud Geet ki fikar nahi kiye ..
aur aate hi Maaneet ko alag kardiya ..
huh Maan.. lafanga ..
aur woh khud jise Geet ki itne saal yaad nahi ...
aayi ...
Geet ko Brij aur taiji ..ki custody me rakh dia ...
last me ka kuch samajh nahi ...aaya ..
Maan laut aaya kya aur Geet ko drop karne aaya tha ...???
Update next part soon..
aur mujhe pm jaroor dean...

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

New Ff.. Wow.. But inko alag kyu kiya.??

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

part 1 - congrats for new story. geet is rich & maan poor. but still they were best friends rather he is the only friend she have. mohindar came to know about him from her aunt and he separated them by insulting him and send geet to hoshiyarpur house-grounded. what happened to maan..? waiting for story to unfold.