ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #10 Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 148 / 19-11-2015

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Sayia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#991

Thanks for the beautiful ending 😊

Love reading your amazing work and this one of them

Will miss this one but looking forward for more😉

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saf24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#992

Gosh it's the end already. It was beautifully written and a fitting end. Maan has changed so much and I really loved the way you've show just how different he has become in his relationship with all the family members. I love how understanding he is with Geet and it is really sweet that he tries to give her extra resting time. I also liked that even though he saw shortcomings in himself with the baby, he didn't let that change him but instead try to change that. Fantastic job as always.

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Anjali60

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Posted: 9 years ago

#993

Such a nice ending..It was truly a gre8 story and u are amazing writer

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 9 years ago

#994

Fantastic update and apt ending.. Maan now has become a true lover, an understanding husband and a doting father to his son.. Loved the scenes between Dev, Parth and Maan.. Beautifully written.. Loved it to the core..

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piya27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#995

it's true every good thing comes to an end

lovely maan trying to control his son but don't know wat to do

dev came at his rescue at handling his son
maan knowing about all the family moments he missed in his ego and arrogance

but geet made him realize everything's worth

hayeee how cutely he asks his son will he ask him to play football with him too just like parth

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zaara2212

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Posted: 9 years ago

#996

oh yes finally maan got his true love even though it was through seduction... little sad that this is ending but as you said, purana jayega tho naya ayega and the story ended on a good note that love conquers all 😊
thanks for this wonderful ff Richa 😊
Happy Diwali and god bless😊