Game Of Love ~ Maneet SS ~Epilogue @ 71 ~ 2 januray ~ - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12

Han Han... Romance Kai waqt you Kai dimagh Mai kuch na kuch aur hi ajata hai.. Lolxx haha... Koi baat nahi... Will be waiting for next one.. Now u have free time... How ur exams went??

exams went really well , fingers crossed .. hopefully i will clear the exams 😉
will type soon and update 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

yey m back...after long here...

will read n comment soon...

hello 😛
ahahhh !! someone came 😃😉
good to see u after long time here..
missed chatting with u 🤣 ,we didnt chat from long long time 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhu..

Superb update

geet tested maan's patience too much
maan just wanted only her love
and here geet is deep thinking
will she be able to understand his love for her??

hopefully she will 😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating! wonderful update! Maan is being patient with her! he realizes she is playing wid him! Maan drink n talks 2 her portrait! Geet reflects! she feels she went too far! she hurt him! she sees blood n wonders! update soon

thanks 😛

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi abba

nice update
geet ne kuch nahi sikha aur maan ko gussa aa gaya ..
geet's reply hurt him a lot that geet didn't love him ..geet is also in mess realising her mistake ..
maan drowning himself in wine ..ab kya hoga
thanks for update
waiting for next

ab kya ho ga , janne k liye follow kariye game of love 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

lovely update get is an expert i sword fighting but she is detemine to lose nad make maan pay she indirectly accepted herself as his queen maan is losing his patience making her learn for 5 days but geet is doing purposely to irritate him and finally he blasted her when she she told she hates him and dosent love him which breaks maan as geet still thinks its all a game for him maan is drunk and talking to geets potrait he can handle anything except geet hating him not loving him finally geet ko akal aayi when she was thinking abt his pov why he is hell bend of teaching her sword fighting for 5 days he dosent hates her why he married her madam ko finally pyar dikha maan ki aakhon mein she realised she liked being with him seeing blood on the floor she realised her folly

thanks .. nice review .. yeah hope she realize and he confess 😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Feisty Update
Geet has been showing no progress on sword fighting yet Maan has been patient
with her but when he no longer could take her attitude and ignorance of learning he
burst out furiously
I still don't understand why she feel he hates her or wants to hurt by making her part take
in this challenge she should be proud been a new queen she too will challenge the other
queens
Maan is pained by the fact that his wife hates him and does even want to see his face
there is such a huge gap between them of non communication and this just further
leads both into misery
Geet realizes that not once has Maan forced himself on her or treated her bad
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Geet not learning a single bit... Maan angry... He is drunk... Geet wants to know the reason why he wants her to learn sword fight
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 12



Did he actually love her ? ...?? and what she gave him ?? Pain ???? in the name of love ???

Her mind went blank and she ran like a maniac to see where he went ..she couldn't think straight .she hurt him .. she hurt someone for the first time and that too , to this extent .. she was yet to realize her own feelings , and to cherish them but for now only thing came to her mind , that was him and his hurt face ..

"Raja Maan ... ' she entered her room hoping he would be in there but he wasn't ..

" sevak !! raja maan kahan hain ??"

" wo . hum nahi jaantay wo kahan hain , rani ji " ..the servant refused to tell coz maan asked them no to tell anyone ..

She ran to each of the room in palace , everywhere , every corner .. he was nowhere .. then only she entered Raj maata's room .. In this whole week she never cared to ask him where was she ? She was in her own mercy .. where she thought he just played with her .. she thought it was just a game with him and she was just a pawn in the game of chess for him ..

" Sevak raj mata kahan hain ??"

" wo mahal chor kar chali gayi hain rani g "

" kun ??"

" wo hum nahi jaantay , maaf kijiye "

" g .. "

The servant bowed his head in honor and went off ..

" raj mata mahal chor kar chali gayi aur raja maan bhi , nahi wo aisa nahi kar saktay''

" raja maan .. " ...she shouted calling him , running towards the lawn ,where she saw blood spots .

" aap hmain bula rahi hain rani geet ?? " .. a half .conscious drunk maan dragged himself towards door .. but then stopped " aisa nahi ho sakta .. wo hum se nafrat karti hain .. wo hmain nahi bulaen gi .. wo to hmari shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahti " ..he thumped down on floor right at the spot , still drinking ..

" raja maan ! raja maan !! "... she shouted as the servant didn't let her go to backyard .. no one went there except for maan , he had his painting room and personal bar there ..

" hmain janay dijiye ' ..

" maaf kijiye rani g ! par raja maan ne hmain kisi ko ko bhejne se mana kia ha "

" raja maan ander hain ?? raja maan ' .. she called yet again , probably that he would listen and will let her in but he didn't come out .

Unable to control herself anymore ,she pushed the servant and ran off towards the room which was a feet away ..

" nahi rani sahiba aap ..!! " the servant tried to stop her .

But before that she barged into the room and banged the door close in order to save herself from getting caught. She turned only to be shocked to her wits .. maan was on the floor with his drink , she stepped ahead

" aagay mat aaiye " .. he shouted ..

" hum aayen gay .. aaj hmain baat karni hi ho gi " ..she said in a stubborn voice as always , and stepped ahead .and a piece of broken glass pierced her foot ..

" ahh !! " , she let out a small whimper and found maan marching towards her

" mana kiya than a aap ko .. kabhi hmari baat bhi maan liya kijiye " ..he said in a drunk yet concerned voice

She realized that coz of these glass pieces he asked her not to step ahead . he cared this much then why not her. He cares , and cares more than himself , he didn't see that he too is standing on the glass pieces ? .. she knew he is drunk , but drunk to the extent that he don't even feel his pain ?

" raja maan !! aap k pair par bhi lagi ha... "

" aap ko dard ho raha ha ??" he questioned back

" hum theek hain " ..she said ,as the tears slipped down her eyes seeing his messy state ..

Taking his face in her palms she said afraid that he would act wildly

" ab aur mat pe jiye "

She tried to take the bottle from his hand ..

" aap bolain gi to hum kabhi nahi piyen gay Rani Geet '

He left the bottle to let it fall on ground .. she kept looking at the gem of a person in front of her , who was king , a raja for his people and a hard hearted man what he represented himself in front of world and a flirt is what he represented himself in front of her . but today he was not one of those , he was maan , just maan ..

" yahan baithiye " .. she made him sit on nearby deewan , and bent down to remove the glass piece from his foot ..

" nahi , aap hmaray pairon ko haath mat lagaiye Rani Geet " .. he stopped her from touching his foot .

" shh !! aaj sirf hum bolain gay aur aap sunain gay "

" nahi , aap kabhi kuch acha nahi bolti .. aap nahi bolain gi ..sirf hum bolain gay " ...He didn't know himself what he is saying but she knew he is right , she always spoke bitter and bad to him .. she removed the pieces and cleaned the blood , while her just eyed her foot from which he saw blood oozing out .

" hum kar saktay hain ??" .. he asked and she looked at him confused ..what does he mean by this ?

" kya hum aap ka zakham saaf kar saktay hain ? "

He was asking as he didn't want to do anything against her will , he intently cleaned her wound after she nodded , they both were done with their respective tasks . there was silence for few seconds before maan broke it

" sirf aik baar kahiye k aap hum se nafrat nahi karti rani geet " .. he asked as if his life is dependent on it, and she looked in his eyes for first time , how could she possibly hate this man , who held nothing in his eyes but love ? pure love and hidden emotions , as if she wouldn't say it immediately he would die ?

She seemed to fall for him then and there ..

" Hum aap se ..." long pause as she couldn't utter her words and hugged him tight , maan in his dazed state hugged her back ..

" aap theek to hain ??"

" hmain maaf kar dijiye .. hum boht bure hain .. sab hum ne kiya ..aap ko itni takleef di ..hmain maaf kar di jiye "

She sobbed " hum aap se ... nafrat nahi kartay raja maan .. "

Maan heard her say those words with utmost difficulty as half of her words were chocked , nothing came in his mind to stop her from crying then to make her look towards him and claim her lips to stop those sobs and tears of sadness ..

Geet for a second couldn't realize whats happening until she tasted the Diva vodka , from his mouth .. she whimpered to stop herself from crying while he just concentrated on his task of tasting her mouth .. her tears mixed salty juice is what he enjoyed for long minute , while those tasted better than the expensive drink he had had a minute ago .. then something struck him and he left her abruptly .

"hum aap ki aankhon main aansu nahi dekh saktay , issi liye hum ne wo ... ' he confessed honestly , by now she realized the depth of the love he held for her .. he never let her cry before too , but she took it in notice for first time ..


will be continued from here . 😛 Most Probably next will be LAST PART .. if not then max 2 parts ..

do review plz .. how it went ?

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amezing update n geet ke liye sirf bahut der se aye lekin durast aye
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Geet saw the tru care and love in Maan's eyes for her :D
loved the update soo much

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