Game Of Love ~ Maneet SS ~Epilogue @ 71 ~ 2 januray ~ - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for delay ..
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Geet got drunk on SR😆
maan thinking of making he drink everyday 🤣
loved it...maan eagerly waiting to hear those words from geet...par just miss!!
Was reading and dreaming how would this be if its real..means Maaneet in the show!! Hayee...lekin us Rana ka naam made my dream to burst 😒
Di...plzz change that rana name...mood ko karab kar diya us naam :(
Eagerly waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly Waiting For An Update !!!!
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hi abba
where u u gayab ???


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PART : 9


New rays of sun , brought new chapter of life ..she stretched her arms and yawned with her mouth wide open ..

" lagta ha aaj hum jaldi uth gay ' .. she muttered half awake n half in a sleeping mode ..

" to aakhir aap uth hi gayi rani geet "... maan who came to his room after looking into , few important matters of state ..

Geet flattered her eyes with an unusual voice that was not supposed to be in her room , early morning ...

" kon ha hmaray kamray main ??"

" lagta ha sharab ka asar abhi tak gya nahi ... ' .. " sevaakkk , lemo pani laao ' .. maan called out loud and geet almost jumped off the bed ..looking around she realized she isn't in her room.. the events of past day , flashed in her mind , seeing the decorations of room .. last thing she remembered was sitting in window and what happened after that she don't remember

" aap ko sar main dard hai ??"... he was in a bit off mood , coz she spoiled all his plans .. according to him she was to get up early morning and prepare something for him with her hands... she will be dressed like a princess and he will help her .. but all in vain ..

Instead of answering him , she checked herself , she was not in her wedding dress anymore .. horrified , she looked at him with questioning glare ..

" aisay kya dekh rahi hain aap ??" ... he made himself comfortable on bed , beside her ..

" hmaray kapday aap ne ... ??"

" haan ,ab itna to haq ha rani geet .."

" kis ne haq diya aap ko ' .. she was angry now ..

" apna haq cheenna padta ha , koi deta nahi " ...

Servant knocked the door .. maan ordered him to come in , he placed lemon water on the table and left the couple alone ..

" aap ne kya kia hmaray sath ?? ... she asked angrily ..

" pehlay ye paani pijiye , phir btatay hain "

" hum kuch nahi piyain gay .." ..

" sharab pi kar aap aur bhi ziddi ho gayi hain "

" sharab ??" .. she couldn't believe she was drunk last night ?

" aap pi kar boht achi batain karti hain .. '

She wondered what did she say ??

" aisa kya kaha hum ne ??"

" wo to hum nahi batain gay ... par tyaar ho jaiye , hmain pag phere k liye jaana ha '

" sachi ?? " .. geet jumped in excitement .. she was to go back to her home . to her parents ..

maan looked at her amused .. one moment she acts like a child and other moment she is all angry .. he put a full stop to her excitement ..

" aap ko sham tak hmaray sath lotna ho ga " .

" kun , rasam k mutabiq hum wahan aik din reh saktay hain ".. she replied in a stubborn way ..

Selfthought : " acha ho ga agar hum in se aik din dur rahain "

" rani geet , aaj sham aap ko hmaray sath talwar bazi seekhna ho gi , aur us k liye aap ka mehel lotna zaruri ha "

Geet wondered why on earth she has to learn sword fighting ?

" kun hum koi jung ladne ja rhay hain ??"

" aap ab aik aam ladki nahi hain , Amerkot ki rani hain .. aur rani k saray gun aap ko aanay chaiye '

" humain rani nahi banna bass !! hum talwar baazi nahi seekhain gay !" ... she concluded ...

" aap ko sikhna hi ho ga .. 5 din main talwar bazi ka muqabla ha .. ... har riasat ki maha rani wahan aaen gi .. aap ko us muqablay main hissa lena ha aur jeetna bhi ha "

Geet looked at him shocked ..how can she take part in that sword fighting competition ? she as a normal girl used to see year's grand competition ... Queens of different states giving a tough time to each other , almost killing the competitor to death .. they could do anything to win the game ..

Knowing the fact that she is totally unaware how to fight , how could he suggest her to go and take part in that deadly competition ?

" aap chahtay hain k hum kisi rani k hathon mar jaen ??? "

That was the last thing maan wanted to hear from her mouth .. he held her shoulders in strong grip making her hiss in pain ...

" aap ki himmat kaisay hui aisa kehnay ki ??"

She looked terrified with the sudden anger , maan seem to be going mad with his tone high and tight grip .. as if she said something sinfully wrong ..

" theek hi kaha hum ne ... humain talwar pakarna bhi nahi aata aur aap hmain muqablay main hissa lene ko keh rhay hain .."

" hum ne kaha na hum aap ko talwar bazi sikhain gay ." ... he tried to make her look into his eyes , which was impossible for her ..

" hum nahi seekhna chahtay .."

" hmari taraf dekh kar baat ki jiye , maan se koi muh nahi pherta .."

She gathered all her courage to look towards him , hoping that he wouldn't hurt her ,like the angry husbands used to do ..

" hum nahi jayen gay muqablay main , hum itni jaldi marna nahi chahtay ."

"hum par bharosa nahi aap ko ??."

" nahi ".. she replied in a stern tone , shocking him ... she was not the girl who was telling him the story last night .. she was someone else , something was surely wrong with her ..


Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry .. i was stuck with story , had no clue what to type next . and had no time to type further too ... hope u dont mind late updates 😛..sorry for disappearing , but have exams na , padhai b karni hoti ha 😆...
do post reviews , i will read them all 😉... reply nahi kar paa rahi , coz itnaaa time lagta ha 😆...
Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
geet is shocked to know she is drunk
n her dress is schanged by maan
more shock came when maan told her to learn sword f8 n take participate in competition
geet told it face to face she dont trust him
maan is left aghasted
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! awesome update! well written! Geet awakes n is stunned! Maan tells she was drunkl! she is angry he changed her clothes! Maan upset as she shattered all her dreams! Geet excited 2 go home 4 the pagphere rasam bt sad as she will b back in the evening! Maan tells her abt the competition! she is shocked! Maan surprised wen she says she doesn't trust him! update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..⭐️Maan is very smart but Geet also not less..😉 she is stubborn too..not ready to learn fight but good Maan wants her to learn sword fighting..😃and she's excited to go home too..so how will they go for pagphera and how Maan will made Geet agree to learn talwarbaazi..let's see..😛waiting for next update Amna..and loved this one..but np as you have exams na🤗so best of luck.👍🏼
Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago

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