~The Flower of my Heart~New SS Teaser Update at page 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb teaser! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
nice ff

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Interesting teaser...
Eagerly waiting for update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --aarthi--

no di the girl is not divya.. its just for the half saree😕

lolz..u must have pointed that or cropped the pic
no prob..doubt clarified😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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for whom maan is w8ing..
u na...keep suspense
nice tsr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice teaser ..
update soon..
Waiting..
Thanks for pm ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note:

Hello guys.. i read thro the comments and i thank one and all of you for ur response..

I have some clarifications regarding part 1 update..
the girl whose pic i have uploaded is not Divya.. and tat pic is onl for the half saree..sry tat i forgot to mention it..

and also Divya parts are Maan's flash back.. i hve edited these two to avoid further confusion..

thank you..

Aarthi..




Character Sketch:

Divya Vaithyanathan... age 24


basically from Chennai..from a well to do family .. brought up with great family values... She was brought up in hostel for some reasons and when she came to know about the reason..she took careful decision for her whole family.. still she is afraid of something ..


Part 2:

Client: Mr. Khurana I would like to introduce you to Miss. Divya our company's translator.

Maan felt something different when he saw her but shrugged it. When she gave her hand for a shake hand

Hello Mr. Khurana Im really sorry today I had taken few hours permission before the meeting and thot to make it on time but Mumbai's traffic

Maan: Its ok Miss, Mumbai traffic is unpredictable. It was a short intro and they left.after that day they occasionally met in business meetings.. as she did translation for some other foreign companies to with wic Maan was working with.

Her dedication was attracting him day by day but he Maan Singh Khurana won't accept it soon. After a month he finally realized that Divya made a important place in his heart and will b a perfect life partner for him.. Tho he dnt name it as love.. it was something different he always thot. He dnt knew her feeling for him. He decided to confess what he feels for her that day.

He called her

Maan: Divya I want ot talk to you could u plz meet me at our regular place.

Divya: Sure Maan will be there. They have grown this much comfortable with each other that their addressing of Miss and Mr changed to calling their names with authority. Their friendship was good.

Evening 5.00

They met at their usual coffee shop where they meet for some office matters or Maan for his personal meeting with friends.

The owner of the coffee shop was s friendly with them as they where frequent visitors and apart from the businessman he is Maan was purely a youngster who cracks jokes be friendly with all. He can be khadoos at times but not often.

He enjoy's himself that's why he concentrated on his poetic hobby ad sometimes in music also.

Raghu kaka today I need a little privacy he said few hrs before Divya reached the place so which place will be best for me he asked the owner who was in his mid 40's looked at his aquarium themed coffee shop and suggested a place where it will be peaceful for his discussions as he always booked or say choose the place for Maan knowing how stressful his works are and none should disturb him.

Divya: What is the matter Maan that you wanted to meet me urgently?

What surprised him were words refused to make its way through. OMG it was the Maan Singh Khurana who is in short of words that was definitely a surprise or say shock for him as he was going to have a personal talk with a girl after college. His works made him busy that he had to restrict himself to certain things like getting into contact with his college friends..and the women he met in business world was very different from the one who where close to him. He found something in Divya that's the reason he gradually fell for her.

Maan: Divya...

Yes Maan

Hmm what have you thot about your future.. he said to just start the conversation. I know im weird in asking this question but I just wanted to know as u know I never open up with anyone else and something is really getting my nerves and by this I can get some solutions and somewhat perfect answer from you.

Divya: Sure Maan you as a friend have every right to ask and discuss about anything. And about my future as you will always be my parent's decision. I respect their views

(Maan knew tho she is modern she has immense respect for traditional values and that was one of the reason he liked about her the most)

Maan: ah ..well he sighed Divya.. I dnt like to beat around the bush,, I just want to say you that I want to make you as my life partner. I dnt know when I started to fel for you. I would not say that the feeling im having is love coz its to early to decide as we only met few months ago...but I feel that you will fulfill my all expectations in life as u have been the girl I wanted for me with whom I can be a friend, with whom I can share all my feelings a perfect life partner who will be at my side for each and every stage of my life.. I will also not force you to decide anything in haste as I know how much u respect your parents and the tradition I want you to take ample time and give me your answer. I know this sudden gesture from me would be a shock to you but take your time as I cudn't hold it more in my heart. Talk with your parents.. if u want I can also talk with them.

Divya who was shocked after listening to all this composed herself. Thanks Maan for considering my decision and not forcing me into the relation and as always I respect you for th respecting women. I have always thot you to be different from other men's and you proved me right. As you said I wish to discuss this matter with my parents as I never hide anything from them she said sipping her coffee. Maan was elated as his heart was free from the whole confusion.

Precap:

And life is not bed of roses..

P.S

Flash back parts will get over soon tats y im taking flashbacks in fast forward mode.. if u dnt understand anything plz do ask me..

Edited by --aarthi-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Thanks for the clarification
Nice update
Maan liked Divya n thought she would be a good life partner
He proposed her... She told she will talk to her parents
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Thanks for the clarification

Nice update
Maan liked Divya n thought she would be a good life partner
He proposed her... She told she will talk to her parents
Eagerly waiting for the next update

ur welcome di..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
maan is nervous
for first time he is attracted to a girl
he confessed his feeling
n didnt force her too
great..
she liked the way he respected her decision
she didnt say yes nor no
lets c how their life take turns
nice part

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