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nostalgicmoon

@nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome one,and for me The most loved stance she changed the name maan to mine,because the two lines showed what place she has Given maan in her life,and u had portrayed the feelings and fears of arranged marriage having couple really well

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

wow lovely superb pleasant update..te way my maaneet ki arranged marriage and geet nervous thinkng abt her life how its going to take a shape 2mor was lovely..te way my maan trying to make his geet ease and distracting her with his charmness even though geet's heart accept him but still her ,mind trying to analysis was lovely..te way my maan giving cheese bread making her shy shy yes now geet have started to trust my maan yes trust tis te word need for any relation to start..i love te update dear

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

welcome back dear! congrats on the OS! Superb OS! Wonderfully written! Geet getting married n a bit apprehensive! she meets her groom! they talk! She realizes her is best 4 her! he assures her! She is nt relieved! Maan sent a sandwich her b4 he wedding! only she understood! she is happy!

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patikaddi1976

@patikaddi1976

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

fabulous os, keep writing like this

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

hi nandy

lovely os ..

so beautifully written ..just got lost in it ..

its amazing

thanks ..

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Superb OS :))
lovd it alot

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Uruja123

@Uruja123

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

awsme ...
its sooO lovely ...
superb os 😊 ...!!!!

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Whoaaa beautiful start hun.. The beginning is something i think almost every girl goes through... Loved how maan was able to make her feel comfy.. I would probably faint.. Lol.. Cont soon hun

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Beautiful Os very true to real life and Geet slowly shedding the awkwardness with her would be hubby was sweet

Cheese sandwich as a gift pre wedding😆 its like a mini personal conversation with Maan after all these time just the night before the wedding she had a proper talk and look at the man she is marrying

loved the touch of him mentioning his name towards the last part👏