DARK TEMPTATION 2 #2 Updated LAST PART+EPILOGUE on Pg 135/ 8-12-2015

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samidsamid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

part 31...so Geet blame herself fr...seprting samrth and maan and also atharv...she swept it love in lonliness...samrth knew abt maan...bt he has his own promises...so Geet is fearing to face maan...and finally they may...bt maan is angry...

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pinku04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#502

part 32
ufff... ye dono hi pagal hain... 😡😡😡
pehle geet aur ab ye maan... 😡😡😡 mana ki wo geet se naarzz hai but isme atharav ko sunane ki kya jaroorat thi... poor boy.. he is now scared of him... maan also called his son to someone's sin & garbage etc ... now what is the difference b/w him and geet... 😡😡😡

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#503

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! well written! This Maan😡 taunts Geet! Atharav is scared seeing his dad so angry!! Maan refers 2 his son as a sin! Geet stunned! she doesn't retort. Samarth angry! he slaps Maan! Atharav wants 2 go back as his dad hates him! Samarath tries 2 make him calm! Meera is friendly! So Meera is his cousin! Samarth explains 2 Geet! Atharav goes 2 Meera! Geet tries 2 talk 2 Maan! he is so rude! She wants him 2 come back 4 his dad! she will leave with her son! update soon! Feeling 4 Atharav!

Edited by khwaishfan - 9 years ago

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kuhu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#504

lovely update

can understand Maan pov

and to some extant Geet deserve it

but felt really bad for atharav

he is so hurt i hope its not deep

Maan should make it up for this

Meera is Maan sister

also feel bad for Samrath

waiting foe next

cant wait to see what next

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vrinda22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#505

maan is too rude

geet is silent

poor atharv scared to see maans anger n samarth slapping him

meera is maans sis..

he blamed geeet for his dad slapping him

n poured his anger reverting her every words

how can he say his own son as someone else sin

geet trying to make maan come back 2 his dad n son

maan snapping her

nice part

want 2 slap maan

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SRK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Awesome update..maan burst out on them not even spare small kid . atrarav was scared & started crying 😭😭& first time samarth slapped him . meera was maan's cousin sister . Geet tried to convince Maan to return back to his father waiting for next thanks for PW 😊

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Monikaarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#507

omgg...i never thought maan to this much angry . .even he didn't spare a look to his own son ..feeling so bad for little boy .. geet requesting maan to come back home for the sake ofhis father .. lets see what will maan do ..

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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#508

TEASER

"son listen to me,i know she did wrong..."

"no dad she wasnt wrong. Its me who love her. Usne to kabhi kaha hi nahi.its me who expect and got what i deserve." Samarth dont found word to continue because the pain he witnessed in his eyes was so deep. It was same like he experienced at the time he entered in his life as a step father. He know scars on his heart was so deep.
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Maan left the house and just glance back at his father before leaving. "i am sorry dad,na main achha beta bann paya na father. But i am sure Atharav apko wo sari khushiya dega jo main de paya. Last time apko dekh liya now i dont want any thing." Maan think while staring at his father for few moments and then he left the place.

enjoy the teaser till next update😈

Edited by Dragon-Heart - 9 years ago