MG SS I DINT GIVE BIRTH STILL I BECAME A MOTHER part 3 page 8 20/9/15

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December04

@December04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: patikaddi1976
looks like u r telling south indian film story. in kannada it is hallimestru starring ravichandran

yes buddy
i already said its a film based story!
I came to know its almost in all languages 😉

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Superb update
Geet is such lovely n cute

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

hilarious! mischievous Geet.
you worry about your husband..and the fake cry !! 😆
interesting start..

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Character Sketch and Part 1

Simply Vibrant and Mischievous

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GC_TheKing

@GC_TheKing

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Nice CS . Loved the first part.

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Interesting part 1, Geet is naughty girl stealing mangoes, got caught and beaten up by her father.

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Part 2
Postman: sab ji! Sab ji!
Rano: ji!
PM: a letter has come for mohindar sab!
Rano: dejiye!
Mohinder: comes along with some villagers.
Rano: ji! a letter has come! and gives it to him.
He opens and reads it.
Mohinder : smiles and says "achha hua" and turns to the villagers, we have asked for a new teacher right! He is arriving tomorrow!
He calls a servant maid radha and asks her to clean a room that is alloted from panchayat!
Radha is a helper married to murugan who is a srrvant who works for mohinder in fields.
A bus enters into the village.
A man get down from the bus with a baby in one hand and luggage in another.

Man: "ohho baby why now?"

Baby: ewwwewww and then eeeaaa
Man: smiles!
The baby diapers has to be changed.

Man: searches if there is anyone coming so that he can get help.

He sees a girl jumping on her toes giggling and laughing with 3 boys coming towards his way!

He stops them 'hey girl !"
Its none other than our geet.

Geet: me?

Man:yes! Is there any river near by!

Geet: sees the luggages and the "bulb on her head lightens up". Why? Who are u?

Maan: "my name is maan.
I am new to this village. I have to clean my baby so...!
Can u help?"

Geet: "ohh of course!!
I love helping others u know!
There is a river nearby that side !"

Maan: "ok" and he tries to take his bags.

Geet :stops him and says how will u carry both the baby and the bags u go and come back we will take care of it!(smirks)"

Maan: thinks and then says ok!

When he leaves all the 4 starts to open his bags and searches and gets the food bag and milk bottles and they leave the other things and run away.

When maan returned back he was shocked! He found the bags open and the food bags missings!
Oh my god this girl! I did not even ask her name will see to her! First incident after entering the village he was irritated

He takes the remaining bags and enters into the village.

Maan: ji koi hai!

Mohindar: kaun !

Maan: mere naam maan singh khurana hain aur yeh mere bacha aarav! I am the new teacher for 4th and 5th standard classes.

Mohindar: haan haan maan ji! Andher aaye!

Maan: ji!
Mohindar: my people have cleaned the room and kept ready for u! Ur wife dint come!

Maan:sighs ! She has passed away when she gave birth to him.

Mohinder: oh sorry maan ji!

Its ok ji!

Mohinder: did u eat anything? Only this much luggage u brought?

Maan: ohho dont ask tat a girl and 3 boys they took my food packs.

Mohinder looks at rano(irritated): it should be geet!

Maan: u know that girl!

Mohinder: maaj kardijiye maan ji!

Woh meri beti hai geet !
She is so mischievious do such stupid things and never learn amy good things!
I will look after it. Rano go and arrange for lunch! Baby kiliye dhoodh bhi!

Maan: thanks mohinder ji ! But ill buy something no need of this!

Mohinder: its ok maan ji!
Pls for today atleast have food with us!

Maan: (sighs) ok.

After that maan leaves to his new home and start arranging
things and also tied a crib for baby with his wife's old sari.

He takes her photo out from the bag and keep it near the gods potrait and lights the lamp.

Maan: drashti i hope u are hearing this i feel something is going to change here hope its for good.
As i promised to u i will look after our son like my soul!

He then goes out and asks the girl whom mohindar introduced as radha where he could buy vessels and other vegetables and all.

Radha: u have to go to town to get them.sir ji u give me money i ll get all the things at cheap rate for u!
Maan thinks then says ok and give her the money.
By evening she brought everything and gave to him.
Maan tried to give some money to her.
But she denied to get any!
Sir ji u are already doing everthing by ur own and alsi taking care of ur son.
This is some help that i can do so dont give money for this and all think me like a sister and any help u can call me!

Maan thinks about the girl who took his food away and also about radha! Each one is different. He thought and starts to make dinner cerlac for the baby and rice and curry for him.

And the 4 thieves again surrounds his house getting the delicious food smell.

They hide and look who is the man in that house which was closed for so many days and finds the same man whom they saw in bus stand.

Maan was feeding cerelac for the baby who was in full playing mode!
He makes some funny noises shows some toys and finally he could feed something to aarav. When he tries to Feed another spoon the baby splits and say burrr burrr burrr starts rubbing his eyes.

Maan smiles and says so my baby is sleepy he wipes aarav's face and change him into some cotton dress and puts him into the crib and starts swaying it. Saying some sweet notings soja mera raja:)) soja mera laadla:))

Geet was seeing these things and admiring the fatherly love of maan!
The boys starts pulling her didi kya hua shall we go!

Maan decides to clean himself and freshen up and then come and eat !

Geet antenna straitens up

After he leaves all the four come and take the food vessels and go out near a tree and start eating

Here maan comes and shocked to see everything missing. He searches nearby but no one was there.

After eating stomach full they put all the vessels their and dolu bolu and raju says yummy meal na didi.
Geet says yes and then feels pity about the single father.
So she says
"Oye bacho come lets clean and keep the vessels back"
Boys: no no didi we are not ready to get beaten up by that man did u see his muscles. We are not coming if u want ugo and kerp them back.

As said she cleans everthing and when she goes near the door and silently keeps them and turns to leave.

Maan: stop there. Was it tasty?

Geet:omg! He he he and turns towards him

Maan: where are those 3little devils? Is it ur full time duty to steal and eat u khana chor!!
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Geet: oh ho!!! dont talk too much we were hungry thats why we ate it other wise who will eat that tasteless saltless brinjal curry !!

Maan frowns
She runs away!
Maan: ruko ruko u chor !wait ill tell to ur father he will give u nicely!

Sighs and go backs and make some rotis then cursing geet eats and sleeps!!

Edited by diadecember - 9 years ago

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

:-P..
Geet and her Teen chor .. sathi ..
hehe ..
poor Maan and his son ..
Geet unka khana chura li..
tch tch ..
waise Geet ne jhut kyu bola .. atleast Maan khush ho jata ki usse achha khana banna aata hai..
waiting for next part...

Edited by nitika20 - 9 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

toh dono k milna hogaye...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...