FF: Forever and Always........THREAD 4 Updtd EPI/pg 41 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Fantastic update

Maaneet union ☺️
Maaneet last letter to armaan was too emotional... Well described how they feel
I liked the way you started with armaan n ended with him... Going to miss... stranger n miss song
Will be waiting for the epilogue



Thank you dear!!😊😊 they were united in more than just bodies and now they can move forward without the past holding back.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mamta-salian

Beautiful story with perfect ending..

Thank you for the lovely story🤗




Thank you dear!!😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 61 - sangeet function finished and dadi sent both to have dinner together. liked the way maan understood her, cared for her. he was upset that he couldn't spend more quality time with her but he took what he wanted from her next day. loved the all teasing maan & geet and enjoyed maan blabbering on geet's threat...rano was just making sure that her daughter is happy. liked how geet explained about them being for each other's soulmate.



Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 I felt like there should be a scene between rano and Geet now that they had renewed their relationship. I am glad you enjoyed that scene.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 62 - lovely part. maan kept his word of not meeting her and this one day separation was not bearable for both and both were so desperate to finish this marriage & after-rituals. poor maan, a big business tycoon, had to pay tax at every moment and had to bend against four girls. finally marriage is over & they became mr & mrs khurana.



Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 Well maan babu is a man of his words 😉 I am glad you enjoyed the marriage ceremony. Frankly I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 63 - so hot maaneet reunion. read such things lots of time but the way you wrote was awesome. it did not feel any cheap. liked the way maan asked her permission at every step.



Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 I am happy with your thoughts. Even after writing I was apprehensive if it had been vulgar because that would destroy the essence of the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 64 - perfect ending. geet's decision to come to Chennai and say good bye to armaan together was surprising and was necessary for a proper closure. geet's words were more touching. I liked this line by geet - "As strange as it sounds I feel like you are an angel who just met me to pave a path for me and Maan to meet. " -. this ending was not expected but I liked this unique ending. pl don't stop writing. you are a great writer. you writing always simple but touching to my heart. waiting for epilogue and then more stories from you.



Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 I gave a lot of thought to what should be the ending and I came up with this. Acknowledging the pain and letting the past go completely merged with their togetherness. I am already writing another in this forum but I don't know if I would start anything new. But thank you, its readers like you that make me the writer I am.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

First, Thank you for this beautiful story...
I always wanted a letter from Geet to Armaan from a long time..
and the way you used it towards the end of story..
that was emotional but the perfect end for the story, start of a beautiful journey for Maaneet...




Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 I also thought that to be the best way to end this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

Omg... I got no word to describe this update... Simply a beautiful end fr an amazing story... Just by recalling armaan memory fm geet n maan.. I have fallen in love with armaan deeply... Their consummation was so beautifully written to express maaneet love fr each other.. The most touching part fr me was the final good by to armaan at Lake side... Maaneet last writing in their diary n sharing it was so touching n beautiful... How many times a re read it.. It still give me goosebumps... It is really sad that the story finally came to an end... Greedy to read more.. Pls give long epi yaar.. Tk you fr giving us this wonderful story..




Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊 It means a lot to me to have you say these words. Armaan had been a difficult one to create. He is a character created only by memories of others but I am glad he was so well received. I had enjoyed a lot writing this and that is mainly due to you readers so thank you once again.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m

Wo marvelllous

Simply dnt knw whether its Maaneet who make both parts marvellous or ur writing skilll..throughly enjyy
Maaneet new journey now start from here ..he let arms go in rest in peace n walk toward in their forever life together 😊




Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Lovely ending Aditi.

You covered the essence of the story nicely. I have been in and out of the story so many times because as you know by know I am one of the most impatient readers. Having said that I wanted to finish what I started and I am glad you completed the story inspite of your issues.

Thanks for the story.




Thanks a lot di!!😊😊 Even I have been very irregular on IF nowadays but am happy you read the final part. I admire you as a writer and coming from you that I did a nice job means a lot to me.

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