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Superb part . maan ko ab family ki importance smjh mei aarehi hai ...but sayed bht der kar di ...geet kabeer n dai maa r enjoying ...too good ...waiting for maha update
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Maan has to work very hard to clear the demage done by him
So geets truth coming out ..

Maan pregency ka bhi batega kya
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Maan enters his room n thoughts of his marriage flashes in his mind
He feels now
feeling left out
Between his own family
His dad gave the money he asked
Dev meera s marriage going to fix
N reema asked maan to be in his room
Now he is hurt
Its meant to happen
He sowed it n now reaping it
Awesome part
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Fab update
But di maha update bhi update kar do plzzz
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Maan goes 2 his room! he recalls wt he did 2 Geet! Maan feels bad! he wonders abt Geet! his family didn't mention anything! Maan happy as his dad transferred the money! Sam messages! he replies! Sam off to US 4 her treatment! His mom n dadi talk abt Dev;s wedding! they tell him 2 to come in front of Meera n her family as they dnt kwn wt to say! Maan agrees! he realises the ramifications his actions! interesting precap! update soon
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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 29


Part - 30

Maan was pacing impatiently in his room thinking about d past ,, there was not a single talk nd sign of Geet in KM ,, he was dying to know d damage done by him in his blindness , but he didn't have d courage to ask from DM nd his Mom ,, he was confused thinking that if his family helped Geet sending her to Canada behind him ,then why they wr not asking about her ? if everything related to his marriage to Geet... Geetika was wrapped then why they wr not talking to him related to her ? d room was eating him ,, remembrance of his last nyt wr torturing him ,, helplessly he went to meet DM in her room nd overheard his mom nd DM's words.

Reema: maa we have to talk clearly to Maan ,, he has to cop up with us for time being ... baad mei jo hoga dekenge .

DM: haan , tum theek kahati ho Reema ,, abhi to jo sabko pata hei ussi se sab ko handle kerne ki koshish ker sakty hein ,, engagement mei kisi ek ka hona jaroori hei , warna sab baten banayenge ,, uska to pata nahi per Maan to hei aur baat ko handle kerne mei help ker sakta hei .

Reema : esliye ,, we have to talk to him to support us for d sake of family respect .

DM: hummm,, bas Babaji ye shaadi theek se hone de ,, sab khushiyon ko grahan lag gaya hei ,, atleast Dev ki life to happily set ho .

Reema: chaliye Maan se baat kerte hein ,, then I have to plan for dinner .

DM: hum,, chalo.

Both d ladies wr going to move when Maan entered there with heavy heart ,, both startled for few sec seeing him there , but it was Maan who eased them.

Maan: oh it's good mom u r also here ,, I come to spent some time with DM ,, DM r u free ?

DM: yeah beta , come , I m always free for my kids .( DM gestured him to sit near her on bed )

Reema: we both r coming to talk u Maan ,, r u not tired ?

Maan: no, I m fine mom .

DM nd Reema exchange a look nd then looked at Maan with a faint smile ,, Maan sensed their hesitation , nd d gap between them ,, there was a time when his DM nd Mom rightfully talk to him , shared every thing related to family ,forced him to accept their wish nd today they wr shunning to talk d family matters .

DM: Maan , as we said that we r planning to set Dev's marriage nd there r few things for d whole family to face or to handle some Qs regarding u ,, we hope u won't disappoint us again if we ask u to co -operate us ,, now we don't force u but for d respect of family or as d elder son , u have to attend d engagement nd marriage ,, r u willing to join d family in this imp function ?

Reema: u don't have to do much ,, only ur presence is enough to shut d mouth of ppl,, we want only lil co-operation from u .

Maan hurt : mom , DM plzz , trust me , I won't disappoint u ,, i'll do what u'll say, but why this prob ? what r u hiding ?

DM sighed : Maan u don't know what happened after u months back ,,( Maan gulped hard nd looked down ) u left secretly without talking to us ,, we didn't know what u had said to Geetika ,, but what she disclosed infront of all that was right nd we wr guilty nd ashamed in front of her nd her family ,, though Yash was success to make her agree to stay with us in KM that saved our respect nd reputation in society nd relatives ,, Bcoz of her lil stay in KM we r able to hide d truth that marriage of ur nd Geetika doesn't exist ,, u broke up that marriage nd she too refused to go with this relation where u admitted openly that u r in love with some one nd cn't accept her ,, u rejected her nd she rejected u nd us nd at last left for ever ,, but ppl r still in this impression that everything is fine ,, we said that u went for ur MBA to Canada nd after sometime Geetika too left for US for her study .

Maan looked at DM shocked nd puzzled ,, many facts popped up at once in his mind ,,d matter of his affair with Sam nd his forced marriage was disclosed ,, she rejected this relation , she lived in KM for d sake of his family respect ,, she left for ever ,, she went to US for higher study ...US ? Maan very hardly opened his mouth nd asked .

Maan: what do u mean she left for ever ? r u not in her or her family contact ?

Reema: no,, she broke all her ties with her family too same day u left her ,, Yash nd Daimaa requested her a lot then she agreed to live here ,,she was here with her Daijaan nd stayed in OH , she came in KM only when some guests arrived ,, otherwise she very hardly talked to us .

Maan shocked : she broke her ties with her family , but why ?

Reema: there was a lot ,, her family too was at fault ,, that poor girl suffered a lot bocz of both d families ,,we tried to keep her with us giving all d rights like a Khurana family member but she refused .

DM: now we have doubt that she was not a Manglik too ,, her Janam kundli was wrong .

Maan again shocked : what ,, wrong ,, matlab ?

DM: huumm ,,, there was a big MU related to her DOB ,, her parents never checked that nd Pt made d Kundli with wrong DOB ,, Geetika nd Daimaa too wr unaware nd got d truth when in anger she asked her janam kundli to tore that .

Maan: what ?

Reema: yes ,, her parents too wr in shock after getting d truth when Geet nd daimaa reveled this biggest mistake ,, what we all thought nd what had happened?

Maan puzzled : but why she broke her relation with her family , they had to support her ?

DM: they r very orthodox , sply darji , her dadaji ,, after ur rejection we wr ready to keep her with us with all respect but she refused then her darji , bua nd parents forced her to go with us,, darji said that she was married nd her place is in her husband's house ,, they won't allow her in their home if she'll broke her marriage ,, that cd ruin their repect in pind ,, in anger d matter went far nd she refused to go in that house too breaking all d relation with them ,, then Yash nd her Daimaa requested her to stay in KM for d sake of her security nd our respect ,, she was here for 1 nd half month nd then went for higher study to US ,, for few days she nd Daimaa wr in our touch but then they cut off ,, we don't know anything about them.

Maan was hell shocked listening all that ,, his family was saying that she went to US but she is in Canada ,, they didn't have any contact with her then how she got that he is in Canada nd in that college ? What is this mystery ? One thing is cleared that she lied to his family that she was going to US .

Again so many Qs aroused in Maan's mind ... Why she lied to his parents nd why she choose d same college for MBA ? Why she didn't react seeing him with Sam ? What was her intentions behind this lie ? She hates him nd she was preg ... OMG !! means his parents didn't know about her preg bcoz they wr not in her contact ,, he was also wrong nd thought that his family helped her to sent her there ,, she informed his dad about Sam .. Gosh !!! he was so wrong ,, Maan's head was spinning with all those truths which wr opening one after another ,, Like him there wr many things which his family didn't know about Geet ... Geetika .

Reema: Maan , we want that u keep this truth wrapped that Geet is with us ,, she is studing in US nd won't able to join d function bcoz of her bad health or Exams ,, we have to lie , nd u have to support us in this .. plzz ,, we r already at lose nd don't want to face d loss of Khandaan's respect ,, ppls will raise so many Qs nd fingers at you nd Geetika , which cn tarnish our image in society nd friend circle .

Maan: aammm,, I understand Mom ,, I won't do anything wrong ,, i'll handle it as u want .

DM: thank u Maan ... ek bar ye shaadi ho jaye fir aage ka sochenge kaise handle kare ?

Maan wanted to disclose d truth about Geet that she is not in US but she is Canada , in same college , in front of him ,,He became restless knowing about d mishappening , though he was d main reason of this damage but he didn't want to keep his parents in dark any more,, he wanted to share d truth about their Geetika's where about nd about her preg ,, they have right to know about her well being as they still mentioned her as their DIL .

Maan feared nd gulped hard,, his heart burdened ,, he didn't know what wd come to face after disclosing this truth ? He cursed himself that his one wrong step brought so many troubles for all , scattered every relation ,, 1st he lied nd hide d reality of his intentions of running away from here , nd then Geet ,, Don't know what she wants? The truth of Geet's preg was not easy to digest , it put him more in pit of guilt nd his family cursed him , he didn't know how his dad wd react .. God!! Plzz save me .

Maan garnered himself nd took a long breath , decided to disclose d truth ,, he looked at his DM nd Mom with painful eyes nd exploded d bomb of Geetika's truth .

Maan meakly: DM ,, Mom ,, Geet ,, I mean Geetika is not in US ,, she hide d truth from u .





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DM& Reema looked at puzzled not getting his words ,, Maan understood that both didn't get that actually he was talking about Geetika .

Maan: yes u heard right , Geetika OR Geet didn't go to US for study , but she went to Canada nd she is in same college where I m doing my MBA .

DM& Reema: what !!!!! In Canada !!!!

Maan closed his eyes tightly gulping down d reality which he revealed nd going to throw him in d arena of numerous Qs from all around ,,DM nd Reema wr looking at him in disbelief with wide eyes .

Maan nodded in yes with lower head ,, this was d lil truth , next blow wd be more hard to bear ,, Maan's tongue stuck to his palatal , he gulped hard remembering d holy mother .

Reema: kya kaha tumne Maan , Geetika US me nahi Canada mei hei.

Maan hummed .

DM: ye kaise ho sakta hei ? hume kuch samajh nahi aa raha ? Reema Yash ko bulao abhi .

Reema : ji Maa ,, Yash was dying to know any news about Geetika , nd this was really shocking for him ,, I m calling him .

Reema called Yash at once ,, he replied after few rings ,, Reema gulped nd requested him to come home at once .

Yash: why , what happened ? did Maan do something again ?

Reema sighed : no Yash , there is news regarding Geetika ,, plzz come soon .

Yash: What , Geetika's news ? what is that , does she contact u ?

Reema : no , u come here 1st then u cn get about her ,, its Maan who tells us about her ,, plzz u come here .

Yash: Maan ,, ok fine I m coming .

He cut d call nd Reema told DM that he was coming ,, d news about Geetika was big for them ,, d restlessness nd eagerness for Geet in his family startled Maan ,, he knew that now he had to reply his Dad related to Geet nd he had to face d anger of his family again ,, now he remembered his Dad's words that he had to face much more facts after coming here ,, he promised to his Dad to face nd cdn't runaway from d reality of his life ,, Maan tried to ask about Geet's family he cdn't believe that her family abandoned her .

Maan: DM , does Handas know that Geet is not with us ?

DM: yes ,, Rano , her mother called me few times to ask about geetika nd I informed her that she went to US for her study nd then about not having any contact with us .

Maan: means they r also unaware about her ? Then who helped her financially ?

DM: yes ,, only Daimaa talked to Rano few times nd once visited to HP , Geetika sold her land which was on her name in HP ,, it was cleared that she didn't want to keep any relation from HP ,, Yash nd we requested her to take financially help but she refused ,, she didn't take a penny from us , even returned all d jewellery which we gave her in marriage ,, that was so insulting for us .

Maan felt a pang in his heart nd realized that she was married to him but didn't take anything from his family where as he expended money like water on Sam , even at last she threatened him to give money for her treatment too ,, still for her he was begging d money from his Dad ,, it was really insulted for him too ,, Geet was all alone in this condition without any family support ,, she was suffering without any reason bcoz of him ,, her hate for him was rightful ,, he deserves this ,, guilt engulfed him .

Yash reached KM ,,he was eager to know about Geetika ,, after months they got any clue about her ,, Yash entered in DM's room nd asked about geetika without wasting any sec.

Yash: Maan what do u know about Geet ? Where is she ? How is she ?

Reema: Yash relax ,, calm down ,, there is an unbelievable news about her .

Yash: what is that ? tell me fast Man .

Reema: Geetika is in Canada , not in US Yash .

Yash: what , in Canada ?

DM: yes , Maan said this nd she is studing in Maan's college.

Yash looked at Maan shocked ,, Maan gulped hard ,, expressions wr changing on Yash's face , nd Maan was noticing them ,, he was sensing d reasons behind this change.

Yash: is it true Maan ?

Maan meakly : yes Dad .

Yash: Did she talk to u ?

Maan: no .

Yash: did u talk to her ?

Maan: Yes,, no ,, I mean yes , I mean I talked to her but ...

Yash: what is all this... yes,,no ,,yes .. answered me clearly .

Maan: woo , Dad ,, actually when I met her 1st in college , I ,, I didn't recognize her .

All: what ?

Yash stressed d words : he didn't recognize her ? R u listening Maa , Reema ?

Both d ladies gave a disappointed look to Maan nd Yash glared at him ,, Maan was in a very miserable condition ,, he was fearing for this situation .

Maan: wo o .. now she has changed totally nd I saw her in wedding dress so d ...

Yash: tum jaise insaan se aur hope bhi kya ki ja sakti hei ?

Maan dipped his head in shame nd guilt ,, d pirecing glares of elders wr unbearable for him .

Yash: Did she see nd know that u r with ur so called GF ? speak up .

Maan nodded : haan .

Damn ... DM nd Reema gasped nd looked at him with disgust ,, all wr hurt feeling d pain of Geet.

Yash : Now i realized why she lied nd went to Canada ,, she didn't trust us ,,followed him nd seeing him with that girl cut all d link from us ,, she thought that we also cheated her like him,, now forget about her , after knowing all this how we cn have any hope for her ,, I have to told her when I got d hint about his deeds that he was with his GF ,, she never forgive us ,, Maa , Reema forget about her ,nd try to go with d reality ,, stopped hiding d truth , it's useless ,, one day it has to face so why not now ?

DM sigh : at least up to Dev's marriage .

Reema: yes Yash , at least keep this wrapped for few more days ,, Maan is ready to co-operate ,, he'll come nd we cn hide d fact of Geetika making any excuse .

Yash: haan ,, u r right here ,, he cn lie perfectly .

Maan: I m very sorry Dad , nd ready to repent ,, Dad we cn't forget her now , never in future ,, she becomes an inseparable part of Khurana ,, there was something more to know about her .

All looked at Maan curious ,, there was a determination on Maan's face ,, a firmness in words indicating that there was something big to come .

Yash: what do u want to say ?

Maan: we cn't forget her ,, she is expecting ,, she is preg ...

All jumped on their feet with shock : What !!!!

Yash: come again ... DM: kya kaha tumne ? ... Reema: fir se kaho .

Maan: Geet is preg , nd I m saying d truth .

All: I cn'tbelievethis !!

Reema : it means u nd Geetika ...

Maan looked down nd nodded in yes ... There was silence in d room for few sec nd after few sec ther was loud sound of slaps which shocked DM nd Reema ,, Maan knelt down near Yash legs with a sob , nd Yash covered his face with his palms nd then racked his hands through his hair ,, pain nd anger was visible in his eyes ,, even DM nd Reema's eyes too turned wet .


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Part - 31

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