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Posted: 6 years ago

What is love?
Love comes from within you, from you.
So apt and true. It does come from oneself only. If you don't have it or you don't love yourself, all the world's love won't be enough.


Didn't know you write verses too. Talented Sophie, you are a good writer. All my life okay maybe that's an exaggeration, all my graduation years I've wished I could write with such fluency. There's a such a seamless flow about your writing. As if one sentence is giving way to another. Claps.

Love yourself and sometimes maybe you're allowed to love your weakness too.
Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Dear Heart
Loved this piece to bits. What do I say about it apart from the fact that I was nodding my head at each and every line? It was like your pen/fingers gave expression to each of our heart's state that too in such a poetic style.

My favourite quote: A beating heart is a happy soul and a dead beat is a saddened human.

Letting you know that I've noted down this line in my diary. I hope you don't mind and if you have any problem I'd be happy to strike it off (but then it would be a crime to strike through such a beautiful line) Anyway, I have a good memory. Lol
Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
I'm halfway through Transport Love. Will comment later and am going to start Forced Love because it reads interesting. 😆 Once again, thank you Soph.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh and the Meera of the Her foolish mistake of Assigned Love, sounds so much like me.

I want to read that too. I need to read that too.

I think I am doomed.

- Finished reading the tale and enjoyed it so much.

First, the whole concept of a story within a story was such an unparalleled idea, at least in the forum that it immediately grabbed my interest. Secondly, it was special because it was so relatable. Meera, an achieving and diligent student until of course Geet happened to her, then how she becomes a procrastinator, felt like it was my story you were telling. You know how the forum shadowed her everywhere. And that note about not writing stories anymore now at least I am in cognizance of one reason why people put on notes and then disappear. Assignments! The way Meera keeps delaying finishing her project only to finish it a night before was so spot on. I've done that so many times. I'm still going to do that, I think. Then, there's a part about living the heroine and imagining the girlfriend as a thin, bony girls. So true again.

Now, about the story. A nerd, an arrogant but charming playboy, and a bet, best ingredients for a very palatable story I can totally understand why Meera couldn't stay away.

The thought process of Geet was so accurately done. When she's thinking about the difference between a nerd and a geek, it's so true. Then her first impressions about Maan, that was also well written. Then, how on knowing him from close, her perception changes. She warms up to him. Maan at first seemed a caricature
character, you know going by the rules, smart, good with girls, not one of my most favourite kind of heroes, but gradually I started liking him when I saw him treat Geet riend and more instead of a bet, then how there was faulty judgment on his part when he gets back with Sam, then realizes his error of judgment. The struggles of coming to terms with the fact that G meant more to him was greatly done. Then the unforgettable prom night and their union.

Really enjoyed the ride. Thank you.

A little revelation. All the time I was imagining Noah Centineo as Maan. 😆
Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Love yourself and sometimes maybe you're allowed to love your weakness too

- I love this line, love the weaknesses too, if only we can all do that instead of focusing on forming that picturesque being.

And of course feel free to note down or use whatever you like 😃

I'm seriously thankful for the comments

You've read about meera and the assignment, I'm glad you liked it. Noah's your Maan hmmm nice choice. Since you've told me a secret, I'll tell you mine I was actually writing that during an assignment and like Meera I handed it in 1 minute to 12 midnight, roughly just making it for the deadline. That wasn't the first but I sure hope that'll be the last lol

I practically died then lol
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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi Sophie/Twenty1st (What do you prefer to be called?).. You have an amazing collection of stories.. Currently started reading Opposite Love.. Congratulations on winning at Writers Fair for this story.. Loved the writing style.


R/N: Just a small note the index might need a little fixing regarding page numbers..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: m32223

Hi Sophie/Twenty1st (What do you prefer to be called?).. You have an amazing collection of stories.. Currently started reading Opposite Love.. Congratulations on winning at Writers Fair for this story.. Loved the writing style.


R/N: Just a small note the index might need a little fixing regarding page numbers..



Firstly welcome, feel free to call me what you like. Soph is just fine too
Thank you and yes i am aware of the page number shift but honestly i'm too lazed out ATM plus most of the FF's are closed

Sorry if it causes you trouble
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Twenty1st



Firstly welcome, feel free to call me what you like. Soph is just fine too
Thank you and yes i am aware of the page number shift but honestly i'm too lazed out ATM plus most of the FF's are closed

Sorry if it causes you trouble


Thank you Soph for welcoming me😃regarding the index it wasn't much a problem 😆
I keep having trouble with posting the post..(Error Messages )😔
I guess i will take time getting used to India Forums and their rules..😳

Have sent you a buddy request 😊

-Kiara
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Posted: 6 years ago
Opposite Love
Throughly Enjoyed reading this story...👏Totally Hilarious..🤣
Geet-Pari-Pinky the 'Trio Squad'.. Go Girl Power..
Maan being a the scardy cat and Geet being the tough nut in the beginning...😆
Maan's self-drooling sessions 🤣
Didn't think Adi could be the Villan😲😲 (feeling sorry for his background story - 'Ninamika Chronicals'😆)
Adi losing his evil laugh.. reminds me of Mojojojo..😆😆
In the end all's well that ends well😊
So Maan- Geet are together..love blossoming..❤️
Daarji (Adi's replacement😆) working for Mrs. Devi for 2weeks.. 😉Hope he has a wonderful time..😆
Adi-Pinky are so cute..😊
Pari-Brij being an item..didn't see it coming..😲😆
Well Opposite Love it is..😃
Wonderful Story..👏👍🏼


Hope you write a new Spy Adventure..😃 Maybe Mission 50.. 😆
Edited by m32223 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Now for the spy gadget analysis( Just for fun😆)
-self destruct messages
-satellite imaging
-hi-tech phones and watches
-spy cams
Might have missed some..
Except Pinky's gadgets or lack of it..😆
Missing hi-tech cars due to recession (Geet's reason)

Has been too long since I watched spy flicks .. Any suggestions/favorites??

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