MG OS: 'Adhoori si ek Kahaani'

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

wonderful surprise Akriti

loved tis os
when u will update ur iother worjk
pls update its request

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

good to c u back...amazing as usual...

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

An Amazing Just Fantastic OS

I have to admit at first I thought what type of person is this Geet about how can she just want to be with three different men and on top of that she is also married until I read that Maan has a personality disorder and that has to be really difficult for Geet because at one time she has to be with Angad than Armaan and finally with Maan as her Maan her husband and she too has split herself up into these three just to get back her husband and make sure he gets cured

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saf24

@saf24

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

A really nice concept and well written OS. When we love someone, we love all of them and Geet proves how strong her love is but loving Maan in all his forms without any form of complaint but just the hope that one day things will get better. Fantastic job

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

WOW!! beautiful os dear...loved it

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

fabulous concept..

Geet is flirting with Armaan and Angad...but in reality she is flirting with her own life..
handling different personalities differently with equal zeal, emotionally involving with each one and getting them emotionally involved knowing he is the same person, her Maan...it is not only tough but a very complex and mentally stressing act for her own self..but she is doing it for her love..

each scene with Armaan, Angad, Maan was distinctly different showing their different persona, and apparently makes it look like Geet is flirting with them..but when I read it again, could find another perspective in Geet's behavior like she mentioned as if treating each one with equal respect, attention, love and care...
looking at her determination, can't help but to assume one day she gets her Maan back fine..beautifully written.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

and the banner is wow..thoughtfully edited for the story.
Geet's smiling face despite the pain..and the three different personality shades of Maan with Geet..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

amazing OS...very different from the normal stories...

feel sorry for geet..

dealing with three different personalities...

loved the update...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Welcome back Akku and thanks for giving this OS on my birthday

OS is just mind bloeing..

I started to read and was confused..

I was thinking that the descriptions to MSK ke hain aur Geet usko Amy bula rahai hai.. she flirted with him.. and then Angad,...She started with him again..and I was like..kitni chaaloo hai,,

Phir socha abhi shayad Maan anhin mila usko..

But i was again shocked to see that she was Maan's wife only... and then I thought dhokha de rahi hai Maan ko.. But no..

when you started the Flashbacks.. I was like-OMG..poor girl.. Maan was suffering from MPD and she was ready to do anything for him/..she loved him a lot and was ready to bear face any danger for her.. he might be fatal too due to his MPD but Geet is having somke hope that he will be fine one day..and I too think so..

Akku ab aa gayi ho phir se gayab mat hona.. will be waiting for u to resume your old work

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bina_a

@bina_a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Hey! That's a wonderful story. This was one of my favorite stories from the book "love stories that touched my heart" - Ravinder Singh - written by new writers. So you wrote this story huh!! Nice. I didn't know when I read it

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