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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear 👏 .. maan seems getting drown in love with geet without realising anything ... the way he jealous ,attracted, worried,careful for geet clearly depicts a change has surely come in his personality .. funny dialogues are amazing ..specially saleel wale 😆 ... looking forward for more fun ... already waiting for next part 😛 ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
A jealous Maan😆 Jay ka accident karwa diya😲 Maan is really very dangerous !!!! he is so possessive about Geet but still won't acknowledge his feelings . He masks his feelings under that his care and protectiveness . Saleel did a masterstroke by giving Jay Geet's another number but that costed him
Maan cannot keep his hands off Geet ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ this possessiveness lead to Maan's acceptance out in open that Geet is his wife as they were dancing . He cooks for her , cannot see her in pain , gets jealous when another guy is close with Geet , wants her world to surround around him the why is he hiding what he did ? if he himself tells her she will understand maybe feel angry but its better than Geet knowing his motive from someone else
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Maan The cook.

Jealous Maan.

Possessive n lover, totally under magic of lov fr geet which he thinks is smthing else.


bechara jay.


saleel is rockstar.

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan cooked for geet
n all shocked seeing it
saleel stood silently as maan lied he didnt like nat sdeal from start
saleels j drama..
for geet n jay it is to make jays love success
but saleel is doing everything 2 make maan realise his love
simi n her big mouth
she told geet n jay r married n romancing..adding fire to already j maan
n even at home he heard geets half words with jay..
jays plan to dance with geet
maans j fired up
he hit jay by his car..rofl..hieght of his j n anger
maneet dance n geet asking about jay
she cribs on maan for hurting jay
n maan in his usual style shuts her up
saleel saved them from questions announcing them as hubby wife
n all shocked..
simi..ki tho earth slipped from feet..
maneet romancing in car..passionate
he can feel some changes in him..but its love he is yet to realise..
precap..dont say maan is going to take revenge now
n geet will be broken if she comes over it
awesome part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. Maan is jealous and he hit Jai. Maaneet dancing in the party and Saleel declare them Mr. and Mrs. Singh Khurana and all are shocked.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-17

Shefali lifted spoon to Jay mouth:please thoda aur khalo..mere lye.
Jay like an obedient student opened his mouth wide.She giggled & fed him healthy soup.Their "cuchy coo" disturbed by da ringing door bell.Shefali opened da door of his flat & found Geet standing infront of her.Giving her a sweet smile she let her in.
~ On entering da party hall Shefali witnessed dt mere accident & forgetting da world around she had taken him to hospital.Her brusting love made her accused him of which he replied wid a God promise:men sirf tum se pyar krta hun Shefali aur mene hmesha tumse hi pyar kya hai.Geet?We are just friends. .Infact wo to married hai.And they soon got da news "wo kis se married hai"~

Geet bit her lips seeing Jay laying on bed wid bandage wrapping around his fractured leg.Geet:JAY!!!

Jay instantly raised his hand to stop her in way:just stop there.
Their expressions were unexplainble. .Both were luking like school child wid their cute expressions..Geet was like'mottu..guilty on stoling his friend lunch while Jay was like hungry helpless chottu'
Jay dramatically:mujhe lga tha tum meri dost ho.
Geet in disbelief:JAY!.
Shefali:ofcourse she is. .sb s achi dost.
Jay:agr dost hoti naa to ye btana naa bhulti k tum us Jalad ki wife ho.
His reamining words stopped in his mouth noticing his Boss stepping inside from da open door.
Abruptly he tried to got up ofcourse forgetting da injury.His "aah" echoed around.Shefali & Geet helped him to sat properly.Shefali cheerfuly:Gud morning Sir. .aaey bhethye.
Jay gluped:Good morning Sir.
The way he remain quite & gave dt look was clear he had heard"Jalad" comment.But than getting Geet warnful look Maan uttered:sorry to see u like this. .hope u r fine now. .umm it was a sudden accident. .aan,Tk leave till u gt fine. .Dnt worry about da expenses..Company will handle it.
Geet & Shefali had content smile on their face while it was cleared in Jay eyes..da TRUTH of dis Man to Man talk.
Jay:thanks.
Shefali too joined him blushing:thank u so much Sir. .Wo mujhe bhi 2,3 days ki leave chahey.
Geet instantly assured:sure. .No problem at all.
Maan gave look to da instrument of social service.Checking his watch:better we should leave.
He went out while Geet stopped at door.Getting still angry look from her he irritated ask:now what?Jo bolne ko kaha wo bola naa!
Geet frowned:tumhe ab usko dekh kr bhi ehsas nhi?tum ne kitna galat kya?
His answer was simple & straight:jo mene smjha. according to dt mene use thok kr kuch galt nhi kya.
What a Logic!
Taking a deep breath she snapped:tum jao. .men nhe aa rhi hun.
Wid that she shut da door on his face.

~*~

"P.A itni dangerous bhi ho skti hai?..ho skti hai,agr wo Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khuranna ho!"was da thought dt came in his mind noticing his terrible schedule.8 meetings in a day..what a revenge! He fall back on his chair as Simi informed him about his next meeting in only 10 minutes.Due to dadi shopping plan Geet was today on leave too,so Simi was handling her work.Asking her to leave he himself checked da schedule notebook which made him realize "wo sirf pagal nhe hai. .pagal krti hai"
Maan in disbelief:aaj itni over meetings aur kal k lye kuch bhi nhi?
His eyes checked da calender & found tommorow date circle.He puzzled think about SPECIAL occasion but came wid nothing.He wanted to call her & ask but knew its all will go in vain.Because he noticed she was behaving so lost,so silent. .infact so weird from yesterday.
The familirty of digits tingle his brain & he took out copy of her C.V from da drawer.So tomorrow is her Birthday!

~*~

He didnt miss da sight as she abruptly placed da frame back in drawer on his entering in room.Quickly wiping her tears she got up from bed."men khana lagvati hun"she rushed out of room like a breeze but da moment was enough to note her swollen eyes & red nose.He pulled da half open drawer & found photo frame.Maybe of her last birthday where she was dressed as cindrella in circle of her family..Full of love & happiness.Which was not now wid her because of him.

~*~

She skipped dinner & when he returned to his room after managing some office work found her already sleep or maybe an act of.He slid in blanket of da other corner of bed & turned off da lights.
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Sleep was no where around him infact he was feeling so restless.Not because a sexy lady whom he can claim in every way was sharing his bed..In usuall tempting black night shirt.The silk had molded seductively on her hips just reaching her perfect size thigh.Her upper back reveled to his eyes,a strap falling losely from her creamy shoulder & long legs crossed..An exotic sight. But strangely dis time to him she was looking scareingly so fragile & sensitive.No doubt glimpse of her skin,her unique scent was arousing him but there was something eles troubling inside him.A strange bad feeling!
The clock strike 12 & in da silence of room changes in her breath was clearly visible to him.Instead her will tears slipped from her eyes.The crave of her family,their Love,their unbearble Narazgi became too much for her.Her lips trembled in controling her sobs as she rememberd last year..how Brij bhya jumped in her room wid cake right on 12.Dadu was da 1st one to gv her gift.Papa giftd her a car,mom's delicious food,Dj siningng only for her.And today not a single Call from any of them & she knew neithier will come because. .

She found his arm slipped around her waist,wiping her eyes she turned her face to him.She found herself lost in dose chocolaty ocean..usuall mysterious eyes full of worry,full of concern..full of LOVE.Her tensed heart finally beat & proudly admit her sin'because she is wid her Maan'
Hairs spread like a crown,swan neck following by a deep cut style where da full mounds were gloved in transparent material leaving less to imagine.But his eyes were glued to da most beautiful face.Her angelic innocence filled eyes had helplessly captured her.He can say his special lines about birthday which he had been using since his dad death"birthday to chote bche celebrate krte hen. .what rubbish,what a joke. .Are u crazy? e.t.c" But da words refused to cross his throat.Or da demon inside him using these two cheesy words can enjoy a plesaurble thank you whole night..But the great liar found his tounge tied.

She let her head to rest on his upper arm.Continuous to drawn in eachother eyes dy maintained da silence.His hand pushed away silky hairs to side.His touch,his scent she found herself so powerful in his warmth.The rush of pleasure & emotions,tenderness & fire drove out every rational thought from her.He whispered what happen?
Strangely her lips streatched in a beautiful smile"tumhare elawa mujhe kuch nhi ho skta.sb kuch tum se shuru tum par khtam"
She raised her face & sealed her words by taking her mouth in his.Her hands wrapped around his neck while his fingers lost in her hairs.He let her on her own.As she pushed him back on his back she continued to tk lead.Planting soft kisses on his handsome face to his jaw to hi neck.While her hands were pushing away da holding of his shirt.The sensation of her softness in dis rough way made him even more aroused.He again captured her in kiss.His mouth worked so soft..cressing dn pleasuring her lower lip & dn da upper one exploring her satin mouth,full & deep.His huge body overpowerng her & his lips feeding deliciously makng her lips escape sound of pleasure.She felt every pulse of her blood drove out everything but urge..urge of him.His touch,his warmth,his love.
Kissing her throat his hand slipped under da fabric wrapped her waist in a tight grip.The way he moved felt like a rage to her.He was so static,so controlled when she was so thrilled to feel his abondon,wantd to melt in recklesness of his touch.Bitting his earlobe she acted to provoke him which he replied by teasing soft flesh of her mounds.Like a whimpere she pleaded"please Maan".How much he love to have da tigress on his mercy.Then he finally rewarded her in a way which pulled out moans from pit of her stomach.The drugged feeling of being complete.
Her delicate hands wrapped around him.Wid a low whisper she added:mujhse kbhi dour mt hona. .I cant lose u.
Her words had nt any special reason but his silence some time gave her some kind of negative vibes,a fear.She looked up from arms of his cage.Her beautiful eyes asking for assurance which even their early session could nt able dt emptiness in her soul.To him she was looking like a lost bird,a fish out of water,a lonely rain drop.How can he assured her a thing when he himself was nt sure of?
He pulled her closer & she found her hand pressing his firm pectoral muscle, her legs runing da length of his & his body heat pooling around her like a secure blanket.He didnt knew what came over him which made his lips sooth her forehead.The simple but meaningful gesture brought a shimering strenght in her.
~*~

Tina worriedly:lagta hai Geet ne hmari shikaxt krdi.aur ab sir ne hme fire krne k lye bulaya hai.
Riya:tu kuch acha nhe bol skti?
Mina:use kya dant rhi hai.to kya sir ne hum sb ko ekhte sir ne modeling k lye bulaya hai?
Simi elbowed them as Maan walked inside & tk his seat.Colours of 'titlyan' getting pale by each passing moment.Finally Maan broke da silence:tum sb Geet k friends ho na?
They remain quite while Riya mumrd:usko to ye hi lagta hai.
Getting their slow nod he added:umm. .Phr to tum sb ko chuti chahey ho gi.
Their faces dropped on da thought"lo ho gai hmesha k lye chuti"

~*~

Even in evening Geet remain in bed due to her headache.Getting tired of walls she walked out & strangely found da surrounding empty.She came downstair which each corner was deserted.Than suddenly feeling da noise she went outside in lawn wid a jumping heart.Her slows steps picked pace getting flattering lights coming behind of gazebo.As she pulled da curtains away & da sight made her gasp.
"Happy Birthday Geet" was written on A delicious chocolate cake decorated by colourful candles.Her spell broke by a loud "happy birthday wishes"
In shock she turned & found dadi,Marry,Saleel & Simi,Riya,Tina,Mina,Shifali wid gifts in their hands.Tears of joy fall from her eyes as dadi took her in blessful embrace.Dadi:janam din buht mubarik ho.pagli btaya kyun nhe tha?Saleel wished her wid a bow as dy parted:happy birthday bhabi jaan.
Geet playfuly hit him & dn gv him a friendly hug.Saleel:par ye shkayat hai.agr pehle se bta deti to arrangments aur high standard k hote.aur Aur bhi ache gifts milte.
Dadi:iski sahelia(friends) na aati to hme to pta he nhi chalta.
Geet attention drew to group of girls.She stepped down of a gazebo & walked to them.An awkward silence followed as it was their 1st meet after her true identity revelation.Simi extended her hand in a formal manner wid her eyes lowered:Happy Birthday Ma'm.
The way she whispered"Simi" made her look up.Geet face shining wid glow of innocence:I am Sorry.Her words made all of them look up in disbelief.Geet contnud:i had lied for some personal reason..par phir bhi jhoot to jhoot hota hai.mene galt kya.Par please i dnt want to lose my precious friends bcox of dis mistake.
They stared in disbelief da beautiful fairy..away from any ego,proud,revenge.Riya thickly swalloed:tum sch men hme apna dost manti ho?
Mina:hum tumhe tang bhi to buht krte the,to
Tina added:hum se hmare kisi behaviour k lye naraz nhe ho?
Shefali remain quite as she had already appoligzd & thankd her in Jay apartment.Geet smiled lovingly:u all r like my family.mene buht acha time spend kya tumhare sath.aur choti moti khtpath to har jga hoti hai.
Simi voice heavy wid emotions:tum sch men Maan sir k lye perfect match ho.
Than to her surprise simi hugged her & da other girls joined them wid an honest love & respect.The girly giggles echoed around.After saying them a warm thank you she asked:tum sb ko kese pta chla aaj mera birthday?mene to kbhi nhe btaya.
Simi opened her mouth happily:Maan sir se. .unhune ne hi in sb ko chuti le kr yahan arrangments krne ka bola because he wanted everything of ur taste.aur friends se zyada aur kise pta hoga choice ka?
Shefali excitdly added:aur mujhe bhi call kr k bulaya. .aur full permission bhi di hai whole night party,movie,dancing. .He realy loves u alot.
Then her eyes met him..standing few feets away from them.But still she can fell him,his love,his warmth around her.Saleel loudly:jaldi aao cake aur bhi thanda ho rha hai.
The girls went but she remain there.While she remain stunned"jb pta tha to kal raat ko kyun wish nhe kya?kya jaan kr state ho?Kya krte ho?Kyun krte ho?. .Kitne ajeeb ho.Par phir bhi mere ho"
Her heart dreamily weaving his way of wishing birthday as he walked looking in her eyes.Before he opend his mouth,he noticed a sudden change on her face.Her eyes grew bigger in shock dn in surprise & dn wid Happiness.Passing him she run,he turned & found her in arms of his dadu,Sukhvindar Handa.

Worry on dadi & Saleel face was clearly visible noticing Maan sudden stoned face.The raising anger was reflecting in his eyes.While Geet was in her own world.Her happiness was beyond limit.Geet:aap ne mujhe kyun nhe btaya aap aa rhe hen?
Dadu patted her cheek:to phir surprise kese rehta?Aur meri Geet ka birthday ho aur men sath naa hun to aesa kese ho skta hai?
As she looked behind him dadu informed her ay pointing toward his bag:men akela aaya hun par sb ne gifts bhejen hai. .Brij ne bhi.
She smiled but it soon vanished as she noticed Maan expressions.

Precap: Sukhvindarr-men janta hun tum ne Geet se shadi kyun ki hai?men use bta dun ya phr tum khud bta do?

Plx do comments. .Dnt forgt to HIT LIKE.
Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago
me again first😊🥳
Awesome update.
Maan is sooo carrying for geet hope maan never hurt geet...
maan not apologize but say what she told him to do .wow Geet birthday.Loved the way maan made her friends celebrate her bday. Darji know every thing 😲 waiting for next.
Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb maan loves a lot with geet,he really a hat ke hero I really love his character a lottt.Ohhh dada Jee know all truth yipeee now maan Geet ko kbhi hurt nai kr pate gaaa Bcoz woh Usey khona nai chaye ga .I loved it a lottt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear. Maan is so carrying hope he never hurt geet .Geet birthday. Darji know every thing 😲 waiting for next. Update soon dear 😊

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