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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all love saleell..he indeed is a true friend and wants only happiness for him he does not like maan treating geet badly...he also likes geet a lot and considers her a sister...aww brij feeling bad for geet...so glad maan gave it to rishi..waiting to see what he does now
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Posted: 10 years ago
haww..what an update yaar 😉
maan ne toh band baja di rishi ki..he truley deserved loads of punches..Itta kaafi ni tha uske liye :3
Thankgod he finally cared for geet..awww 😃
how much he loved her that could be easily reflected 😊
Waiting for nxt update..more maneet romance 😊
Pls do pm abt the update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

last part was sooo cute.


so he anounces her as his WIFE.

wat abt rumour in office :p

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
his truth will kill her
his revenge will dig her grave
he is holding on to past n ruining their present n future
he never tried to find truth his blind trust on his father will drown him
he dreamed abt his father its said n when we r doing something wrong its like they want to guide us on right path but will he realize bef its to late
love without trust can't survive
he will break er trust in worst way i guess
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG such an emotional update

I was terrified seeing his anger

Wonderful update

Loved it


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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 15


The fight between love and hate within Maan is very well portrayed.

Loved the integrity of Saleel's character showing him the mirror and telling him what was wrong and what was right.

Geet is set up for a lifetime of pain if he goes through shattering her innocent trust

Jay and Shefali are 😆 pata nahi kya hoga in dono ka.. rollercoaster ride pe hai

Sorry for late comments

laptop has crashed

tech support is not able to come till Fri or Monday

finally was able to work with an older pc

Thanks for updating 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was fantastic update... full of emotions...

Maan's anger... Geet's pain.. if maan is planning to take revenge.. then wht will happen to Geet then...

waiting for next udpate
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part-16


She turned da knob to step outside of washroom & found him standing infront of her.She confused look at him hearing his "pagal ho?" instead of a sweet "Good morning".She followed his gaze which was on her bandaged foot.Maan annoyed:tumhe rest krne ko bola tha naa?
Geet innocently:men washroom hi to gai hun?
Maan wid his usuall stubborness:haan to tum mujhe bol skti thi.
With flushed face she reminded him:washroom men FRESH hone jate hen..
aur akele jate hen.
Before he could argue,he got a shy glare coated wid anger.With help of wall & one foot she walked to sat on bed.While he was lost;he had no idea a girl could look so breathtakingly beautiful in early morning.Her hairs messed & eyes heavy because of last night sleep.She was still dressed in a lose T-shirt which he had slipped on her but now wid addition of a knee length short too.The shirt was big for her causing her one shoulder to bare.Her wild hairs,her crossed legs,her creamy skin. . .Suddenly a desire of grabbing her & kiss her all over came on him.Then his dark eyes noticed her change of expressions..from 'you are impossible' to beautiful smile full of affecition-intensity of which reaching her shiny eyes.
To her surprise he turned away from her.Maan:medicine time par lo gi,to wound jaldi heal hoga.
She remain quite..reading his each move & action-stammering,hesitation,resistance like a caged lion;so unlike of him.She remain still as he extended da pill.Her mischivious tone coated wid innocence:agr chahte ho men aur beemar ho jaun to phir de do.
To his confuse look she answered:khali peyt dwa khaungi to beemar hi hongi. .buht zoro se bhook lagi hai.
The way he embarrassed was pricelss to her."men Marry ko bolta hun kuch khane k lye laey gi"
She brust into laugh as he stormed out of room.

~*~
"sare pagal mere ghar men" he came inside wearing his usual frowns.Changed in comfortable clothes she luked at him.Maan annoyed:pta nhe ye Marry ko rkha kis lye hai?jb kam hota hai,hoti he nhi.Naa to Saleel ghar par hai naa to driver.men khud kuch lata hun.
Geet made face:par mujhe bahir se kuch nhe khana. .mujhe to tomato omelete hi khana hai.
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From his arms he placed her on kitchen counter.Her twinking eyes & big smile was evidence of her excitement.She hardly control her laughter watching eggs in da Great Maan Singh Khuranna hands.His expressions like allien in other universe.She couldnt stop herself anymore as he chosed pressure cooker from utensils.Geet:cooker nhe. .do hi ande hen,pan kafi rhae ga.
Maan cleared his throat:haan. .i know.
Than her doubt clear when he luked between knife & opener to break the egg.Geet in horror:men bna lun?
Maan angrily:mujhe aata hai.
The ever egocentric Maan Singh Khuranna!
Geet lost:haan wo to mujhe dikh rha hai.
But dn she chosed to use her way:mom hmesha kehti thi,centre men chmch se crak kro to aaram se toot jata hai.par men hmesha galt hi todti thi.
Using her trick he succeeded in pouring dm in bowl safely.Geet continued:jb mene 1st time bnaya tha to bhr k chmch namak dadl dya tha,isme to chutki kafi hota hai.
Maan gave her ofcourse look & did what she told.

Using help of her tales he finally cooked omellete in 1St Time in his Life.They both sat across da breakfast table,filled wid cookies,bread & juice.Cooking is realy a kind of therapy which always touched nerves of brain.Maybe thats why he was feeling some kind of exam going through when she took its 1st bite wid her fork.
Does anyone know hottest Maan Singh Khuranna can look dis terribly cute?Love happen only once but dn how she fall for him again & again.His expressions changed in relief when she licked her pink lips"delicious"
Geet:yummy,is se zyada delicious omelete mene kbhi nhe khaya.Buht hi tasty bnaya hai TUM ne!
After a moment of silence they both brust into laugh,on the truth dy both were avoiding.She found herself in kind of spell hearing his laugh for the 1st time.She luked at da most handsome man on earth dreamily as he confessed like an honest child."men kbhi soch bhi nhe skta tha cooking itni tough hoti hai. .aesa feel ho rha tha jese koi project ho.kbhi zrurt hi nhe padi ye sb ki.Dad ko shoq tha..
Wid a heart stolen smile he added:men mna krta tha,phr bhi mere lye cake bnate hen.aksar jal jate the par mere lye world best hote the.
He found her hand on his:aur ye omelete mere lye world best hai..buht special.

" It realy happened?"that was his reaction on sudden realization.How her eyes,her smile cast a spell on her?made him forgt da whole world & pulled him on cloud of happiness.
The realization of against power made him think for a excuse of escape but than it became nearly impossible to him.Taking half bite from da fork she extended same piece to his mouth which he instantly accepted.It was visible in intensity of his eyes he got her..unique taste of her in it.His eyes liogered on her as she put da empty fork in her mouth..enjoyng da TASTE.Sight of lucky fork sliding between her lips gave birth to an urgent urgue-to replace it with something better!

They luked around in shock hearing Saleel:"disturb to nhe kya".
Maan stood up on sudden entry of Saleel,Marry & dadi maa.
Geet face glow in surprise:dadi maa!
She wrapped arms around sitting Geet lovingly.While Maan complained to Saleel:mujhe to yad dilana tha aaj dadi maa ko lana hai.
Rain of dadi maa scolding started:haan wo bhi koi yaad dilaey..tum to smjh rhe the mar gai kbhi wapis hi nhe aaey gi.apne elawa tumhe kuch yaad hi rehta hai?meri bahu ka to khyal rkha nhe jata mera rkho ge.
Geet quickly defended her husband:chot to meri apni galti ki wja se lagi hai.mera khyal to rkha hai,mere lye omelete bhi bnaya hai.
Maan wanted to recite some disappearing mantras in result of da shocking look dy gave.Hiding his embarasment he cleared his throat:mujhe office k lye late ho rha hai.


~*~

Maan narrowed his eyes:letter bhejne ka to mene Geet ko do din pehle kaha tha,usne Jay ko nhe bola?
Simi finally got da most awaited chance:sir jb wo dono sath men hote hen to kaam kaha yaad rehta hai..ab office men kaam k bjaey romance hoga to aesa hi hoga naa?
Coffee split out from his mouth:Miss Simi!
She jumped back hearing his warning tone:wo dono ek dusre ko pasand krte hen. .Shadi bhi kr..Jay ne mujhe khud btaya hai.
Maan annoyed:u can leave,tumhari tbyt theek nhe hai.
Simi:par sir?
Maan:shutup! & get out.
He shook his head.
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"sirf Wikram k force krne par men Natasha,Rishi k sath deal kr rha tha. .wrna wo to mujhe pehle hi pasand nhi the...ek excuse mil gya ye sb khtm krne kaa.to islye mene.acha hua..tum sun rahe ho na?"
He asked Saleel whose eyes,whistlings,grining & dt "oo ho" attitude had been driving him crazy since morning.Saleel looked up from his file to his best friend..da greatest liar of world.How neatly he was trying to change the angle of his deed.Renaming his care,his possesiveness by another business skill.
Saleel calmly asked:tum mujhse baat kr rhe the?
"bhgwan aesa dost dushman ko bhi mt dey"that was exactly Maan expressions.He snapped:u know what?Go to hell!
Saleel gave him big smile:thank u for ur idea. .par aaj meri chuti nhe hai.
Maan got up from his seat,irritated:ye jo tum kr rhe ho naa use bnd krdo..mujhe gussa islye nhe aaya tha dt i was possesive or jealoused.mujhe koi fadak nhe padta.Its just dt I hate Rishi aur wo usko hurt kr rha tha.usko humilite kr rha tha..mtlb galt tha,nhe krna chahey tha.
Wid stumbled words he add: aur subha men bhi mera khud ka mood tha..uske kehne par nhe bnaya mene.sari dunya cooking krti hai to men nhe kr skta? Is se zyada kuch nhe hai!
Saleel wid fake innocene:mene to kuch nhe kaha.

The knock on door stopped Maan to strangle his neck.Jay came inside for Maan sign on documents.While Maan scanned da paper Jay asked Saleel:tumhe pta hai aaj Geet kyun nhe aai?
His voice was slow & polite like it should be in a boss office.But still it reached Maan's big ear.Leaving da file he stared at Jay who was busy in his convo.
Saleel:shayd uski tbyt thek nhe hai.
Jay:par wo call bhi recive nhe kr rhi.kuch bhi wo mere kal ka to hmesha answer krti hai.tumhe exactly uske hostel ka address pta hai?

Maan didnt understand why Simi words rang in his mind.Than a slide show of Jay & Geet together played in his mind..From da 1st day when he gave her lift,In canteen,in library even in da pub!
Than Saleel eyes fall on Maan who was lost in his own world.Saleel doubt cleared when Maan snapped with irritation:Mr.Jay.mujhe is document ki copy chahey.
Jay:already copied.
Maan annoyed:mujhe ek aur chahey.
Jay nodded & dn add:sir Geet ka bhi jo aaj ka kaam hai aap wo mujhe bta dey.
Saleel curiously watched as Maan temper raised:kyun tumhare khud k krne k lye kuch nhe?ja kr library se sare finance law se related books le kr aao.
Jay gulped down on his boss sudden reaction.About to leave but Saleel did his final test:Geet ka dusra no. hai tumhare pass?
Jay:nhe. .please de dena.
He went out while Saleel didnt miss da boiling anger on Maan face.
Saleel mind worked on his evil plain "Ready,Steady,Go!!"

~*~

He returned home in da end of exhuasted day;physically & emotionly.dadi maa was sleeping because of her medicine,Wikram did not returned from da party night..ofcourse angry on what he did.Saleel still not returned from da meeting with event organizer.The reason of meeting was Masqurd party-a yearly celebration of his whole staff,in next week.Like every year Saleel had charge of it.Sliding off his coat from shoulders he opened his room door slowly,not wanted to disturb da sleep if she was in any.

But da sight just blew away his mind.A soft pink towel wrapped around her curves to her to her lower thigh.Her exposed skin so creamy so irresistble.And her face wid wet hairs around just like a blosom rose wid rain drops on it.Than her musical laughter echoed around which made him realize she was busy on her call & not realized his entry.Locking da door silently he headed toward Geet who standing wid her back to him.She sweetly:thank u Jay.
Well he remembered Maan Singh Khuranna never care but still he couldnt help to irritate.She continued:tum ne Saleek k hath itne pyare phool bheje hen unhe dekh kr to koi bhi theek ho skta.
His annoyed eyes got sight of fresh red roses bouqet wid a loving card.
She giggled:jb tum kisi se itna pyar kro ge to use kuch to asar hoga naa.
She jumped back in shock finally noticing him.Wid a quick bye & promise of later call she ended da call.
Geet shocked:tum kab aaey?
He replied:jb tum busy thi.
She bit her already plump lips not because of she had single idea of whats going on in his mind but because she suddenly realized her state.Her long eyelashes heavy,colour increased to her cheeks...ofcourse she was not aware how turn on he feel noticing his effect on her.Her big eyes roamed around execpt him:pehle se buht theek hai..ek do bar aur bandage kr k theek ho jaeyga.
She tried to pass by him but his hand grabbed her arm.His single touch,his closeness made her feel things dt she never think she would be capable of..Sensational,Wicked,Pleasureble things dt always drew her to him,dt told her to submit.But NO! Not dt easily When he was keeping distance from her.

Trying to free her arm she insisted:fresh ho kr aao. .aur mujhe change krne do.
"men krdun"always selected words & dose dark eyes. .will she ever understand him?
Making her sat on bed when he picked up da Aid-box she came to know what he was talking about.She didnt gt chance of argue when he kept her foot on his lap.A sweet,innocent act of care but she was feeling all forbidden sensations.Maybe it was fault of his eyes lingering on when just a single piece of cloth around or his hot look.She bit her lip when his fingers creased her foot & dn hold her ankle.She clentched her towel strongly as his fingers traveled up to her leg.Litting da fire on her leg to her thigh he leaned closer.

He gently took her face in his warm hand & ran his thumb along her lower lip.Her big eyes were locked in his which became almost black.She let out a slight gasping noise as he bent toward her & nipped her bottom lip wid teeth,dn ran tounge along it.Her mouth opened in anticiptionn but he pulled away.Hiding his face in crook of her neck he inhaled da exotic after bath scent.Her hands rested on him in effort to stop him:..chodo,dadi maa bhi hen ab to ghar par
But than her words were cut by wid her own moan as he kissed delicious skin of her neck..shaking da sensitivity of her earlobe.His hand took hold of her & his wicked mouth opened her.His tounge danced in his own rhythm in da magical warmth of it.Her back touched wid da silk sheet & her eyes fall shut as his hands adore her feminity.Her fingers slipped in his silky hairs as his mouth replaced da path of his hand..Leaving marks on her velvety mound.
Moan escaped from her in da cruel sensation produced by him.She opened her heavy eyes as he stroked her cheeks.His eyes were filled wid strong,promising intensity.Then his sexy voice demanded:say my name. .say Maan.

Strong emotions seemed to appear dt he couldnt understand.An amazing feeling of possesion.She never even thought of da edge,she experienced by his words.Roughly kissing his mouth she continued her kisses along his jaw to his throat.Her nails left patterns on her exposed chest.Grabbing her wrists he again pinned her beneath him.Their hands worshipped eachother sensualy.Their senses was on fire dt could brun.Finally ending da torture she closed her eyes & whisperd his name like a worship:Maan. .

She felt her soul lifting..da way he touched her,kissed her,made love to her felt so different.He leaned his forehead to her enjoyng da thrilling experience.He couldnt put in words but accepted from his heart. .Something has changed!

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He looked up at her from his file. .One hand carrying numerous open files,while da other busy in writing,beautiful eyes scanning laptop.He reminded her in his usuall sacrastic tone:dadi maa ne tumhe office aane ki permission di thi,kaam krne ki nhi.
Still engrossed in papers she answered:kahan kaam kr rhi hun,Saleel ki thodi si help hi kr rhi hun.itna sara kaam hai party ka.
Strangely he was da 1st who shut da file hearing bell:bs,lunch time hogya.
Keeping down da file she replied:tumhe jo khana hai men bhijva deti hun..men canteen men hi lunch kr rhi hun Jay k sath.
Too busy even for giving a look she went out while he remain paused.There was no surprise or shock on his face.It was completely clear cut 100% ANGER! which made him shove his file on floor.
Saleel hardly control his laughter seeing him from glass wall of his cabin"chlo is ROCKET k peeche bhi kisi ne aag lgai".
From da last 3 days(since she joined da office again) Saleel was enjoying Maan state of helplessness hearing "jay k sath lunch,jay k sath coffee,jay drop kr dega,jay kb aaeyga"How he wished to enjoy dis amazing sadu expressions of his akdu friend wid popcorn & coldrink.He had to cover his grin noticing Geet & Jay approaching him:tum yahan ho?hum kb se tumhe dhundh rhe hen.Next plan start nhe krna?
Saleel gave her a nod while Jay sadly:mujhe bilkul acha nhe lag rha Shefali ko aese pareshan krna.jb se tumhare kehne par men Geet uske samne couple hone ka drama kr rhe hen. .wo kitni zyada dukhi lagti hai.
Saleel:stupid. .islye to hum kr rhe hen.hum sb ko pta hai she likes u too.par usko realize krane k lye push krna zruri hai.Aur jealousy best weapon hai.
Grabing his shoulder Saleel assured:dekhna ab is jealousy k pressure se kese uski mohabbat phat phat k bahir aati hai.
Geet brust into laugh while Jay jumped on his sudden action.They walked to canteen wid their devil grin while Saleel thought to himself proudly" kis kis ka kya kya phat ta hai wo to waqt he btaeyga"

Riya luked at Shefali as she took mouthful of chips.Riya annoyed:tum to hmesha kehti thi naa tumhe Jay men koi interest nhe.wo tumhari class ka nhe to ab kya?
Shefali eyes were fixed on Geet & Jay who were enjoying their lunch in too friendly manner.She passed a big lump down her throat:haan.I dnt care.
Riya:to phir ye kha kha kr kiska gam mna rhi hai?

Saleel wait finally over as finally Maan came in canteen wid da priceless luk on his face.Continung his devil tactic he poked lost Maan shoulder from behind.Maan was suddenly taken back by Saleel questioning look wid losts of "aan. .wo " he answered:cabin men signal nhe aa rhe.
Saleel:tower jo yahan hai. .
Getting Maan confused luk Saleel pointed toward his cell:i think tum ise ON krna bhul gaey,meeting k baad se.
Giving him a glare he finally call Jay whose hand was resting on Geet shoulder.
His boss hard look & stoney tone was enough to made Jay stand:yes Sir.
"office time k baad hall ki final setting check kr k ghar jana"
He stormed out while Jay fall back,sadly:ye Sir mere peeche kyun padh gaey?. .is hafte men mujhse sare saal ka kam kra lya.
Saleel joined dm wid his ever charming smile:lgta hai tumhara KAAM unhe zrurt se zyada PASAND aagya!

~*~

Maan went to Party hall of his office to check out da finall setting on Saleel request.It had turned out to be some Royal ballroom. .perfect for da Maspurd party.Silk curtains hanging around wid ballons & ancient furniture whispering Saleel skill!
Proud on his friend Maan contently walked out but stopped hearing familier voice.Jay was busy in bargaining da asistant of event organizer"ye 6 no. card mene le lya aur ab yaad se ye card hi Geet ko dena"
The man assured him:"dont worry. .Geet will dance only wid you"

widout making any noise Maan quietly walked away from them.

~*~

Jay(on his bike) talking wid Saleel via bluetooth:bs ek bar dailouge revise kra do.jb mera aur Geet ka card same hoga aur Shefali phr bhi chup rhe to men khud us k pass ja kr bolunga. .chahey destiny mere khlaf ho ya ye sari dunya phr bhi men tumse apni dil ki baat keh kr rahunga. .
Saleel:haan perfct hai.par iski nubt he nhe aaey gi. .She herself will purpose u 1st.itna late ho gaey ho ab jaldi aao.
Jay:haan bs pouhnch he gya.
He enter in grand gate from side leaving space for his boss branded car coming from behind.Jay was parking his bike wid confusion as brakes were far da car was not even dropping his speed. And Than "CRASH"

~*~

All pretty ladies were dressed in silk dresses & da man in stylish suits wid sexy mask on their eyes.Music,Champn. .whats more required for a perfect night?The delicate hearts skip countless beats as Maan Khuranna stepped inside. .luking unbelively hot in black prince attire.The dreamy gazes drool over his muscular chest & proud shoulder.But da eyes on da most handsome face was busy in searching.And they shined wid a special glint when fall on her.
Even behind that seductive mask he recognized her.How couldnt he?. .Red silky material hugging her curves in seductive manner wid her soft curl falling on her shoulders.
Putting his black mask he stepped inside the hall & soon she approached him.Her mischvious nature made her try a trick.Changing her tone she pretended to be a stranger,greeted:hello handsome. .Looking nice with that mask.
Her naughty excitement blown out from some hole when he politely replied:but i'll prefer u wid out it..Without every single thread. .
Her eyes wided & lips pout on his sexy tone,hot words & those skilful eyes.Folding her arms she luked away:beshram logo ki beshram batien! kbhi koi romantic baat bhi kr lya kro?
Taking drink from da bartender he replied in formal manner:is se zyada kuch romantic ho ga. .Lady?
Geet wid sacrastic tone:haan jo uncensored ho. .par rehne den aap ye sb k bs ki baat nhi hoti.
Maan:tum buht khubsurat ho.
Her deep eyes shining wid a heat dt could burn.An unbeatble proud!

After few time da most awaited event occured.All were excited for their salsa partner chosed by destiny.Many hopeful heart dropped as their hot boss card matched with Geet.Simi,Riya,Mina,Tina was burning wid jealousy.Tina annoyed:what a luck. .
Mina:ye Jay ise smbhal kr kyun nhe lagta.
Riya:wo to aaya he nhe party men. .Aur pta nhe ye Shefali kahan hai?
Simi annoyed:Everyone. .Just go to hell.

Dim light. .Romantic music..hand in hand for an official dance,just like her dream.But still he could sense uneasiness in her.His gentleman hand traveled down from her waist to her hips making her gasp.
Swinging her spoke:tum buht khubsurat ho.
The words were simple but da intensity in his eyes made her heart skip a beat.
And than he added:tum ladkion ko khush krne k ley ek hi line kafi hoti hai..aur ladke aese hi dunya srr pr utha lete hein.
Making face she snapped:pta nhe men hr baar is DD k sath kyun phas jati hun.
Wrapping arm around her waist he swing her around:its fault of ur destiny.
Wrapping arms around his neck she answered back:ab tum destiny ko bhi double cross krte ho. .to koi kya kre?

Her sudden accusation made him suddenly stop.
But her addition gave him relief:ye card to Jay k pass tha,tumhare pass kese aaya?Bolo?
Instead of answering he asked in shock:tumhe pta tha?
Geet:mera hi idea tha.
Maan confused:kyun?
Geet eyes luking around for Jay,tensed:Shefali ko jealous krane k lye. .kb se to hum koshish kr rhe hen.aur aaj to men khud Shefali se baat krne wali thi.pta nhe dono hen kahan.

He tried his best to control but still she felt it.The suspious movement of his eyes,his distant body language.She narrowed his eyes:ye card tum ne Jay se lya hai?tumhe pta he wo kahan hai?
Getting no reply she decided in worry:men khud hi dekhti hun.
But he pulled her again in a way dt made her crush into him.For people it was a step of passion but now she was sure something is fishy.

"mujhe Jay ko call to krne do"
"wo call recive nhi kr skta..wo hospital men hai"
Her innocent eyes wided in shock:tum ne use mara?
Shaking his head he cleared"meri car ney"
Geet in disbelief:tum ne use thok dya?
"uski bike ko"
"aur wo khud bhi bike par hoga"
"ofcourse"

Geet:Maan. .you are just impossible..Kyun kya tum ne aesa u DD.

His face was calm infact a pleasent expressions enjoying da proximity.She struggled in his arms:chodo..mujhe tumhare sath dance nhe krna.
The struggle,her stubborness,his determination turned da dance in exotic salsa.Maybe it was dt arousing feeling of her against him or da delicious friction of their skin. .he found himself lost in unique scent of her.But she kept blabbering which he shush in his usuall style..by claiming her lips.
Her eyes grew wide,her delicate fists started hitting his chest but wicked magic of his mouth & clever hands of her soon worked which made her eyelashes fall shut.
Silence spread around & all of their mouth and eyes wided in result of their boss sizzling action.Saleel da saviour announced to wrap up da stuff:a big welcome clap for Mr. & Mr.Singh Khuranna.
They parted finally coming back on earth hearing Saleel voice.While da audience. .some of them frozed in shock & some couldnt hold their whisperings.
Riya in disbelief mumbld:pinch me. .plz pinch me.
Geet Maan Sir ki wife hai.oh God.
Tina in shock:ye sune se pehle men mar kyun nhe gai.
Mina:men to kbhe soch men bhi nhe socha. .
Simi in frozed state:Geet Maan Sir ki wife hai. .mean sir k sath sath ab Job gi gai!
The girls dramatically yelled:nhii.
~*~

Her face was still red,maybe in the embarrasment or anger on earlier event.Her glossy lips had completely visible pout & size of pupil reflecting her inner conflicts.He applied breaks but she remain still.
Maan breaking da long silence: i said naa. .It happened.
She looked at him like a wild tigress wid full sacrastic tone she snapped:tum mere nahate hue bathroom men jhanko,mere dance room men bottle todo,mujhe kahen bhi hath lgao,kuch bhi krao,lift men bnd krlo,date k lye blackmail kro,mere hote hue kisi aur k sath dance kro. .jb dil men aaey gusa kro,jb man kre tb pyar kro.Jay ka accident kya aur phir sb k samne kiss kya,kya introduction dya.ye sb AUR aur bhi buht kuch krke. .kehte ho its happened?
Hearing her backfire answer on his mot favourite sentence he simply replied:kaha naa around u..about u . .Its happend! nhe rok pata men khud ko.

Do u ever understand da meaning of "head over heels" in love?That what she felt at da moment.Here she had put all her energy in fighting wid him but his single effort were always enough.Those spell casting eyes,heart racing words..How easily da anger was produced wid flattering butterflies.
Looking away from him she folded her arms across her bosoms.Giving him the attitude "i am not going to step outside ever" she argued:phir bhi tum ne galt kya..tum aese kyun ho Maan?

Tingling on her neck create da doubt but da doubt cleared in assurance when she turned her face to look at him,instead of her heart warning.The golden brown eyes staring back her in a way. .which made her hand to open the door.After several tries she realized it was locked by him.

Her eyes were fixed on window but da vison got blured as his lips made contact wid sensitive skin of her neck.

"What r u doing?"
"What does it look like i am doing?"
He growled as his lips made contact wid her creamy skin.
Her hand struggled to push but instead she moan as his tounge lick her fragrant skin.Grabbing her earlobe his mouth traveled to her face,kissing each square inch of her.His fingers lost in her hairs as he pressed his lips on her.His hand pullf her hand from da lock & rested it on his chest..da way he like da most.But her hands soon slipped & wrapped around his neck as their mouth started to explore eachother.Nibling,sucking fighting da battle wid eachother.
Her head fall back in ecatsy as his hand pulled down da straps of her dress & his mouth continued to leave marks on her creamy shoulder.
From her soft mounds his hands slided down on her thigh taking their own time.When da cool air of ac stroke bare skin of her leg da current stroke her nerves.She tried to remond him:Maannn..ye car hai.

In da next minute his long legs took step to her side.The seat dropped flat wid a jerk in result of his button pressing.
Her chest heaved up & down..she found her soul caged in da force of his eyes.His mouth once again claimed her stoling da breath from her throat.
His passion showered on her in form of countless kisses.Her each cell throbbed in sensation of his forbidden touch.Her moans collide wid walls of car as he LOVE her in toes curling way!


When her senses finally got strength. .She open her eyes.And to her shock find herself on him,in their warm bed.Lifting her head from his bare chest she gave him a questioning look.To her dazed luk he reply wid one of his seductive grin:it happened!
It was must be some dhamki which she mumbled while snifng again in his chest.

No ande,tamatar. .Plx do pyare pyare comment if u like da updtxxfinger crossedxx

PRECAP: get ready wid seat belts.
Sory 4 kepping u wait. .thanks for reading

Precap- will post promo later.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww me 1st for the first time in your story
awesome update
I loved it. maan was getting jealous with jay. geet was helping jay to make jealous shefali so she opens her mouth and confessed her feelings. maan finally thumped his car with jay's bike. Poor guy is not hospitalized. maan kissed geet in the party☺️😳😳😳😳😳😳. Everyone was shocked. finally saleel announced them husband and wife.Maaneet passionate moment was awesome and hot. Waiting for next dear.
Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it ..jealous maan ne poor jay ko hi tok diya ...
mast update

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