MG FF : A TORN RELATION #5 //part 45(a) , 45(b) pg 20,25 jan 20

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

hi thanks 4 da superb emotional update! wonderfully written! Maan n Arjun talk! Maan apologises 2 Arjun 4 wt Ayesha did! Arjun assures Maan! Maan sed Arjn shld have told him! Arjun says Arohi is lucky 2 have Maan! Ayesha was obsessed with Maan! Past well incorporated! Geet calls n Maan smiles! b4 he can answer she cuts the call! Maan has a meeting n cannot leave! Maan calls Geet bt its engaged! update soon

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Awesome update. Heart to heart talks between Maan and Arjun. Arjun has noticed a change in Maan's behaviour nowadays. He knows Geet is the reason of his smiling face. Maan is guilty that due to him Arohi had to loose her baby. He id feeling guilty for his relationship with Ayesha due to which he lost many things. But Arjun consoles him and ask him to go to Arohi and talk to her. Maan remembers how Ayesha was insulting one of his friends when he came to meet her.

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kindlelover

@kindlelover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Maan is living in the guilt of being the reason of arohi's child's death.

The way you have introduced Ayesha in this update I can just hope that you are not planning her entry next few updates especially till both maan and geet accept each other whole heartedly.

Afterall our Geeet is still unsecure

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myrah shaikh

@myrahluvsk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

fab update

maan is guilty for arohi baby loss
ayesha is a culprit for arohi child death
maan told everything to his buddy
but arjun already know everything
maan n geet are fine now

waiting for next update

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MC092126

@MC092126

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Nice update
Maan told his past to arjun
He is guilty that because of him arohi lost her baby
Arjun no the truth before only
Too good update

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Nice Update

Nice conv, between Maan and Arjun, Maan consider himself the reason of Arjun and Arohi loss and still is guilty conscious , Arjun knows everything and told Maan to forget the past , Maan reminding his past that Aayesha was the one who was responsible for their miseries.

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Nice update

Arjun say maan confess his love to geet

Maan say he is the reason arjun and arohi lost her baby

Arjun say maan forget his past

Waiting for next update

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preeti

@pari1689

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

arjun arohi loss their baby...
geet want to talk to maan...
geet turning cute wify...
nice update...

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Maan arjun talkf cleared everything between them
Maan is not with geet geet wil be angry
Hope to see maan arohi together
Nice update

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Hey suhanna , i didnt read this ff from start..
Just come to know about it by ur pm..
Will soon start reading from part 1
Bt i read these two updattes..
So commenting on them..
Update was really nice..
Its all becoz of that cheap ayesha 😡 brcoz of which maan n arohi relation rruined n arohi lost her baby.
Arjun also revealed that he knows the truth ..
Nd also asked maan to talk to arohi n sought out everything..
This ayesha is sso cheap..
Her obession make her so blind n she insult maans frnd which is untolerable for maan..
Geet turing into cute wify..
Waiting for nxt part..
Plz pm me for nxt part n pw ifany..
I willtry to catch up previous part soon..
Thnks for the pm ..