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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it...I can see glimpses of maan's pure heart in his actions...hope he falls for her before geet does

Thanks dear.
Maan is not too bad nor too good. He's a normal human. Only thing he's after money and his business.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: SAI92

hope Maan understands Geet pain

I too hope so.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sanum23

Awesome ud

maan geet forced to marry each other
bcoz of their parents
geet mom didn't loves her is she hr real daughter
y she loves hr other daughters
maan told hr he is not interested in this marriage
so don't expect anything from this relation
geet like cooking and she always cook dinner
and maan like taste of hr cooking
geet fell sick and maan take care hr very well

Yup Geet is her real daughter but she favours her younger daughters a lot. She loves them because they are her favourite. Sanum this happens in many houses. When parents get 2nd or 3rd baby they forget to shower the love and care to the eldest .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: susm

Hai nice one I read all 2 parts n it's awesome. Both r married n forced to marry. Into now we got only Geet view Geet is carving for love but till now she didn't get. Now Maan is interested in business n Geet felt alone . Maan is rude but when Geet I'll he took care of her. Geet don't want to get expectations so maintaining distance. .

Welcome to the story dear.
Thanks for the lovely comment. Yes Geet doesn't want to expect anything now so she's maintaining the distance.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wow! Congrats for the new story. Superb story. Liked the way Maan took care of Geet in sickness, and Geet even though she was tired but made dinner for Maan's business friends. Desperately waiting...

Thank you so much Shashi
I have already updated chapter 2 dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
nice concept..loved geet's bold character ...maan a shrewd businessman but also took care of geet when she was sick...
nice updates😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

just read the two parts of the story, interesting concept...the world of businessmen, running behind success and more success...being ambitious is good, but may not be at the cost of losing the joys of being with their loved ones..

and here it seems Maan is not even aware of such happiness in life, and considers it as silly things...hope with Geet around he realizes it soon..
and Geet, deprived of the love and care from her parents is in the same situation after marriage..hope she does not lose the hope and be her own self, and things will fall into places soon..

Part 1

I loved Geet's attitude in the initial scene..Geet was like if he is talking business I better take it as a deal and pay for my expenses on my own...
but what is it with Maan that he thought not to introduce her with his friends.. I thought time and his career ambition are the major reasons for him to not look after his personal life..but seems he has some other issues as well with the marriage..so will wait to know his pov.

Thanks and welcome to the story dear.🤗I love your comment so much as you understood what I wanted to show by each scene and each dialogue.
Some people they go after their aims forgetting there's another world called family. Maan, is from that group. Not only him Geet's father too.
Geet is person who became a victim due to these aims of her father and husband.
Her mother stands for the parents who favour only one child or two leaving another child to shatter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 2

at least he spent time and took good care of her..
and he was worried for her, for her health..may be just for humanity sake now..
so there is hope.. and will change soon for sure..
wonderful start and both the updates...
precap is interesting...will Maan accept it, when she pays the money..



Maan is not too bad. He has some good qualities. Truly he has good qualities as well as bad. Yes there is some hope because of this.

Will see whether he accepts her money in next chapter. Sorry can't reveal it now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Amazing start .. Maaneet married but once again Geet expectations died because of Maan's cold nature but when she got fever he took care of her like a true husband but Geet knows that its only till her health nothing. else

Thanks dear. Geet doe not like to have hopes about love after what happened in her life and Maan is not too bad like her own father.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: raven1992

nice concept..loved geet's bold character ...maan a shrewd businessman but also took care of geet when she was sick...

nice updates😊

Thank you so much dear. Welcome to this story.
Thanks for the lovely comment and encouragement.

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